This Dao Ancestor Is Far Too Young

It doesn't feel right. The author seems to have not controlled the development of the plot well. He just relies on God's will to forcibly create a field with similar cultivation levels and forcibly excludes those with high-level cultivation levels. It stands to reason that everyone knows the future situation and will definitely pay attention to the information around them. If there is any trouble, they will know it immediately. The protagonist has been walking around the crater, but in the author's description, especially the woman, she always guesses the identity of the protagonist. Then when you encounter a strong enemy, you can kill him directly, and if you ask, you will be invincible with the aura of Daozu. I feel that if I write this way, this book will have big problems.

The protagonist can quickly upgrade while crossing realms crazily. Others will be injured and their future will be ruined. The protagonist's injured foundation will be strengthened, and the strength of the first level will be built. He can cross eight levels of small realms ➕ one level of large realms and kill strong men in the Condensation Stage. These are considered normal settings Ridiculous The setting is that even if the protagonist builds the third level of foundation, he cannot use the middle-grade spiritual weapon, because the middle-grade spiritual weapon can only be used in the middle stage of foundation building. The protagonist cannot give full play to the strength of the middle-grade spiritual weapon, even if the protagonist's strength is to kill the peak foundation building, it will be like killing a chicken.

It means you are not the Taoist master I am not being serious. With that timeline, there should be no suffering, or you commit suicide, commit suicide by force, and force him to come out. The timeline is completed

The protagonist's sense of morality is too high, so I can't read it. This character seems a bit depressing, not as good as a happy person. In a world where you are alone in your power, can you become a god by virtue of your morality?

Is there no one there? The old bookworm has identified the good grass.

Isn't this just plagiarizing my own magic fairy?

Is this the best two books stitched together?

The idea is very good, but if you don't have a lot of preparation, writing this will be 100% guaranteed 🪖

If you write like this, it will last you a lifetime. Just open a new timeline in the next book.

Brother, you should rest on your laurels and update more. Otherwise, other people's grades will get worse and worse if they stop watching.