Investiture of the Gods: Starting as a Marquis's Heir

It's alright, but the world is a bit small. It feels about the size of Earth, which doesn't match the worldview of Investiture of the Gods.

Is it the Investiture of the Gods or the Primordial Era? The Investiture of the Gods alone would be somewhat interesting.

Never become an apprentice; it lowers your status. As a transmigrator, don't you have any cheat codes? If you had Thunderclap and Bitter Realm martial arts, do you think you could kill the Twelve Golden Immortals and the Primordial Heavenly Lord, and even that old bastard Hongjun?

I've only read up to chapter 33, and it doesn't make any sense at all. Even a mortal could tell that he was faking his death, so how could he possibly hide it from the people in Heaven?

The novels written these days are all illogical. They say the protagonist has amazing talent, but with the same elixir, others at higher cultivation levels can advance their cultivation, while the protagonist at a lower cultivation level can barely advance one minor cultivation level.

In the Investiture of the Gods, combat power depends on three factors: high cultivation level, powerful magic weapons, and great supernatural abilities. (By the way, those who haven't transcended the Five Elements will be countered. Countering is paramount, especially against Sun Gods. 🤭)

The writing is poor, the protagonist is like a clown, and the attempt to impress feels forced.

It's alright, the writing is quite good, but the fact that Yang Tianyou, the main culprit, didn't die is a bit out of place. Changing it to Go (two-player, three-player) or Chinese chess would be better.

These latest chapters have even included a literary duel, which is incredibly frustrating. You, a powerful general of the Shang Dynasty with the strength of a Heavenly Realm cultivator, are engaged in a literary duel with an un-immortal outer disciple of the Jie Sect—and this is supposed to be a plot point where the Heavenly Realm cultivator himself comes to you!

Authors writing works like "Investiture of the Gods" should first read a few science fiction or space-themed novels. People in the 21st century have gained some understanding of the starry sky and the Milky Way. Traditional Chinese mythology includes deities such as the Heavenly Emperor, Star Lords, and the Big Dipper.