Mortal: When I Complete Achievements, I Will Be Rewarded and Become an Immortal.

So far it looks pretty good, but the part about cultivating your natal magical power and dispersing it is a little bit weird, the leveling pressure is too heavy, and there are some problems with the prices of some items, such as high-grade magic weapons. I hope it can be improved, and I hope you don't stop updating. I at least finish writing the chapter on the spiritual world. Thank you to the author.

Why do you have to go back and be an outcast? The protagonist of laughter (ಡωಡ)

The system rewards are awesome at first glance, and they actually suppress the state and prepare to relax. It's old-fashioned.

The level reduction is very powerful. Every time he can break through, he won't break through and has to keep the level down.

The author is ai, right? Killed 2000 foundation builders? There was another plot before where Han Li was 300 kilometers away from the south gate of Yanjiabao, and the protagonist was 680 kilometers southwest. It would take 28 hours to fly there and rendezvous. Even if it is 400 kilometers, 10 kilometers per hour? Is this a foundation-building monk? All my dogs can run faster than this.

No matter how powerful the pill formation is, it can't withstand Yuanying's casual attack. It's a well-known thing. If you can't understand it, just cut it. Are you still waiting for the word "water" to make money?

Just seeing this amazing technique, I knew that the author was going to overwhelm the golden mountain again. With the same resources, others have already formed elixirs, and you have to work hard to build the foundation. It must be like this, right? Hahaha

Forget it, you knew you were going to be betrayed by Linghu, but you didn't run away in advance. Even though you knew Feng hope was going to attack Kuixing Island, you still didn't run away in advance, and you still got together. No matter how much you explain, it is actually just one reason. You want to follow the plot. I made friends with Liu Jing at the beginning, and the relationship was not bad. In the end, he ended up dead. Feng Xi joined the Miaoyin Sect before taking action, and then Zi Ling's parents also died... If you want to say that Zi Ling's parents died because you have no strength, then the death of Liu Jing really gives me the feeling that you don't even dare to change the plot of this little character.

It is recommended to have more female protagonists. Recommended protagonists: Nangong Que, Dong Xuan'er, Zi Ling, Fan Jingmei, Zhuo Ruting, Yuan Yao, Yanli, Mrs. Wen, Ling Yuling and Wen Qing, Yinyue, Bingfeng, Hanzhixian, Mei Ning, Wen Siyue, Liu Yu, Gongsun Xing, Shidie Fairy, Yan Ruyan, Song Yu, Tianlan Saint Lin Yinping, Mulan Prairie Saint Le Master, Feng Bing, Mu Peiling, Bai Yao Yi, Holy Ancestor Yuancha, Holy Ancestor Baohua, Holy Ancestor Liuji, Holy Ancestor Mingluo, Holy Ancestor Evil Lotus, Dai'er, Fairy Black Phoenix, Jin Yue, Xianxian, Liu Le'er, Bai Suyuan, Fairy Mingxin from the Ancient Sword Sect

It's hard to describe in one sentence. The protagonist is stubborn but unwilling to be mediocre. He wants to be thought of as a poor person but unwilling to let go of his arrogance. Apart from making people feel very unconventional, it has no advantages and a lot of disadvantages.

Merely? ! Is the protagonist District? With the combat power so suppressed, I calculated the training rewards given in the whole text. It took a total of 1143 years for the protagonist to receive the pill. Give it to Han Li. Han Li has already ascended to the spirit world.

Do you press you? All he practiced were level-defining exercises and secret techniques. Nowadays, to get a special physique, you still have to level up. And it's such a pressure to level up and condense mana. Why doesn't it even have the effect of breaking through the bottleneck? Logically speaking, this level of mana is high. The effect of reducing bottlenecks is at least 40% to 50%. Even more. Building the foundation and forming the elixir is as easy as flipping a finger. Because the secret technique of the third-turn Chongyuan Gong can increase the chance of forming a pill by 40 to 50%. This is just a part of the Divine Transformation Technique. Therefore, the secret techniques inherent in the Mahayana exercises cannot be inferior to them. So you don't see much effect if you level up like this. Why don't you die?😆😆

Nanny, pressure level, don't agree with this old routine

Special three spiritual roots, Mahayana stage exercises, Nascent Soul stage exercises insights, alchemy and weapon refining, formations, and talisman master level (you can practice any magic weapon or below). As a result, it took two years of practicing Qi at the ninth level before breaking through to the tenth level. Later, he obtained Han Li's elixir. He fused it himself, which could improve his cultivation level for 50 years in the golden elixir stage. As a result, he broke through the 11th level of weapon refining, which he said was equivalent to improving his cultivation level for ten years during the qi refining stage.

There is no one who doesn't rush to the streets. This book of Brahma Sage's True Demonic Skills goes directly to the Mahayana. The exercises for cultivating both body and law are not as difficult as the bird exercises like you. There are so many pressure-level settings. Disgusting reader. Die. Plant

It's a pity. If the writing and plot of this book can be more normal, there may not be another mortal masterpiece according to this recommendation. I never expected it. I just want to ask the author, are you a real person? You can't even catch the opportunity when it hits you. Was your plot written by someone? ! Didn't you read it yourself before posting it? If you don't want to spend time looking for some combat power data, at least check it with the AI, right? I really agree with the saying that everyone has his own destiny. 2000 Foundation building came and made me laugh. It was so awesome.

