Mortals Cultivate Immortality: I Practice Shushan Dharma Among Mortals

In addition to using a bit of the setting of Shushan, this book is actually still a nanny style in essence At the beginning, when meeting the supporting role, I covered it up a little, but when I met Han Li, he immediately transformed into a money-spreading boy A mortal is already an underworld cultivator, and the protagonist has no trace of a mortal, does not cover up treasures, does not speak to the door, and has great value for resources Without evaluation, pills that can enhance two realms are sent out like sheep shit balls In today's Internet universe, if you change to a black-spot world of cultivation, your soul will be searched hundreds of times on the first day of landing The problem is that Shushan is not an innocent world of Datong cultivators, so it created such a protagonist. So, to put it bluntly, it is a templated nanny flow. If the golden finger is replaced, it will be the same. Even if there is a 10,000 times critical hit system, the content will be the same, and the homogeneity is serious

Awesome, there are too many flaws in the Bloody Forbidden Land and Nangong Wan, and the author is invincible. Why can't he write it well and choose the way of writing that has the most contention? Seriously, I suggest you change it.

Since they all have pseudo-spiritual roots, why not just use the five spiritual roots? What's left is to practice the Shushan method and balance the five elements.

I couldn't stand it any longer. I was confused when I saw it. I really couldn't understand the protagonist's operation. If you want to bring Nangong Wan and Han Li together, then there are not enough boiled egg materials for Han Li to collect in the Bloody Forbidden Land. This is the normal process. If you want to accept Nangong Wan, then let the protagonist do it. The character follows Han Li's process. If you don't want to recruit Nangong Wan or win over her, then write that Nangong Wan got rid of Mo Jiao by herself, but the protagonist's operation is like Pan Jinlian stunning Wu Dalang, and then Ximen Qing came and went crazy to steal Wu Dalang's sesame cakes.

From Forbidden Land to the current writing of 2 Save Nangong, the protagonist created is like a singer in a brothel who talks about selling her art but not her body, and the pure and good leader in the club. Pretend to be noble and talk about not touching women. As a result, I met Nangong Wan in the forbidden area. He knew clearly that there was a trap, but he didn't run away and wanted to get closer. Forcibly pull the whole relationship. Then the cool operation came 1. I also know the method of cultivating immortals in Shushan, it is best not to break Yuanyang. 2. Even though I knew there was a vaginal cyst, I still didn't make it clear when I was reminded. Then when Nangong Wan was poisoned and pulled the protagonist, the protagonist was still there saying that it was a human robbery. Just because of your saucy operation, I said you are a Litai, do you admit it or not? What are they writing about, and when I was able to run away, I happened to meet Nangong Wan who was being hunted, and happened to attract the Yuanying old monster, and played tricks in front of the Yuanying old monster. Are you, the protagonist, qualified to practice the Shushan method? Is it worthy?

When I saw the plot of Forcing Mo Jiao and the whole Xin Ruyin dragging oil bottle, I was very confused. You practice the Shushan method. You don't practice it well and don't focus on accumulating merits. What are you doing? You have practiced the Baiyang True Knowledge and you are just a fledgling cultivator. And this and that feeling of being more powerful than the human Yuanying. In turn, you forcibly robbed Nangong Wan. It's inexplicable. You don't know that Shushan has to guarantee a virginity before becoming an immortal? The big guys in Shushan have to reincarnate and become cultivators. Why are you going around playing with women?

He was poisoned to death, which was fine at first, but I had to make up the plot. One Nangong Wan can be poisoned twice. I thought he was Shushan Sword Immortal, but he turned out to be a bastard. Especially when Yuan Ying came after him and asked if he wanted to go together, is it possible that the opposite teleportation array was disabled due to the butterfly effect? He was so calm and asked twice, are you being hunted? You have opened God's perspective! Who doesn't run away in embarrassment when being hunted?

The second one is poisonous. Practicing Shushan Kung Fu and fighting with demon cultivators will pollute your own magic power.

