Unsinkable Starship

The subject matter is very good, I even like it very much. Yesterday I was complaining to the science fiction book group about why there is no such subject matter. I saw it today, but you are too poisonous. I can't stand it at chapter 35. Let's talk about it in detail 1: The protagonist disobeys military orders and becomes a thorn. In fact, most people who read science fiction are mature, and few like to substitute themselves into a thorn 2: The protagonist's IQ is 0 when he sees a woman. In fact, he doesn't have much IQ 3: Artificial intelligence is too intelligent, and it is still the image of an ancient beauty. Artificial intelligence is that artificial intelligence and intelligence are separate. Artificial intelligence means that it cannot give anyone any position. It can only passively accept human command. There is also intelligence. Intelligence is not wisdom. It can only perform some predetermined operations mechanically. Once these two conditions are not met, it is a smart life, not artificial intelligence. Secondly, what does an ancient beauty do? An ancient style pops up in future science fiction, don't you think it's against the grain? And it's a warship. Who in the army will let you wear ancient styles? Zz is wrong even if it is correct, and it is a female character, miniaturized, and written like a sleazy, brainless stallion. 4: After gaining control, I refused to go to the bridge to command. My life was at stake. I still wanted to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, and I was stupid in front of me. Suddenly I had scruples in the back and didn't dare to go. Also, how can you command if you don't go to the bridge? As a commander, even if the generals are absent, the soldiers will be in chaos. Without the presence of the command class, it will cause power struggles, command chaos, and self-internal strife. Especially when life and death are at stake, everyone urgently needs a presence that can comfort the soul. You know, the protagonist does not want to go to the bridge to command, let alone the inner needs of the personnel. The bridge is the command center of the entire battleship, and it is the brain of the entire battleship. Can you just put your brain on the butt? Furthermore, the bridge is the thickest armored part of the entire battleship. The commander does not stay on the bridge, but stays elsewhere. If a stray bullet comes over and the command level is killed, the entire battleship will be buried with him, especially someone like you who needs command authority. Having said that, I hope you will change it. Science fiction must be as rigorous as science fiction.

Congratulations to the author on the new book, and I hope you can write your own thoughts as before. 🙂 At the same time, I also give the author a suggestion, that is, the world in the author's works focuses too much on the male protagonist. It is obviously a story with a big world view, but it becomes a small character, making the story a running account, and the psychological description of the character. Too little narration makes everything seem to be taken for granted. Just like the previous book, the main story line is too focused on the male protagonist, which makes the early emotions of struggling under giant insects disappear, and the feeling of surviving in the apocalypse disappears. In addition, some plots that can obviously be passed quickly are written in detail, which makes it become It looks boring. I wonder if you, the author, have noticed that there are too many plots, such as the fight against Jupiter Zero and his descent into the tunnel, which are too scattered. The obviously thrilling things have become watery. There is also too much emphasis on tactics rather than writing about grand strategy. The male protagonist can do whatever he wants at any level, instead of just leaving a general inexplicable. When you are an infantryman, you are obviously a general but you don't even have the ability to be a company commander. When the male protagonist comes up, describe other people and pierce the male protagonist's movements and thoughts in the middle. The plot should go by quickly. The plot should be written quickly. The death should be written. If you can die heroically, die heroically. Don't act like a coquettish girl and turn it into a foot binding.

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Everything else is good, the main reason I can't stand it is because the protagonist is ***

I think it's better not to dig a hole about women at the beginning. It can easily be dismissed as an old routine.

I have been reading books written by metal for several years. The previous ones were very good, but the last one had a good subject matter, but it didn't feel as emotional as this one. From every aspect of this book, it seems that it has entered a different writing style. When thinking about words, you can feel the author's hard work!

Is this an interstellar civilization...? ? ? You are just as ridiculous as the ancients imagining modern warfare, still using crossbows and swords, and still fighting with horseback riding and slashing! What level of technology is anti-gravity? At the very least, with great unification, it is possible to achieve anti-gravity only after unifying gravity, strong force, weak force, and electromagnetic force... However, with great unification: 1... What kind of bullshit armor is needed? Dimensional barriers, annihilation barriers, and force field shields are not just at your fingertips! 2... What kind of bullshit cold, hot, and energy weapons are needed in the traditional sense? Strategically, there are various viruses, bacteria, nanobugs, super, normal, and infrasonic weapons against alien races... Tactically, there are also various types of rays, force fields, and magnetic field weapons! 3... We are no longer even flesh and blood in the traditional sense. Our brains are chip-based, our bodies are mechanized, and our consciousness and memory are digitalized. At that time, any weapons, equipment, and machinery on the battlefield were my body, but they were not my true body. The war at the same level has completely turned into a game determined by computing power, productivity, and resources! 4... Moreover, our life form has completely evolved into a pure energy state, gathering into a ball of high-energy plasma and scattering into nebulae throughout the galaxy; it comes as a gamma ray, and then turns into electromagnetic waves; as small as incorporating consciousness into the quantum world, as large as sinking into a star ; Everything is me, and I am everything... There are no more assets or communism in ideology; there are no such things as work and need, and issues between philosophy and science such as computing power, truth, rules, and origin will become the meaning of life!

Looking forward to the new book... From Reloading to the Pit... I like the fact that there is no golden finger... The stories of ordinary people with flesh and blood and struggle... Come on...

I really like this kind of book that develops slowly bit by bit, and you don't know the ending after reading the beginning.

