Mortal: I Rectify the Name of Spirit Beast Mountain

I have no idea what you are writing about. You are a Qi practitioner running around all day. Do you think this is the real world? If you want to go abroad, just take a flight for a few hours. The original book is very clear. Qi-training monks can only control short-distance flights, while foundation-building monks can control long-distance flights. How long does it take to get back and forth? How many years of leave can the sect allow you to take? I said before that I didn't want to follow Xiang Zhili into the Bloody Forbidden Land, but then I immediately plunged into the pile of foundation-building monks. I felt baffled. Is there any point in joining the secret shop? You don't dare to buy good things when you come across them. If you dare to reveal your wealth, you will be exposed in seconds. Is it possible that you still want to pick up the missing items? You should first understand the original work well before writing a fanfic. The meaning of the whole text is unclear in many places.

It's outrageous to have to plot to control the Sky Bottle. You dare to do it even if you know it is related to Dao Ancestor. I really don't understand what a mortal would think about plotting to control the Sky Bottle. Is this kind of thing reasonable? A Qi practitioner plotting to control the Sky Bottle is not Han Li.

Um, I really can't stand you.

The writing is too bad, your family is too lazy, you might as well not have a family, plus running around every day, and the spiritual beast at the beginning, can you not be so rubbish?

Why do I feel a little confused?

Many times I can't understand a sentence, and then I can't explain a thing clearly! I watched it for a long time and didn't know what I was looking at! 😅😅😅😅 Let's go back and practice first.

It's so dumb, I don't understand how these authors can write a fan fiction that is even worse than the original work.

Stop writing. You should abandon this book. I can't stand it at all. I can't understand many parts. Your writing is too bad.

Qi-training bastards don't want to practice. They run here and there and dance to get hold of the sky bottle. They are not afraid of being killed by the master of the Samsara Palace across the world and reincarnated as a pig, dog, cow or horse forever.

People who read it felt dizzy, and some were confused when the writing was clearer.

Han Li has become a Taoist ancestor in the past, and his future has been determined, so he cannot snatch it or touch it. But this is rubbish thinking!

It's so long-winded. It's so long-winded throughout the whole article. It's already Chapter 10 and I haven't fused myself with the Taoist bloodline yet. Instead, I've fused it with a spiritual beast. Why wouldn't it be nice to add spiritual beast talents to my body? It is equivalent to the innate magical power. As the realm increases, the power also increases. Isn't it okay to extract the innate talent of the Sky Palm Bottle? Instead, he kept raising spirit beasts, and I didn't understand what he was thinking.

It's anticlimactic and doesn't make sense. It's a completely pieced together word count. It doesn't even understand the language. It's worse than a primary school student's composition.

The writing is getting more and more complicated. It's hard to read. You're a noob in Qi training and you've made yourself look different. You're not afraid of playing to death.

He won't kill you across the world. If you don't have a bottle, you won't be able to cultivate into a god or ascend. If you die in the human world, it will be death anyway. Die a few thousand years later and earn 3. Maybe after ascending, you will have an adventure and beat that guy.

There's nothing major wrong with it overall, except that the Wang family copy is a bit long.

Is there a hang-up or a drag on the rhythm? We watch fandoms for the pleasure.

Which Tao type setting? "Ming Zun"?

The author just loves writing. It's really awesome that more than 200 chapters have not been published.

Reincarnation Han Li and Time Han Li are two people Reincarnation Han Li traveled back in time after losing the battle with the past or present in the hope of changing the future. He practices the law of reincarnation and is Han Li in another timeline. He is not that awesome and cannot have such a big influence. Time Han Li is about the same age as you, not that So cool B, The little green bottle was placed at the feet of Time Han Li during the reincarnation process. That's all. If Time Han Li picks it up, then he will be the future Taoist. Remember, it is the future. If you grab it, in the future, as long as you defeat Samsara Han Li, you will be the Taoist Or Nangong Wan's little green bottle. Grab it, or don't grab anything at all. Nangong Wan is the reincarnation of Samsara Han Li's wife, and the little green bottle was placed by Samsara Han Li at the feet of Time Han Li If you only grab Nangong Wan, then what you will have to deal with in the future is the double row of Time Han Li and Samsara Han Li If you grab the little green bottle, you will only have to deal with Samsara Han Li. Time Han Li was killed by you in the process of robbing him Summary: As long as you travel through mortals to cultivate immortality, you will inevitably confront Han Li in the future. Whether it is time Han Li or reincarnation Han Li's goal is Dao Ancestor. As long as you want to be Dao Ancestor, you will have to fight, so it doesn't matter whether you grab the little green bottle or not.

