Incense and Merit Immortal Dao

The previous Swordsman novel had a very amazing start, but in the follow-up, something unexpected happened in the author's life. It was a pity that the novel was discontinued and ended in a hasty manner. However, it can be seen that the writing skills are very solid, and the ideas are not unconventional. I have been waiting for it for almost half a year, and finally the new book is here, come on.

This female character looks really unpleasant

Let's talk about it, the last book Swordsman First of all, it is a fan novel, and it has a large reader base. People who like martial arts novels will click in and take a look when they see the name, because the plot and characters are relatively familiar and easy to understand. Secondly, Lao Qiu's writing and plot are good. The little boy grows up to be the big devil. It has a bit of a Machiavellian feel, and readers can continue to read it. Finally, the emotional drama is well written and Akina is a great driver. Having multiple female protagonists is also an attractive point, but you have to be very careful about the proportion, otherwise it will not easily backfire. For example, Lin Pingzhi's motherfucker is really a failure. Don't write the driving plot for a passerby. He is purely disrespectful and does not have the buff bonus of a noble concubine. To sum up, this book is basically reopened. Without a reader base, to be honest it's difficult to get up

When will I open the next book, Qiu? I even said I would save up a little and read it later.

Except for the fact that the heroine in the martial arts style of the 1960s and 1970s is not very popular, everything else is okay.

Come on ~ It's a pity to get this 🌹

In fact, it might be better for the author to follow the path of martial arts, or the path of traveling through the heavens. The book of the Republic of China, such as (Under the Fist), can be used as a reference.

Good book🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

Followed from the previous book The Demon Sect Leader, the author's writing is strong and steady, and there are occasional ingenious ideas in the article, which is worth reading carefully. The main reason why this book is not as good as the previous one is because the previous one was written by a Xiaoao fan and has a lot of traffic. However, the intention of this book is very good, and it can be seen that the author is building a grand world view. It would be a pity to give up because the results are not satisfactory. But having said that, the author also needs to make a living, so it is not impossible to open another book. I suggest you open a fan book and introduce the flow of the fan into this book. Deathrattle mortals were not popular for a long time. This book also needs a growth process. I hope the author will be more patient. After all, you cannot become a great god by writing fan fiction. Come on⛽

This subject was popular in ancient times, but no one writes about it now. The audience is very small, and the writing method should consider the preferences of the new generation.