Let's put it this way, the person surnamed Luo said that he didn't want to retain any rights, but in fact, more than 200 people have entered Lan'an, isn't it? Do they just want to keep floating? Wasn't the colonial era all about survival? The protagonist doesn't dare to come out because he is forced to hand over authority. As you can see from the previous article, the starship can be completely operated by relying on the brain. Why must the authority be handed over to a group of disobedient people? Now we all know that whether it is an airplane, ship, train, etc., The first requirement is the captain or captain. When they have absolute decision-making and command rights, everyone will listen to them, let alone a captain in the interstellar era. When the protagonist comes out, they will either force him to hand over authority, or he will die if he leaves the ship. Why doesn't the man named Luo hand over everyone to the government of Lan'an Star? His official position is incomparable! Lan'an and the others can understand that it doesn't matter if the person named Luo doesn't enter, but what will happen to the person named Luo who writes like this? I can't figure out whether the protagonist is an idiot and still wants to scheme, or whether he is stupid and comes out to be manipulated by others. What does the starship brain think? What is it? Alas, I feel a little dizzy when I see this. It's so awkward!

The Metal Crack Book Club reminds you: There are millions of books, but this one is a good one If you don't vote after watching it, the two of you will cry.

Under the metal I am king! What kid dares to be so arrogant?

According to the theory of relativity, the greater the speed, the greater the mass. If you are traveling faster than the speed of light, how much mass should you have? Your mass is greater than that of the entire universe. What should you use to push it? It is recommended that the author watch more popular science videos about the theory of relativity. Don't come up and attack people when you see them. Why can't people tell you that you are wrong? I have stopped reading the novel. I just wanted to check how many comments there were saying that the author's science fiction novel turned into a fantasy novel. It was disguised as a science fiction novel and had no scientific basis at all. What kind of science fiction novel is it?

Why? ! My dear, I've opened a new book! Support!

The author should delete this book. It has countless flaws, including flying a spaceship and having blood. You are not writing fantasy. And the protagonist's family is gone and he can still control the spaceship. That's fucking bullshit.

I recommend a book called "Hippani War Chronicles", which is mainly about fighting against alien Zerg, aliens, and strange creatures. The battle is basically between mechas and a few battleships.

Writing a book is not easy, it takes effort and time, and you cannot satisfy everyone. I still have the same point of view, try your best to write your best ideas. Only if you write well will we read it, not what we want to see, you have to write. It's best not to study tens of millions of words of simple prose, it's meaningless.

Why can't human warships defeat Vita warships, but 400 warships can destroy 600 enemy ships when surrounded? Forcibly jumping levels to defeat monsters, fantasy novels are visual. A moment of bloody bravery is a disaster. The larger the scale of the battle, the more obvious it is. 400 Ships are surrounded, and the number of enemies is 2-3 times. Under normal circumstances, the encircling party's battle losses will not exceed a hundred ships, but will be lower. This is not the age of cold weapons. The role of human beings in battle will only become smaller and smaller

The opening chapter is very well written and very attractive. Many novels written by writers nowadays are just the same routine without any new ideas.

After reading hundreds of chapters, let me tell you my opinion. The protagonist's spaceship sailed at super-light speed for several months, and decades of actual world time passed. Isn't it good to synchronize the protagonist's time with the world's time? Superluminal speed has appeared. You told me about the time dilation of relativity? The time is out of sync, which looks awkward and affects subsequent viewing of the content you wrote. To write according to "time dilation", for example, a 30-year-old man who has just become a father joins the Star Fleet and fights in a battle more than 20 light years away. The super-light voyage back and forth is one year for him. If his son only stays on the planet to farm, when he comes back, his son will be 40 years old. When the next battle comes and he comes back again and again, he will have fourth-generation descendants. However, he himself is only in his thirties. It can also be compared like this. A man in his thirties joins the Star Fleet. He has a 10-year-old son. He happens to obey the order and follow the fleet to fight a battle twenty light years away. He arrives at the location at super-light speed for half a year and is stationed in the battle. Half a year later, his son in his 30s also joins the army and comes to the battle site. It feels awkward to think about it

Even though I am short of money, I still want to reward and encourage me. I hope that the more I write, the better 👍

New book friend here! Don't waste your time! The Starry Sky Apocalypse has it all! Fun and learning at the same time!

It is recommended to write some interesting and embarrassing things. The protagonist and the people around him accumulate some feelings, and then suddenly explode when the plot is about to explode. This is also a way of writing.

To be honest, apart from metal, I don't know if there are any other hard science fiction films 🙂

The prototype of the Vicente. . . It should be the Predator😁😁

I feel like it's a bit poisonous at the beginning, especially the protagonist's character at the beginning, which is very poisonous

Technology is so advanced, why not drive away all the people, keep the loyal ones, and get rid of the scheming ones? Artificial intelligence is already there, and the robots are there. Let alone not being able to build them, the robots will not work as well as others? Aren't war robots awesome? Wouldn't a robot that's not afraid of death be bad?

Reading a book is like being in love with a partner, everything is an advantage when you are in love! Nothing is right when you are filled with hatred! When I looked back, that person was in a dimly lit place! So those who think the writing is not good or bad, please leave quietly! After a while, you may find again, hey, this book is very well written!

To be honest, the author's skills are good and the book is also good

It's really boring. You can play alone on a battleship. What else do you need the crew to do?