Demon-Hunting Girl: I Awaken Spider-Man's Powers from the Start

Once in Cantonese and once in Mandarin, aren't you deliberately trying to reduce the word count? The background is Chinatown. Why don't you communicate in English? Then translate it into Cantonese for the locals, and then translate it into Mandarin for us?

A bunch of Cantonese pseudonyms pop up at every turn, which is really annoying.

It looks good, but this kind of Cantonese text affects the experience. It is recommended to optimize it in the future.

What you mean is that your brothers risked their lives to get you divine attributes, and even killed your rival for the throne in the name of personal vendetta. When you came to power, you not only failed to call back the exiled brothers, but also received no compensation at all. You haven't even said a greeting for many years. When your son came out, you dragged him like a bastard worth 258,000 yuan and went around looking for maids. In the end, you didn't even wipe out the Luohuahui, the enemy of your brothers? Are you cheap or not? Your emperor is really a coward. Who dares to be your loyal lackey in the future? The eunuchs have to call you a waste. Your son's Nezha characteristics are true. You are as useless as Li Jing.

More than 67% of them have been viewed! First of all, there is a question about speaking Cantonese in the top post! But not much. The author changed it later. Anyway, I didn't charge money at the beginning. It's a small problem. Secondly, when you travel back in time and become a woman, to be honest, in my opinion, I just don't want to write or can't write the emotional line well. After all, I have read so much. So far, it doesn't make much difference whether the protagonist is male or female. Furthermore, anime fusion skills, how should I put them? If there is only one kind of fusion between the two, there is nothing to say, but after reading about 500,000 words, I came to the conclusion that it is flashy. The various abilities that appeared in the past will basically not appear again in the future, and there are many various system settings, so many, but they are insignificant. I think it is just a framework explanation to prevent book friends from arguing later. But when I got to the chapter of this book, I gave up because equipment similar to Hailou Stone appeared, which showed that the masters were planning around Hailou Stone, or they were in the melee style. Finally, look at the tags. Animation is just a source of inspiration for skills rather than real animation abilities. Time travel is real, the system is real, and the superpowers are not very visible. The same strength is basically a fist to the flesh. To crush the strength, just wave your hand. The protagonist uses all the bells and whistles and then punches to the flesh. It is not steamy or punk, and the idea is not strange at all. Watchable, but a bit boring. Finished,

The plot of taking in a younger brother felt particularly awkward. It was written like, "I beg you to be my younger brother."

It's only half a million words and it's already in the middle to late stages. It's a pity. According to your level, this book could have been written for more than two million. The content and creativity are also good. I don't know why you are in such a hurry. The author thinks he makes too much money?

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After watching it, I felt like there was something pressing in my heart, and I couldn't spit it out, and I couldn't swallow it.