Wreaking Havoc Across the Heavens, Starting in Gotham

At first, DC Comics had a complete storyline, gimmicks, and a bit of ecchi content, which seemed really interesting. But starting with cyberpunk, it's all just gimmicks; there's no plot, no pretty girls. Now they just write a few chapters and then cut off the story to start a new world. Who's going to subscribe like this?

Poison Ivy

I felt the Batman universe was quite well-written, but the Dark World felt like a mess. It's somewhat similar to Phoenix, but Phoenix was written one movie at a time, so even if I hadn't seen them, I could still understand the main plot. However, the author mixed several movies together, most of which I hadn't seen, which confused me. Especially when the main and supporting characters from several movies appeared together and had conversations, I couldn't tell who was who at all.

The Phoenix's flavor was strong, but he's useless now. I declare you the new substitute.

Gotham was quite fun, but it became increasingly less interesting starting from the second world. It went from being a lighthearted and funny place full of fun to a clownish character who just wanted to cause trouble for the sake of causing trouble.

Having read up to Chapter 33, the humor and plot are still decent, and in fact, the plot is mostly humor. However, the gacha system is too abstract; out of thirty pulls, I feel like I only got one serum—things like the Doom shotgun or the Phantom Beast Paluk. Coupled with the protagonist's psychotic personality, I feel this book is doomed. Constantly relying on humor is getting boring.

It's alright, quite fun, but how long can you stick with a novel that relies on a bunch of jokes?

You scoundrel, author! I've subscribed to almost everything, and not only is your world-building getting increasingly boring, but you're also offering it for free for a limited time! How could you offer it for free for a limited time?

I'm halfway through, and there's just too much rambling. I haven't even subscribed yet, and it already feels padded. The plot hasn't moved much. Using references is fine, but well-placed references can enhance a book. Too many references, added in every situation, just become annoying. The plot should be driven forward where necessary.

I subscribed last year, how come you've only written so little by April? Weren't you among the top on the list last year? How did you fall so far?