Why do many cloud readers think that Han Laomo has become a bad guy? If you are kind to Old Demon Han, he will at most be on guard against you, and there is absolutely no way he will repay you with kindness. Han Li is not that kind of dark protagonist.

Obviously it could be written as an invincible article, but I chose this pull-within-a-draw method.

The Shushan method is somewhat new, but that's about it. If you want to maintain a pure and pure boyhood, don't be ambiguous, don't act like someone who knows urban literature, you will end up with nothing to eat. Relying too much on the original plot, entering the Yellow Maple Valley, entering Blood, Nangong Wan, and Xin Ruyin, especially the teleportation array in the latest chapter, could not be found after several years and had to be found by Han Li. . . It can only be said that it is watchable, but it is not as attractive as the beginning, which means it is fresh and fresh at the beginning. There are too many authors who write this way of nannying the whole process. You can know how it will develop later without even reading. ——The above represents my personal opinion.

Seeing that the Bloody Forbidden Land could not hold on any longer, the author acted on both sides of the fence, offending both sides.

This book is a typical example of a small head controlling a big head. For us short-lived species, shouldn't the pursuit of immortality be the main thing in order to be able to travel through time and practice immortality? Everything else can be given up or cut off, which is in line with the nature of our Chinese men, and the protagonist of this book puts his life in a very dangerous situation for a woman. Beautiful women throw away the temptation of immortality for beautiful women, and bet that Han Li doesn't know that Nangong Wan is actually his wife in the future and not kill him. This is like traveling through the swallowing starry sky to directly snatch Luo Feng's wife.

I am Shennong , everyone, run quickly

The original novel didn't even have a few chapters, and the heroine was as weak as a paper figurine. I really don't know why I like to take her in so much.

Nangong was such a failure, he accepted it inexplicably and gave it back.

1. Standard nanny story, licking Han Li 2. Using the most disgusting bitch as the heroine. Xin Ruyin, to put it bluntly, is a shemale. Shemale becomes the heroine, you can think of it

The writing is okay, and the plot and structure are still the same as the original. You already know the following content from the beginning of the plot. How can you let others read it? It's a waste of money. The author has nothing of his own. The mortal world is so big, you can be reborn in Dajing, Mulan Grassland, Chaos Star Sea, Luo Yunzong, Xiaoji Palace, or just the Hornet Valley. Even the plot is exactly the same as the original work. I might as well read the original work.

The Shushan method is not unique to the protagonist, so why should JB write a book?

The plot of Nangong Wan in the Bloody Forbidden Land is simply a mess. What the hell is Nangong Wan doing?

The small head controls the big head, I can only say this, or the author himself has a repressed personality, a single dog, and has never touched a woman.

Nangong Wan either didn't go anywhere, and took Han Li with her so that he could have sex with Nangong Wan. It would be better for you to scare Han Li away by yourself. Taking the qualified gold box seems to be of no use at all.

The author doesn't need to worry about this group of trolls. Those trolls don't have the ability to write novels themselves, so they all come here to pick and choose. You trolls like reading original works so much, why do you come here to read fan fiction? You trolls, if you don't want to watch it, you don't have to watch it, no one is forcing you to watch it.

Can I have a normal IQ?

I gave up on the Bone Sword when I saw it. I already had the Shushan sword training method, and I still got a Broken Bone Sword. It was too bad.

The characteristic of Shushan Dharma is that the practice in this life will be accumulated into the next life.

My combat power is a bit low, which is the most uncomfortable thing, so now I can only write about love, love, love.

Since returning to Tiannan, I have become more and more wet. The author speeds up the progress of the plot

I really like the setting, but the content is really a mess

To be honest, for mortals, that realm, especially the Nascent Soul, feels the same as another realm in the later stages of description. You said that the early stage is much closer than the later stage, but that's okay, the middle stage is just a small level compared to the late stage. The descriptions in other books make me scared to death. They are all in the same realm, and the essence of life is also the same.