Starting Today, I'm a Magical Girl!

Chapters 76-78 can be deleted, they have no meaning and are very poisonous. It is unclear whether the author is deliberately screening readers.

Putting aside the facts, can't you update 800 times a day?

There's no need to weaken Clow Reed. A multiverse-level powerhouse has been weakened to the point of barely being able to destroy a planet; he's been nerfed to a pulp. If you want to promote the protagonist, why not raise his power to the level of the Infinity Box? This constant belittling and praising is the mindset of a weakling.

Please consider that our readers are mostly Chinese. Don't let Japanese manga-like thinking get too ingrained in them, even if they're all elementary school students. Yamazaki selling Hayate's swimsuit photos is outrageous. I don't know if this kind of behavior is common in Japan, but in China, it's treated like bullying the protagonist and Hayate because they have no parents.

It's Magical Cannon! That's so rare, it's an old-timer already.

Kuro: Although in my prime I was the master of the four elements, wielding the power of light and darkness, and able to create and destroy the multiverse in an instant, I could not defeat a star destroyer that could destroy a star with a single shot, no matter how hard I tried.

It feels like the main character is being written in a single direction, but there's a character named Shan Qi whose identity is ambiguous, and there's a risk of him being forced into marriage. It's hard to say whether Sakura is the female lead, but the author seems to be intentionally emphasizing Tomoyo's feelings, so it's possible that Sakura and Tomoyo are a couple.

You've nerfed Clow Reed to a pulp. In the original work, he could create a world with a single thought, guaranteeing multidimensionality and distorting dimensions with just his thoughts. But in your version, he can't even unleash the damage of a planet-destroying cannon, and you specifically emphasize that this is a fully-powered Clow Reed. LOL.

It's so dry, there's absolutely no explanation of the background. Even a brief introduction would be helpful. Moreover, there was a lot of repetition. A single sentence was repeated countless times. The experience was very poor for those who hadn't seen it.

The "Gale" with infinite magic power, isn't that just infinite spell power? (Little Four Question Mark)