A Multiverse Journey on the Astral Express

When the Star Dome Train arrives in Douluo Continent, it can only be said to be a big mess.

Bengtie's fanfics are basically a mess Because the power system of this thing is super idealistic, and the protagonists of most fanfics are, to put it bluntly, not even qualified to embark on their destiny. They are basically the template of a fast food protagonist, with no personality and no arc, purely relying on official sponsorship, and purely opening a harem. This kind of thing joins the Annihilation Gang, even worse than a prison prince, and wants to be an emissary.

Many people may be dissuaded by the plot of the previous Douluo part. In fact, the three views of this part are quite positive. The characters of the train crew are not crooked. There are some minor flaws but they can be watched. At present, these chapters of Yalilo 6 not only have a pure iron-breaking flavor, but also make many innovations, and do not completely follow the original plot. The main plot of Star Iron is slow to update, and the world view and side plots do not have enough space for fan fiction like Genshin Impact. Therefore, I think this writing method of interweaving the original plot of the railway and the world of opening up the heavens may be a way out for Star Railway fans, which can enrich the content to a great extent. The expansion of the heavens by the train crew will also cause changes in the main world of the railway, thus distinguishing the original plot of the railway and bringing a sense of freshness.

I think there is a big problem with this book now, that is, the world view of Star Iron is too strong, and the protagonist group is in a state of arrogance. This problem is especially obvious in One Piece. From the beginning, the characterization of the train was not to interfere too much with the overall pattern of the indigenous world. Then the protagonist group could not stand the fact that the Dracos let the slaves play battle royale, so they killed all the Dracos. The reason was that the Dracos had no effect on the world government and were purely burdensome, so they did not affect the world pattern. Then the World Government hunted down the protagonist group, and the protagonist group killed all the Five Old Stars and the CP organization, and sealed Im's abilities... I was really speechless. After the protagonist group left, the basic pattern of the pirates became: the world government was weak, the navy was intact, the pirates increased slightly, and the revolutionary army increased greatly. The structure of the entire One Piece world has been basically overturned by the protagonist group, and it is foreseeable that a world war will begin within a few years. Let me predict what will happen in the world of One Piece: the protagonist group breaks the myth of the invincibility of the world government, the revolutionary army begins to turn from darkness to light, and all forces are adding fuel to the fire. The navy will probably give the government a try in the final stage, or ignore the destruction of the world government. After the destruction of the World Government, the Navy and the Revolutionary Army had no basis of trust and each had their own interests and needs, so they would inevitably be unable to merge. In addition, the Revolutionary Army did not have that many people, making it easier for the Navy to take over the political legacy, and the world became divided into two major political powers. With development, rights will inevitably try to go one step further, that is, unify. The conflict between the two regimes will intensify and they will start to indulge the growth of pirates, because the pirates wanted by the other side are not our allies in a certain sense. Even if they can only cause some chaos to the other side, the pirates will slowly become more and more unscrupulous, and the victims will be the common people. Next comes war. I don't need to elaborate on the cruelty and sorrow of war. It can be said that the protagonist group has a share in all this. This shows that the concept of trains not interfering with the overall pattern is wise and correct. The protagonist group as a whole has fallen into the "chaotic good" camp. I think it's quite serious. It's basically fan writing OOC. Another point is that the author always arranges people to get on the bus, but does not arrange for people to get off. These people do not have many roles, they are extremely marginalized, and they are just a make-up. In the Pirates Chapter, Zhu Zhuqing said that he was willing to stay and deal with the aftermath of killing the Celestial Dragons. If he couldn't, he had to be taken away. Every time a person comes to this world, is the purpose of collecting stamps? If you want to lead, it is better for a pirate to lead Luffy than a ghost. Luffy fits well with Kailan, and his personality matches well with the protagonist group. It is recommended to open up new worlds with worldviews that are no less than those of Star Iron, such as "Problem Children Are From Another World", American comics, and "Morty and Rick". Go and hit the wall. Don't feel like a city dweller going to the countryside as soon as you open up the world.

Why would you, a Destiny Walker, play with something from an indigenous planet? 😅 Isn't this equivalent to lowering your own status?

Just write the train set. Others are green leaves. Douluo is just a piece of shit. Waiting for the author to finish writing the train set, I will quit.

😅Has Kesha's protection order been issued? To be honest, it would be incredible for a high-level destiny traveler.

I originally wanted to watch it, but I was immediately in awe when I saw the introduction, Douluo, Spirit Cage, Fox Demon, and Super God. These four alone can persuade a lot of people to quit. If you write the four of them together, you are like this👍🏻 I dare not read this book, I am like this👎🏻

I have read this book more than ten times, and every time I read about Douluo, I don't want to read it. Regardless of whether he is a hydrogen man or not, with Douluo's strength, any anti-matter soldier can kill him, and there is no point in going anywhere.

I don't mention this when writing Douluo. Help Zhu Zhuqing, help her cheat and change her destiny. Being kind-hearted is also in line with the character. In Douluo, she can still push the plot. But taking her on the train to collapse the iron is not understandable. Zhu Zhuqing is just a vase, with no ability and no character charm. She is not very good-looking, and her character design and development have nothing to do with her. I don't know what the use of writing about her is 🙂