Myriad Worlds: The Yue Maiden A Qing from the Start

The plot is very exciting, keep up the good work

The author is slow to update, and he keeps spinning around in the same world, which magnifies his shortcomings. I basically skipped reading, and it didn't affect my reading at all. It can be said that it is too watery. He wrote some cool-looking words, but he was too self-indulgent.

From the very beginning when A Qing broke through three thousand armors alone, it was a distant mythical story, but in modern times, all the masters seem to have brought A Qing closer to us. I can only say that the Ah Qing written by the author is not the immortal Ah Qing in our memories, but the Ah Qing who only suits the author's taste. She is Ah Qing but not the Ah Qing we know from her hometown. It was said that the author wanted to use Ah Qing's flow to write her own story, but what they didn't expect was that everyone came because Ah Qing left and also because the author in the author's novel was not Ah Qing. When things have developed to this point, the author should stand up and say that he is writing his own story, and maybe more people will stay. I'll take my leave now.

Ah Qing can defeat three thousand soldiers with a bamboo stick. The great master Shuanglong of the Tang Dynasty is not so strong and can only fight in battle.

Why do I feel like so many people can't tell the difference between male and female videos? Either the male protagonist is a male one, and a female protagonist is a female one. This mainly depends on the writing style The protagonists of male videos are usually focused on their careers and have a bigger picture, while the protagonists of female videos are usually about love and career as a supplement. Anyone of a certain age who reads books should be able to tell them apart easily.

Ah Qing

It is known that Ah Qing was 16 years old when she appeared on the show. Her age when she left the show is unknown, but she is described as a girl, 18 years old at most. 18 years old, little knowledge, simple, illiterate or semi-illiterate. Adventure encounters, tutoring apes, but at most they can learn moves. However, just like that, he killed more than 2,000 people in the corridor with just one sentence. It shows that the body skills, speed, skills, and endurance are all top-notch, and finally the sword energy is used. An 18-year-old girl who has not been systematically trained is at this level (the mentor ape will fight whenever she meets, and at most she has rich experience in fighting the enemy alone), so how strong can someone with high-level elite education be? ! At least on the same basis, such people are rare.

Most of the people who read this book read this book because of the story about Ah Qing, a Yue girl. They, including me, have the impression that Ah Qing, a Yue girl, is a gifted person and the best in the world. After you become a disciple, let alone whether it is reasonable or not, and whether the writing is good or not, it will undoubtedly destroy the good impression of Ah Qing among readers. , There is no martial arts in reality, every teenager has a martial arts dream. If you change the name of Ah Qing to someone else, I can't say that your writing is not good, but the protagonist is the Yue swordsman Ah Qing. I will say that you are not in line with my martial arts dream, that's all.

A lot of people have said why they released male videos, but I actually think it's acceptable. First, there is no martial arts category for female videos. Secondly, should Jin Yong's Yue Nu Sword be considered a romance? Should I put it in the women's section of the bookstore? Isn't it also a martial arts novel with more male readers? This head was obviously started by boss Jin Yong. Thirdly, many novels, TV series and movies with heroines now have a lot of male readers, especially those without cp, not married, or Lily's audience is still more male.

Ah Qing. This kind of person has an incomprehensible understanding and has his own ideas about cultivation, so he doesn't want to become a disciple.

It's completely a martial arts training guide, with a little plot added. It's rare for an author to have so many roughly logical cultivation ideas, but is that too much? More than half of the 4,000-word chapter is about how to practice cultivation and some extracurricular knowledge. The more I read, the more tired I am, just like reading a paper.

This type of book is really rare. I have almost never seen this type of book since Endless Broken 🙂

Zhao Qing

Ah Qing is a born broken character, refer to the supreme master Ling Donglai

Stop writing about politics. . . It's too childish, but of course the martial arts, fairy tales and Jiang Hu are indeed well written.

I am the one who wrote the transformation essay. I will write it carefully for you.

Are you writing a novel? The thesis is not as verbose as yours. All that is needed in a novel is logic and plot. The more I read, the more tired I become. I have never seen such a popular writing 🙂

I have become a high-tech martial arts character. I am convinced. I am a martial arts character who has not fought in dozens of chapters. I am now engaged in scientific research and political power 😐

Why is the female protagonist posted on a male channel?

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Shi Yiguang

Wuyue Map

"Awakening of the Great Thousand" The star of Huanmei pivots on the Yuheng, and the wind and dew of Jiugai moisten the Xuanjing. The clouds are cut into the mountains and rivers, and the ice soul is condensed into the modern and ancient scales. The floating light in the mirage explores the destiny path, and the hidden light examines the course of the disaster. Looking at the beginning of the Yuan Dynasty when everything is silent, a reed crosses the river to cross the Taiqing River.

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These two are different from the normal Yin and Yang Tai Chi diagram. They have a special Yin within Yin and Yang within Yang

Probably when King Helu of Wu came to the throne

"The Hermit's Journey" Make a sword out of bamboo, and cover the staff with moss. The new rain washes the empty mountains. The tender bamboo is untied, and the green waves reach the sky. See the shadow in the cloud, the moon in the stream, and the fairy in the mist. The shoes are worn out and the green shirt is old. Recalling the past, my appearance has not changed. I met a woodcutter and chatted about the future. Sigh that half of the Xixia is old, a cup of snow is cold, and the smoke of autumn is lingering.

"Partridge Sky·Observing Life" I see the heaven and the earth come into being, I see the mountains and the sea sink. The green cliff chews the dew and eats with stars, and occasionally picks up the vast sky to decorate the empty door. The sun and moon hanging over our shoulders cast deep shadows, and the seeds of immortality fall and spring comes. Smile as the vegetation renovates the tomb, and a hundred thousand years grind it into dust. Why bother asking, false and true, spiritual buds and decayed vines have the same roots. Looking back after a thousand years, I will also be shaping the world with sand.

"Ci of Cold Carp" In the past, I did not care about Qingluo, holding a jade pot in my bare hands. Spring carps drag green clouds, and autumn carps live on dry boats. The wind dances on the gauze, soaked in fire and clearing away sorrow. You Meng suddenly started to wake up, and the cold light filled the west building. Su'e hangs her dark hair on her temples, and her sword becomes a hook reflected in the frost. White dew grows in the empty courtyard, and the remaining candles illuminate the konghou. I want to find old promises, but there is no crossing point in the moss marks. Ten years of peace and prosperity, don't forget the sorrow of old friends.

The Dragon Clan is a bit too long. The length of a copy of the world of the Heavens Crossing Stream is best controlled within 150 chapters. Some readers will skip copy that is not of interest to them. It is easy to lose readers if the article is too long.