The Emei Sword Immortal

1. To attract readers, appropriately expand the emotional line. 2. The characters should not be stereotyped. In the later stage, almost everyone was written as mentally retarded. The protagonist's martial arts skills are true, but he is not a god. If you write like a god, it will be boring. 3. The self-created martial arts should not be too long. The more descriptions, the duller it will be. There are several interesting points in the original work that we can learn from. The more powerful the magical power, the greater the tragedy. The more beautiful the people, the more ugly their thoughts. The more powerful the people, the more they have nothing in the end. Only in this way can I continue to write. If the protagonist is perfect by the middle stage, then how to write later. Unless you write something explicit, it will be useless.

It's a bit delayed, the plot is too busy, I haven't seen Hongda's Yitian World, it's all about thieves and idiots, and up to now I haven't acquired any magical skills, I just want to create them by myself, it's a bit taken for granted, if you don't look at the peerless martial arts, how can you create peerless ones?

Yang Xiao is really not a good guy. He learned Grandpa Guo Xiang's martial arts and specifically humiliated Emei. From Emei's point of view, this guy must die!

I'm Chovy. Please recommend this book to me. How did you order this book? Don't always push drugs as a starting point.

After seeing the plot, I searched Yang Buhui. She is married to Yin Liting, who is her mother's engagement partner? ? ? Yin Liting's father-in-law is Yang Xiao. Is this too ridiculous?

The writing is average, and the overall setting is pretty good, but the plot is mediocre, not logical enough, and the fun is just average. The ability to describe the relationship between men and women is mediocre, there is no harem yet, a lot of the original heroines are just decorations, and the subplots are mediocre and cliche.

This book by Yitian Tongren is definitely the first

Wu Mu's suicide note is nonsense. Hundreds of years have passed, and artillery and artillery have appeared. Except for Sun Tzu's Art of War, which talks about war thoughts, specific military books should have been eliminated long ago.

It's rare to see such wonderful novels, come on⛽

Is there any Shennong? I read that the label of this book is "All Heavens Are Infinite", but the introduction also states that the protagonist only has one permanent certificate. Doesn't that mean that the protagonist stays in this world until death, and the author only writes about martial arts? Have you seen Shen Nong at the back? 🙂

It is recommended that you never write about astronomy. It is all badly written and contains no new ideas at all. Instead of writing about astronomy, it would be better to write about the protagonist becoming invincible and seeking enlightenment on the earth, wandering in the shallows, trapped on the earth, suspended in ice, being excavated by archeology, fighting against the power of Western countries and capital, using modern technology to help improve martial arts, and then alien civilization comes, similar to the novel Devouring the Stars, and the protagonist finally embarks on the path of cosmic cultivation.

The writing is quite good. It's been a long time since I've read a good martial arts movie. I can't find any resources online, so I can only read the original version.

Many plots are too intellectually depressing. The protagonist is like a native. The author is not good enough to advance the plot and leave no brain space for the protagonist.

Are you trying to sell dog meat on a sheep's head? Where are your books?

After waiting for a long time, I am still writing about Yitian. It seems that I will only write about Yitian. I will post a short review. The overall rhythm of this book is not good, the early stage is too long, and there are a lot of messy and non-existent things. In the middle stage, it is basically a high-quality and enjoyable article. It has been upgraded and upgraded. It is time to fight monsters, but by the end of the writing, the combat power is already very high and basically there is no suspense for fighting anyone. The plot of the original book has also participated in the changes. Zhu Tianwen should end it with one or two chapters and then change the world. This book is still writing Yitian step by step. It's okay to say that the author never forgets his original intention and only writes a pure Yitian fan, or it's okay to say that the storybook has entered the garbage era and the author is still in Shuiwen and just loses money.

I thought it was Emei from Shushan Swordsman. Emei, who relies on the sky, is just a roadside ( ) I have studied it myself, but I don't worship Emei. The Beggar Clan does not worship Emei. People are strong, not martial arts. Qiao Feng, Taizu's long fist, is awesome. Why did you choose Emei? Boring. . .

Everything else is good, except for the combat power. After reading 600,000 words, I just didn't get the Nine Suns Magic Skill. In order to fill the hole of the protagonist's lack of internal strength, I added some far-fetched second designs. It's better to get the Nine Suns earlier.

Why! It's really boring to write about the sword-drawing technique. What's the point of fighting on it? Crooked way! ! There are so many skills to use the sword, but you have to choose a dead end! What's the readability?

I specially ordered a chapter to ask: at the end of the third chapter, a lot of people scolded Shennong, what is this book like?

The protagonist's character is a bit of a perfect template, but it seems boring at first glance. I still prefer a more complex character design

It's well written and I've ordered all of it, but I feel like it's not enjoyable to watch since I created my own martial arts. There's absolutely no need to create my own martial arts. If you can't write the kind of artistic conception, don't forcefully write it.

Wearing Tsing Yi. . .

Purely cool writing, the time-travel male protagonist cheats and speeds through the story of Heaven and Dragon Slaying, and his combat power collapses

You arranged for the protagonist to go to the White Ape to get the Nine Yang Manual, but you still haven't found it? Just forget it if you don't find it, and still have to deal with the people of Zhuwu Lianzhuang? You can even deal with them a bit before looking for scriptures. . . . Seriously can you get your money back? So disgusting 🤮

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It is recommended that you just fast forward and read the first thirty chapters, which are the same as Gong Douwen.

It's okay. You've already read this kind of novel. Why do you need to use your brain to read it? Aren't they just boring to pass the time?

This protagonist can be called a non-killer. He takes the overall situation into consideration and coincides with it, but he just doesn't kill. It's very unpleasant. But overall the writing is pretty good. Either it's very brainless, or it writes the protagonist's growth too quickly, so that the protagonist has achieved great feats. The beauties in the original plot are all still children, and the protagonist has just grown up. It's very jarring to watch. For the sake of the plot, 10-year-old Zhao Min was brought out.

Why is this book not classified as martial arts, but classified as All Heavens Infinity? I like watching martial arts, I almost missed it

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