Wilderness Hunting: Building My Brand Through Reality TV

I personally dislike the concept of the reincarnators retiring. The plot is excellent, the writing is good, and the pacing is well-handled. It's engaging and enjoyable, but not entirely natural. I don't know what's lacking, but it doesn't quite deserve to be called a masterpiece.

This book's plot is actually better than the wildly popular survival book from a while back, but why didn't it perform as well? In fact, by a significant margin. I think the main reason is that the latter was incredibly detailed, providing real-life illustrations for almost everything, making it much more engaging and easier to read. It's like when I read a League of Legends book.

Speaking of the protagonist's inability to catch fish, he could easily make fun of himself by saying he had a romantic encounter with a mermaid, which is why he can't catch fish. Most people would just laugh it off if they said that, but the champion doing so creates a meme for himself.

Yours is good. Tao Liangchen's book next door is too long-winded, and the feedback on the broadcast is written too late. I stopped reading his book when it got to the gold mining part; there was no feedback, it was all just him opening boxes and houses.

Weaknesses: It often relies on a lot of internal monologues and explanations to fill in the gaps in the plot. Advantages: The eccentric and mystical elements fit the protagonist's psychological background; the author himself will include illustrations.

Could you please stop writing about treasure hunting and stick to the wilderness genre? The other book about treasure hunting was published earlier and is quite good. Most importantly, it updated 13,500 words daily in its early stages, and even now it's still 9,000. How can you compare?

It's good, but it would be even better if the audience's perspective were included in the middle. The wilderness in the middle is indeed quite tedious. You could use interspersed descriptions, such as speeding up the beginning and adding exciting parts that weren't shown in the middle. Instead of clearly describing the solitary life in the wilderness in the middle, leaving some suspense would grab the reader's attention and allow them to recall the plot in the middle.

Judging from the synopsis alone, the character design is almost identical to one of Rotten Persimmon's books: a retired reincarnator, wilderness survival 😰.

I've seen this several times and I don't dare to watch it. Reincarnators are retiring? Does this turn wilderness survival into child's play?

If the male lead weren't such a womanizer, I would have given him a lot of monthly votes. I feel bad that I can only subscribe and not vote now. I really like the White Angel and Mike.