My Bathroom Leads to the Fairy World

I was discovered at the beginning and looked lonely.

It's actually not bad, but the prologue is actually a chapter to persuade people to quit, so I suggest they just delete it.

After weighing the pros and cons, the government stopped slicing and engaged in a united front. Not interesting

This is what double wear is supposed to do. Many double wear in the real world are just for dress-up purposes. It's a brain hemorrhage.

The protagonist's first pot of gold is robbery, the second pot of gold is to release a pornographic video, and the third pot of gold is another robbery...

The persona of a saint didn't actually turn himself in?

The old author's writing should be good.

I had nothing to do, and I was sitting by the window watching the rain. Suddenly I remembered a book about the end of the world that I read many years ago about fighting insects. I racked my brains and couldn't remember what it was called. Fortunately, I haven't changed my Qidian account in so many years. After flipping through it for almost an hour, I finally remembered that it was called Carapace Frenzy.

Today, I suddenly had a whim and looked through the authors I was following, only to find out that a new book has been published. I saw the latest chapter 67 in one go, and it was just two words: Shuangshuang. The logic is online, the plot is smooth, and the imagination is passable. The opening of nearly 5 or 60 chapters is also a rare highlight. The writing method itself is not unusual, but it crushes the so-called golden three chapters of the opening that are boring and routine, and even has a faint feeling of breaking the third wall (maybe it is a feeling only for old bookworms like me). The story is not complicated. The protagonist travels back and forth between two worlds, and catches up with the "Looking for Mom" ​​trend, which is about to dissipate. It quickly and easily explains the various situations when a normal ordinary person suddenly encounters time travel. It also establishes the character, describes the differences between the two worlds, the starting point of conflicts, the collision of three views, small humorous jokes, and reasonable and smooth arrangements. The above are the basic skills of a veteran writer, so I won't praise it too much. Okay, this is where I start to brag: the author is awesome!

I feel like the title of the book is too common. Should I consider changing it to something like "I was chased and killed by the Golden Core Nascent Soul in the world of cultivating immortals. I fired a super electromagnetic gun with my backhand" or something like that.

This book is pretty good, but why do so few people read it?

Ah, this author is still writing books

It's not bad, I feel like it's well written.

The first few comments are reasonable, and the first chapter has its pros and cons, but after reading Chapter 41, the writing becomes smoother and smoother, and the writing can be used as a reference for subsequent chapters.

The author has written so many books, many of which are over one million, and one of them is nearly 4 million. There are a little few comments in the comment area...

It stopped me from wanting to come in and take a look several times. . .

Good book Very good double wear I feel put off by the name

In addition to the protagonist, this novel also has other people who can travel through time, so there is a high probability that there will be missions in other worlds later in the novel.

The writing is pretty good, I support it.

When I was a kid, I read your book, Carapace Frenzy, which was simply shocking. I haven't found a book of the same type in so many years, with the same subject matter. Do you still plan to write a story that combines today's different military strength?