The power of your golden finger has not been reflected at all. If nothing else, since you can draw talents, can you take advantage of the opportunity of being a spirit beast shovel to draw a talent of metal affinity or fire affinity? Wouldn't it be better to give the protagonist a matching gold or fire technique and let the protagonist develop for a while? Based on my experience of reading so many mortal novels, you stepped on a minefield at the beginning, because quite a few people immediately abandoned the book as soon as they saw the plot to seize the Sky Bottle/accept Nangong Wan. Author, you have some clever ideas in not seizing the Sky Bottle and only absorbing the Tao seeds, but many people are very disgusted at the beginning of not using the golden finger to practice and wander around. Writing this kind of novel, the first effect of the golden finger or the first talent drawn must be immediate. It doesn't hurt to make the first talent bigger, especially as I said at the beginning, it is best to have an effect on oneself. This is my feeling after reading the previous chapters. I am a family person. I apologize for any mistakes, but I still say that it is best for newbies to write novels in which the first three chapters show how your plug-ins can help you. The platinum master can naturally lay the groundwork. Your previous test of plug-ins is too long-winded and can be shortened into three chapters.

I don't know what to say about this book title. You need to clear your name. What's the name? Justify your own spiritual beast and raise it well? Or to prove that he is not a demon? Inexplicable.

You can learn from it. There is a previous book called Raising Spiritual Pets in Spiritual Beast Mountain. I think that person wrote quite well, but I don't know why he suddenly stopped writing. Use the worldview to write your own novel.

[First], Qi training, foundation building (1), Blood Tao Seed: a. Extracting Tao Seeds from monsters, monsters, and people can not only extract talents, spiritual roots, and physiques, but also extract part of the life span of the living being. b. The spiritual plant can only extract its characteristics, such as self-healing talent, attributes of the spiritual plant, etc. c. Note: Such extraction cannot be selected. Once extracted, all the talents of the extracted person will be extracted and reduced to mortal objects. d. By integrating into magic weapons or magic weapon fragments, you can obtain the complete magic weapon refining method, extract the essence materials and magic weapon restrictions from the magic weapon, and integrate them into new magic weapons and magic weapons. (2), Divine Soul Tao Seed: a. When integrated into the Divine Soul, you can directly extract the memory of the opponent's Soul. b. After the divine soul is integrated into itself, it can obtain all the experience of the other party's practice. c. In addition, it can also be integrated into magical weapons and puppets, which is equivalent to having an extra divine soul clone to control these treasures. If you integrate enough, you can also control part of the power of the magic weapon beyond the level. [Second], Formation of Pills, Nascent Soul Stage Flesh Tao Seed: 1. The Tao Seed can be controlled to freely select and extract talents from the host body, so that these spiritual beasts or people can continue to practice without depriving them of their longevity. Ru Xin Ruyin's dragon-yining body. Yuanshen Taoism: 1. The clone controlled by Yuanshen Taoism is fused with the distraction separated by Zhong Shang. You will be able to act completely autonomously, with your own interests first. . . . 2Special cases: 2. Time Tao Type: (a), Qi training, foundation building: can control up to a hundred feet in radius, three times the speed per hour. (b), Jiedan, Yuanying: the flow rate of time is up to ten times. Range: About a thousand feet. Nascent Soul range: within ten miles.

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I won't explain the rest too much, I'm tired and pointless. Let me explain something about this point that everyone talks about a lot. First, the golden finger of the protagonist is not the kind of Han Li that can survive stably and continuously produce elixirs with energy. He obtained Tao Seed, and without resources it was impossible to maximize it. After the spiritual beast or he is fused, his cultivation level cannot be improved immediately. Secondly, in Tiannan, there is not much time left for him. The demonic invasion is about to happen. Even if he has infinite lifespan, he will still have to burp in the middle of the battle. Without running around, how could he break through the foundation in the shortest time, how could he make friends with Xin Ruyin, and thus be able to go to the Sea of ​​Chaos Stars.