Incense and Merit Immortal Dao

The previous fanfiction, *The Smiling, Proud Wanderer*, had a fantastic start, but unfortunately, the author encountered an unexpected event in their life, leading to a hiatus and a rushed ending, which was truly regrettable. However, it's clear that the author has a very solid writing foundation and unconventional ideas. After much anticipation and waiting for almost half a year, the new book is finally here! Keep it up!

This female character is really unlikable.

To be fair, the previous book, *The Smiling, Proud Wanderer* First, there are fan fictions, which have a large readership. People who like martial arts novels will click to take a look when they see the title because they are familiar with the plot and characters and it is easy to understand. Secondly, Lao Qiu's writing style and plot are both good.

When will I start reading the next one? Autumn. I was saying I'd save up a few before reading it.

Aside from the female protagonists in those old-fashioned martial arts films from the 1960s and 70s not being very popular, the rest were alright.

Keep it up! It's a shame you didn't get into your last year. 🌹

Actually, the author might be better suited to a martial arts novel or a fantasy novel set in multiple worlds. A Republican-era novel like "Under the Fist" could be a good reference.

Good book🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

Having followed the author's previous work, *The Demonic Cult Leader*, this book boasts a strong and steady writing style with occasional flashes of ingenuity, making it worth savoring. The main reason this book didn't perform as well as the previous one is because it was a fanfiction of *The Smiling, Proud Wanderer*, which already had a large following.

This theme was popular in the past, but nobody writes about it anymore; the audience is much smaller, and the writing style needs to be more considerate of the tastes of the younger generation.