Xiao Feng Transmigrates as Zhang Wuji

There is no such thing as a certain person who traveled through time and became a certain person. That's right, not a single one.

I'm just talking about my personal feelings, and I only represent myself. The character design of Xiao Feng is not very tenable. It can be seen that the author is not the type of person Xiao Feng in the original novel is in reality, and there are no people around him with a similar temperament to the original Xiao Feng. Knowing that he couldn't control it, he "took a trick" to merge part of Zhang Wuji's personality into one, but there was always a great sense of separation. Example: In Xiao Feng's original work, he never calls anyone "senior", and always calls himself "Qiao" or "Xiao"; he mostly calls others by "professional titles" or common titles, such as "Mr. Murong", "Prince x", "Elder x", "Master Feng", "Miracle Doctor Even if he sweeps the floor, he is just called "the holy monk" and never loses his identity. In this book, before the six factions besieged Guangmingding, Xiao Feng did not have many memories of Zhang Wuji. With the main character being Xiao Feng, he would not be a so-called "old man" due to emotions and reasons. The older people would just say "senior" - not to mention the title of Xiao Feng's "previous life" in the original work, he is about 200 years older than Zhang Laodao. If you are just a bastard, just say "senior", there is no trace of Xiao Feng. There are many similar points of separation. For example, the author likes to have Xiao Feng perform certain actions "respectfully", etc. There are also advantages. For example, the fighting scenes are very old-school martial arts, detailed but not messy, which is what the author is good at. Personally I think the plot design is average, especially in the later stages of Zhu and Wu and at the end. My personal feeling is that it's the kind of book that "can be read and played even when there are really no good books to read."

Although this outfit is not as classic as the black and white striped outfit, this outfit has the feeling of being an outsider.

With Xiao Feng's personality, it is unimaginable for you to have a harem. The character is shattered to pieces.

The content written about Tianlongbabu is not good. The Condor Trilogy spans nearly two hundred years, and The Legend of Heaven and Dragon Slaying alone lasts for a hundred years. If we don't explore the numerous subplots and characters, what's the point of spending energy on the content of Tian Long Ba Bu? That Lingjiu City is unnecessary and has no impact on the main plot? Doesn't it have any necessary connection with the world of Yi Tian Sword and Dragon Sword? Is the additional wooden grid really necessary? Can you write this character to the same level as the four girls in the original book? There are already too many female characters in Yitian. Is adding one superfluous? I don't doubt your writing skills, nor your ability to handle the plot. Can you be more cautious in choosing your route?

Brother, I remember that there was a flaw before the completion of the Nine Suns Sutra, which is that you cannot light up the blue bars, otherwise you will be discouraged and die. For example, Zhang Sanfeng's master, Monk Jueyuan , and Zhang Wuji used the Budai monk's Qiankun Qi bag to hold his luck in Dacheng. Brother, why don't you change it a little bit?

Whatever rubbish you write, return it to Xiao Feng. There is no distinction between good and evil. If others want to harm you, you in turn help the enemy complete the skills, with the intention of turning the enemy into a friend. What kind of crazy plot is this? If the enemy is so bad despite his poor martial arts, and you try to help him improve his skills, wouldn't it be lawless?

It feels like I have a God's perspective. Anyone who knows about Guo Jing and Huang Rong's deeds other than guarding Xiangyang City is already relatively knowledgeable. I dare say that except Zhang Sanfeng, others may not know about it.

If you're faster, it doesn't matter if you write more. It doesn't matter if you send me an original one. The worst is possible. You write so little about the relationship between the male partner and the original one with a named and surnamed Bull Demon. I really don't understand it. Yang Buhui, a twenty-year-old girl, doesn't like the male protagonist of the big succubus. Instead, she falls in love with a crippled old man👴🏻. She likes dads, so why doesn't he want to take a shower? It's awesome. I watched it all afternoon and I was so happy. Give me a mouthful of this and I'm really convinced.

Aura recovery version? Why are there so many original geniuses, even though they are young, they all look better than Song Qingshu and Zhou Zhiruo who appeared in the original work?