I endured Tiannan's pressure, and explained that I knew my age, and I would taste it to see if there were maggots at the back. If so, I would definitely spray twice as much 😡

All I can say is that the writing is really rubbish. Don't you even read the author's own settings? The settings of your system are really bullshit.

The various data in the book are written like shit. If you don't understand, don't write the data so clearly. Let us guess by ourselves. It's better than the shit-like data you wrote.

The combat power system is broken and I can't watch it anymore. Goodbye!

It feels like the protagonist is Han Li's licking dog

Garbage should go to the garbage dump, not appear on the list and waste everyone's time

Zhang Tiequhun's three spiritual roots were in the early stages of elixir formation when he was in his 60s. In the case of cheats, anyone who is 60 years old and does not have an elixir is the author deliberately suppressing the protagonist. Han Li, who had false spiritual roots, only waited for 91 years in the elixir formation stage before successfully conceiving a baby. The protagonist's qualifications are much better than Han Li's. He hopes that the birth of a baby will be successful in less than 80 years! Anyone who makes the protagonist wait for more than 80 years in Jiedan must be the author deliberately suppressing the protagonist! Deliberate poisoning. In summary, if the protagonist is not allowed to have a baby before the age of 140, the author is deliberately suppressing the protagonist. Han Li entered Xutian Palace at the age of 147. Anyone who did not let the protagonist have a baby in front of Xutian Palace was because the author deliberately suppressed the protagonist.

I don't understand why there are so many scolds in the comment area, I don't understand! Obviously he is a very good nanny, and he gets along with Han Li even more like Nangong Wan than Nangong Wan. Han Li didn't even mention Nangong Wan about his little green bottle, but he told the protagonist everything! What is this if not love? The protagonist also sincerely cares for Han Li. In any kind of crisis, Han Li will come to the rescue with just a shout. He always talks about "Li Zi, Junior Brother, Junior Brother" and completely regards Han Li as his little wife. Those who like watching gay sex are in luck. At the same time, the combat power system of this book is very "reasonable". The protagonist relied on his late foundation-building cultivation to kill nearly two thousand Qi-refining disciples of the Six Demonic Sects and hundreds of foundation-building disciples, and became famous throughout the world! The cumulative cultivation experience accumulated in the establishment of the system has exceeded a thousand years, and as a result, the progress of cultivation is only one section faster than Han Li! Too fast, my brother! Later, the author even personally said that it was only after returning to Tiannan that the baby was born, so you might as well do it after Han Li had conceived the baby. Leave your cultivation level alone and focus all your efforts on cultivating immortals and hundreds of arts. When the time comes to face the Yuanying old monster, haha, although I am only at the elixir-forming stage and you are at the Yuanying stage, your alchemy, weapon formation, formation, and talisman are not as powerful as mine. You are defeated! Also, when dealing with the Miaoyin Sect and Wen Siyue's father later, he said that the sect owner and his wife were very kind to him and treated him like a family member, and that Wen Siyue's father was his friend. As a result, nothing in the plot was changed. They just sat back and watched as the two couples and Wen Siyue's father died, and Meimei enjoyed the reward of Zi Ling and Wen Siyue being concubines. The protagonist, the saint! Summary: This book is the most fake of fanfics! Readers who like to eat💩 are in luck! You can come in and take a look!

What I hate the most is having a big lag, but there are a lot of reasons to limit myself in the plot At the beginning of the Qi training period, my cultivation level has been suppressed for decades, which is very frustrating to watch Either lag a little, or don't level up.

Kill two thousand demons to build a foundation? I have killed two or three demon sects. If you kill three or four hundred foundation-building souls, I will have to go out and shoot you to death. Two thousand is too much.

You are the main character, but you are not happy at the same time. The heroine does not have two heroines for Han Li. More than half of the places where there are protagonists have Han Li. Either it is written around the fate of the heroine, or there is no heroine. It is fun to fight around getting stronger and stronger than the standard. What the hell are you writing? It feels like the protagonist is Han Li's self-upgraded beast pet. I am really speechless😅

The numerical value is a mess, the plot follows the original work, and the cultivation progress is still slow. You may not be able to hold on to the full 1500 in the past three months.

Pressing for the sake of pressing. Hundreds of years of cultivation are not used to improve the realm. Hey, it just disgusts the readers. How can the author appear nb if he doesn't disgust the readers?

Go to Biling Island to dig up spiritual stones. Using high-grade spiritual stones can help you cultivate to the peak of pill formation for decades. It has no side effects and is stronger than elixirs. Inhaling a little bit of the spiritual energy in the top-grade spiritual stones can help you break through the middle stage of pill formation, the late stage of pill formation, and the Yuanying. The original top-grade spiritual stones can help break through the realm of divine transformation. Many protagonists in fan fiction can find a way to find Biling Island and practice safely during the alchemy stage. Whether they can find it or not depends on how the author writes it.