After Unifying the World, I Learned There Were Immortals

How can I put it this way? You are a master of writing but not good at planning your combat power. You have so many realms and so many paths, which gives people a very chaotic feeling.

I've finished reading it for now, quasi-jelly grass. If this quality can be maintained in the future, it will be jelly grass.

I got it several times, but every time I saw a question, I couldn't click on it. Only when I unify the world did I realize that this ability can't unify the world, right?

If the cultivation method of cultivating immortals does not have any ancient times, then the development must be slow. The perfection of the cultivation method requires countless people to continuously refer to and innovate. However, the cultivation method of immortality is regarded as a high priority, so it can only rely on time and hard work. Only by coincidence, such as being born in this sect, just practicing this skill, and being talented enough can make the skill go further. But if it is modern, the skills do not need to be hidden. Any genius can refer to any skill, and at the same time, it can be supplemented by technology or other skills to innovate. Such development of immortality far exceeds the development of the ancient sect system. Just like the modern science and technology explosion, development will only become more and more abnormal.

Flaws do not cover up strengths. The main character should be older. Around 30 is more reasonable.

It's really good, especially the combination of technology and immortality. It's very imaginative and the current performance is reasonable. There is a problem. I have not seen any description of talent selection, that is, education, officials, generals, schools, teachers, etc. Then there is something I don't quite understand about the chief minister's surname Qi. The description in the article is that both the legislative branch and the criminal department are under his control, and the judicial organization is not clear. I don't agree with this. In my world view, the law should be at least three-thirds: legislative power, law enforcement power, and judicial power. (Our country currently has four points, one more inspection power) Let me use an analogy. In a football match, the organizer is equivalent to the legislator, the players are equivalent to the law enforcers, and the referee is equivalent to the judicial officer (the object of law enforcement is naturally football). When I say this, everyone should understand.

To be honest, the title of this book might as well be just four words: There is an Immortal in This World 🙂

Do you know that the earth has not been unified for hundreds of millions of years? Because if the earth is unified, the spiritual energy will be revived. What a pity

It's not like a dynasty, it's more like a company working together.

Since the continent where the protagonist is located has spiritual stones and spiritual energy, it also has heavenly and earthly treasures and medicinal materials. It is impossible not to develop extraordinary abilities such as true energy and internal strength, physical training and martial arts.

My teeth are chattering and my legs are shaking like chaff. There has been no update for 12 hours. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this.

I just clicked into the comment area and most of them were complimentary. I wasn't interested in it at first, but now I have to give it a try. I've read ten chapters so far, and I didn't expect it to be really good! 🙂 I have read a book about Yun Dynasty before. After it was put on the shelf, I switched to cultivating immortals. The plot of Yun Dynasty development was completely gone. As a result, all the people I attracted before ran away. I hope the author can learn a lesson.

I was put off by the title of the book. 😅The title of the book is too cliche and cliche, and I have no desire to click in and read it I scrolled through it several times before I clicked in to read it.

I just finished reading the public chapter, and I am confused in every aspect. Since it is Yunchao farming, at least get a simple map

I saw it on the drug guide, but I didn't expect it to be pretty good and I could see through it.

The theme of "Yun Dynasty" is unique. I haven't seen it for a long time, probably 7 or 8 years ago. Among all the characters, Miss Gong's positioning is a bit strange and she has too many identities.

Very thoughtful, breaking away from old routines and writing new tricks. I keep writing at this level and I'm fully booked.

The Immortal Kingdom of Luck has appeared, and the land of Incense and Fire Shinto, the City God, and the heroic spirits should also appear.

Two chapters in one day is ridiculous.

Too little, the author should update more

The overall idea is okay, the plot is a bit slow and not compact enough, the writing is okay, but the ancient prose is a bit too much.

Brother, if you can write three chapters a day, this book will become popular. If you write one chapter a day, foreigners will see it and think we look down on novels.

I have been looking for Yun Chao Wen for a long time, and this is the one that suits me the most.

If the Immortal Cultivation Sect uses magic skills to mature a group of martial arts masters go to the protagonist's country to kill people indiscriminately kill for a few years and there will be basically no one in the country then is the country's luck still useful?

Come on, more updates

It's very similar to the list of gods. The essence is to cause dynasty turmoil, bring bad humanity, and then kill the human emperor.

Tied in two days, this is the article about national luck and immortality that I want to read. It's not petty at all. Although I feel that the training system is still too simple, I can accept it. That part is done with my brain.

Come on

The name pig's feet is quite overbearing. I remember there used to be a gangster in Hubei named Xie Xianrong or something.

The results are not very good, but the content is surprisingly good!