I'm in Yellow Maple Valley, and I Have a Monster Clone!

Don't look at it. The protagonist is a wolf with white eyes. He took a bunch of treasures from the family and watched the family's foundation-building potential being killed and injured. He also said that he and the family would be cut off. It's too outrageous To summarize: 1. The ancestor of the family asked the three protagonists to go to the Bloody Forbidden Land. Whoever is the best will be given the family's foundation-building pill 2 . The ancestor saw that the protagonist was better than before, so he gave the protagonist the talisman and the moving talisman that he originally planned to give to Zhou Xue (to be honest, the ancestor was too fair) 3. The protagonist hid in the corner and watched Zhou Xue being killed, saying that he did not want to be attacked by the hiding people, and then jumped out after Zhou Xue died and killed two enemies, one bright and one dark. , Saying that he repaid the family's kindness and broke off with the family (The protagonist had already discovered the person who was hiding, and had to wait for the person to die before taking action. He also said that he saved the remaining person, and if the protagonist hadn't taken possession of Zhou Xue's brother and sister's talismans and moving talismans, they might not have died. If that was the case, It was nothing more than refusing to save the rivals within the family, but the protagonist once again repaid the family's kindness and cut it off, which really made me unable to bear it. What a super white-eyed wolf, the family has committed several lifetimes of sins when they met you)

The author of this mortal fanfic has a lot of trouble. He muttered to himself, was not cautious at all, and the protagonist's face changed drastically. Is the spiritual consciousness of a cultivator just a decoration?

I'm crazy about money, so I charge for 20 chapters.

What the protagonist is like, the author is most likely not as good as him. The author can write such a supercilious protagonist in his life.

It can be seen from this work that the author and the protagonist are both the same person. The white-eyed wolf and the Holy Mother are written using the techniques of female videos. This hydrocephalus cannot be written without the water of India's shit river.

The family is connected heart to heart with you, and you are playing tricks with the family. What a Linghu Chong... The family has tried its best to train you, but after building the foundation, the family can no longer help me, right... Jie Jie Jie, right?

Don't be a monster. Let's go to the street.

It's time to break through to the Nascent Soul, but the magic weapon of birth has not yet been refined.

Whether it's a licking dog or a SB who has been planning to use it openly, he doesn't know how to clean himself up.

To be honest, the first 20 chapters of this novel are okay and can be read, but after the formation of the pill, it is not so good. Let's not say that you have traveled through time and understand the plot. When you encounter the events of the original novel, you will be shocked and your heart will freeze at every turn. These are still barely acceptable, but when you are in the middle stage of forming a pill, your spiritual consciousness is comparable to that of the late stage of the Soul Soul, you also have Yuan Mystery Techniques, you also practice body refining techniques, and you have the same physique as a monster beast at the level of a pill formation, and the third cultivation of the body and spirit, that's all you can do. , That is also invincible under the Yuanying, or the protagonist who uses Yuan Mystic Technique may not be able to kill the middle Yuanying, but killing the early Yuanying is almost certain. But when I read more than 100 chapters of you, it gave people the feeling that the character of the protagonist was completely unworthy of this strength. Combined with the way you met the original plot, it gave people a very uncomfortable feeling. The author should sometimes read the books he wrote, it was very uncomfortable to read.

There was an auction item that no one wanted, and the starting price was 100. No one wanted it. We were interested in the pig's trotters, so we directly quoted 250 spiritual stones.

"Mortal: Competing with Han Li, winning in learning and cultivating immortality"

The details are far from Han Li's caution. If the protagonist were Han Li, he would have died long ago.

I don't understand why Xiao Jin feels so painful every time he advances, and feels worse than death. Is this true for every monster that advances?

Speaking of which, what is the true form of the Cave Sky Rat King in the integration stage in the spiritual world? I feel like he can evolve in that direction. After all, he has withstood more than a dozen catastrophes.

Seeing Xiang Zhili, my mentality is really bad. You have been there all day long, and you have handed over more than 70 elixirs. Is Li Huayuan your biological father? Don't be so high-profile, you might as well be left in the situation. You are very high-profile even when you bring out 2-3+ medicines. There is no need for the author to give so much to your biological father, Li Huayuan. If there are too many, it's better not to leave them in the forbidden area and not to show off, okay? What are you laughing at? What are you laughing at? You are from the Yellow Maple Valley, not the other six sects. Why don't you just laugh when others laugh at the Yellow Maple Valley? Besides, they don't know Xiang Zhili, and neither do you? It's better to stand by and be a wooden person than the idiot protagonist in the author's works.

I found a book that is almost exactly the same as the main plot here, called Daily Hexagram, at least before the Bloody Forbidden Land, it was exactly the same. I stopped reading that book after seeing the Bloody Forbidden Land. Which one of you, the author, copied it.

It's almost Nascent Soul, why hasn't the natal magic weapon been refined yet? Did the author forget?

The protagonist is a time traveler, not an indigenous person, so how can he feel the same way? Is the protagonist's family treating her well? Is the protagonist powerful in the family? Those two people are two siblings, and the protagonist is just a relative. Relatives in reality are nothing more than that. They have not helped the protagonist, so why should they take care of them in return? You ask the protagonist to save people because you want the protagonist to survive. You should be the protagonist.

Can the author be more rigorous? Don't you want to read it yourself? Suddenly one year is said to be two months, and you have been building the foundation for four years, and you are still consolidating it. Also, I saw in your book review that you are already in the Nascent Soul stage, and you don't have your natal magic weapon yet. 😭Ah

Bi Ling Island will obviously not be discovered for many years, and these years are enough for the protagonist to dig up enough spiritual stones. However, the protagonist directly set up a large formation, killed a demon cultivator in disguise, and left it on the island. It is simply that there is no silver in this place. It is ridiculous to say that it is shocking.

Water numbers! The more I write, the better I get!

The author's thinking is extremely disgusting. Choose shemale. None of the books that accepted Xin Ruyin had good grades.

Charge for 23 chapters? Sure

It gets more and more confusing later on. Take Chapter 91 as an example, most of the words are about insignificant things! This kind of writing is everywhere! It would be strange not to persuade them to retreat

Just because the protagonist is not a male dog in heat, he is naturally superior to other fans of the same type.

You are very discouraging to readers, and you are always sniping and blowing up 😥

The storyline is okay, but it's too watery, with too much foam in unimportant places, and 2/3 of the money is wasted.

If a mortal doesn't fall in love with Zi Ling and the others, it's also a monk novel

All fellow Taoists are welcome to read!