Swallowed Star: Primordial Heavenly Dragon

As a true god whose laws are not outstanding, the original giant ax can figure out the eighth-level secret method without the most powerful treasure, which is definitely better than other true gods. So where is the strong point? First of all, the original ancestor said that giant axes are in love with axes and infatuated with mansions, so you can use "axes" to create. Use "axe" to describe the place where the giant ax is stronger than other true gods. Second, there are actually many settings in the original work, and not all of them have been explained. The first is the existence of the "Beast God's Concept". The Beast God's Concept can increase Luo Feng's understanding of the law, allowing Luo Feng to cross the Tongtian Bridge even if his understanding of the law is insufficient. So can the giant ax have a "giant ax artistic conception"? I think it is possible. Another setting is Jie Fanzi's origin of water and fire. Combined with some settings of "Snow Eagle Lord" and "Swallowing Starry Sky 2", there is a "Tao" existence. "The origin of water and fire" refers to the two paths of the origin of water and the origin of fire. But this person must have only scratched the surface, so he is no more than a level 10 true god. And Snow Eagle has the Way of the Knife and the Way of the Sword, so it's no problem to add the Way of the Axe. It is known that the lower level of the original way of fire is the law of flame, then what is the lower level of the ax path and the sword way? Can we use "The Artistic Concept of the Ax" and "The Artistic Concept of the Knife" as a starting point? The original giant ax is only an eighth-level true god. Of course, it will not be strengthened. Even if it is strengthened, it can only be reasonably strengthened through the protagonist leading to relevant opportunities. So in summary, it is assumed that the giant ax has an "axe's artistic conception" similar to the "beast god's artistic conception" as a low-level entry into the "axe way" So the level of "axe's artistic conception" that the giant ax possesses can only assist in the creation of the secret method of "axe" in the realm of true gods. There is no way to intensify the battle. Why the second design refines the ability of the great axe. The protagonist currently has a "fighting spirit" which is itself the prototype of a "Tao". It can be transformed into one of the protagonist's paths through learning and guidance. It is currently designated as the Halberd Path. So we need a leader, and someone who is passionate about weapons is quite suitable.

To collect everyone's opinions, Swallowing Starry Sky is a world where you upgrade and change the map to fight monsters. It is not suitable for female protagonists. After all, no female protagonist can keep up with the protagonist's progress. However, some friends said that there was no female protagonist to interact with in the later stage, and it seemed monotonous and boring by herself. At the beginning of this book, I planned to write a heroine. The heroine was originally supposed to be the "enchanting" member of the Qiuyan Squadron. The setting was that she was a military member of the Qiuyan Squadron. She was a smart and charming woman. Unfortunately, the author of this article was limited in writing skills and could not write out this charm. The heroine's role was cut. Let's collect everyone's opinions on whether we need a heroine and descendants in the future. Although the protagonist's thousand-fold gene cannot have offspring according to the original setting, the main feature of the fanfic is a cheat. Can the cheating be considered as negating the setting of the original work?

Now there are nine out of the ten books in the Devouring Literature. They are from Earth. Luo Feng is a classmate. After finishing the genius battle, he is either first or second. After finishing the extraterritorial battlefield-the Ancestral God Cult-the alien assassination. Without any new ideas, can't we write an ordinary genius whose timeline is at the same time as Coty or King Zhenyan? He starts in the Secret Realm of Taichu or the Secret Realm of Heaven and Earth, and slowly grows up by relying on foresight + Gou Daoliu. You can't write about a person with a special life or a starry sky beast origin, joining the Ancestral God Cult or the Starry Sky Beast Alliance. Anyway, these two forces have no conflict with humans.

I have caught up with the latest chapter now. The author respects the original plot very much and does not change the settings randomly. The pace is very fast and the links are intertwined. The plot is fascinating and the three views are correct. The most important thing is that the setting is very novel, you can directly open the GM game, and the interaction with the original characters is very interesting. (Forget about tricking readers into it first, remember to delete the content in brackets.)

As of Chapter 9, for the time being, it doesn't have too many poisonous points for me, and it's not very watery. It's just that the plot is too jumpy, there are many omissions, and it becomes not very coherent. And there is no need to go to the battlefield so quickly. You can first learn basic combat literacy in the virtual universe. For example, in the killing space, you can assign unarmed combat from apprentice to realm master. Slowly increase the difficulty to observe and learn how to fight. Then, designate weapon combat from apprentice to realm master. The difficulty will be gradually increased to observe and learn, and finally to the attached laws and fields. Later, you can try to specify other laws for combat, so that you can have a certain understanding of other laws. Of course, it is enough to mention it when writing, but even if it is mentioned in one sentence, it is better than to directly challenge the monsters recognized by the original law without knowing anything, and it is also a monad attribute. It feels like a myasthenic patient holding a Heavenly Sword to compete with a heavy knight in full armor. Simply relying on countless deaths to determine the opponent's next move is very dangerous on the battlefield.

With such good congenital conditions, it is more suitable to be a lone strongman. There is no need to join the Universe Virtual Company or something. Can't humans be a lone master of the universe? Does it have to join the five major forces? ? ?

When the oath is not valid, it is no different than bullshit

After reading a few chapters, I was really interested. I opened the table of contents and saw Chapter 64, Jiuyou's Clone. I vomited it immediately and decisively deleted it from the bookshelf. The previous creativity was wasted.

It's well written, but the updates are a bit sparse.

Let me ask, I haven't read the original work, but I saw it on Douyin. Ten thousand years ago, humans still drove Rolls-Royce. Will humans still drive Rolls-Royce ten thousand years later?