Another World? Let's Talk to My Town Portal Scroll.

Not to mention other things, as for the word girl, the author seems to have no other way of expressing it except girl. It makes me so embarrassed! I have only read 100 chapters, and each chapter is only 2,000 words long. On average, the word girl appears no less than 6 times in one chapter

A person has been missing for months and no one has found him? No one called the police? If the protagonist comes back and calls 110, then disappears again. I felt a sharp explosion coming from the police station in my jurisdiction.

It's okay, it's a classic Japanese magic currency system, with a killing line that will lead to financial collapse, and the circle will never come back. I suggest the author think carefully about how to change this currency system, or delete the specific numbers directly.

60 Seconds... Too stupid a setting... Bungee jumping; normal people have to slow down for a few seconds... Time and space travel; even if the protagonist does not slow down for one second; what can you do by checking the watch to see if 60 seconds is enough? How about changing tires on this racing car? 😅

The protagonist didn't report this situation to the country?

The author had better understand what 60 seconds is. If such a short time travel cannot transmit information at a high density and cannot have logistical support, it will be very useless. There was nothing I could do except go back to the city for a glass of water, and walking down the stairs to the pharmacy for a month was too much.

The protagonist himself was so infected that he was about to die. He only needed to take two pills of amoxicillin to be alive and kicking. But when he gave the medicine to the half-elf, he ate it like food. He gave him a whole pack of several days' worth. Moreover, he opened the capsule of amoxicillin and mixed it with ibuprofen. Are he really not afraid of dying from it? It is also called "in order not to be suspected". In the face of fast-acting and powerful antibiotics, the broken capsule is the least worth caring about.

The rhythm is so chaotic. Only 5 days passed from Chapter 18 to Chapter 54, and I returned to Earth once.

Just don't write about the shame of a time traveler like Yi Xiaochuan

If the author doesn't really learn mathematics, I really think the content is okay, but the economy is really a problem and I can't bear to think about it.

Being able to go back for 60 seconds every 5 days is too little fault tolerance. Write a letter in advance to inform the situation. Bring something unique to the other world as a voucher. Ask the country to equip you with self-defense weapons, armor, first aid kits, motion recorders, think tanks, etc. When you return next time.

How to improve the protagonist's personal abilities? It's time to start improving your personal abilities. After all, this is a world where great power belongs to yourself. Furthermore, only by improving your personal abilities can you reasonably increase your return stay time, shorten the cooldown time, and carry capacity.

Can you only go back to modern times for 60 seconds after reading the introduction? I think half an hour is more reasonable.

The protagonist returned home and got so many tactical supplies, but he was not immediately identified as an enemy spy? Those words clearly revealed the identity of the intruder, right?

In fact, the previous plot is obviously too overwhelming, and the communication with the country is not smooth. These are actually small things, but the author seems to be stuck in the last era and likes to torture the protagonist. Theoretically speaking, the protagonist should feel better after being exposed to the national team.

Is the protagonist's brain abnormal?

The environment at Qidian is much better now. If it were in the past, if the protagonist dared to contact the country and benefit China, the author would be bullied by some readers online, and even the novel would be reported and removed from the shelves.

"Another World Killing Line?" Go ahead and talk to my town-returning scroll!

Don't be so sexually repressed. Is it okay to be sexually repressed and go to whoring? Go see a teacher. Who can I write it for? What else can readers do besides disgusting me?

Don't suppress it too much, just feel good where you should.

When reading this book, it is best to skip and read carefully. It will only make you wonder why I want to read this book.

I understand the truth, but your basic understanding of antibiotics is a bit low.

They are all transitional plots describing the supporting characters, which makes me feel like I can watch them or not.

Why has it changed since it was put on the shelves? Don't fall in love when you are still running for your life. The performance of the female supporting role and her character experience are not on the same line. The setting background has nothing to do with the actual performance of the character, and it has no use except to set off the protagonist. It doesn't even have tool-man attributes.

Just control the ranger's sister when the nobles want her. It's so brainless and unreasonable. It's a waste of time.

I only picked the real world to watch, and basically skipped the plot of the different world and there is not much difference 😁

It's so classic, a woman is willing to live and die for the protagonist.

It feels a little like water immediately after being put on the shelves.

Come on, author. It's not enough.

The most uncomfortable thing is to read a good book in its infancy and read the latest chapter in two days... I am usually used to reading to the end in one go, and I am not used to catching up on updates at all, but I am afraid that I will feed myself on the book... Because I saw in the comment section that many people seemed to criticize this book, but I personally feel that these are insignificant details. The book is a very good book. If any new readers see my comments, please feel free to read it, lest the author does not follow up and is fed up by old bookworms like us...