Already a Martial Saint, Yet Still Secretly Leveling Up!

I hope he ends up with his senior sister. All the other formulaic stories find reasons to make the woman look down on the protagonist, and I'm already tired of reading them. The author handles this very well, and I'm looking forward to it.

You're so great at writing this book, but did you even do the math? Let's say a county has 1 million people, 500,000 men and 500,000 women. Subtract the elderly and children, and only those under 20. If you have 50,000 people aged 14 to 18, that's considered amazing. Then subtract those with poor aptitude (20 to 1 ratio), leaving 2,500. Of those 2,500, let's say 300 have good aptitude.

I jumped straight to chapter 60, and there was no killing or fighting? It's all just everyday trivialities. Doesn't martial arts involve killing each other?

There's a really annoying setting that feels like it's just a bunch of nonsense. Fighting causes you to lose health and mana. The protagonist exchanged a punch with someone in a normal sparring match, and then lost 0.1 HP. No injuries, no broken skin, just a warm-up punch that drained my energy. There's no need for such a ridiculous premise in fantasy novels.

Author, please tell me where this extraterrestrial demon is from!

Your gang's combat strength is too weak. How could they possibly control such a large territory? It's like the agreement between the merchant alliance and the gang mentioned earlier—they don't disclose cross-regional martial arts training. In the merchant alliance, a mid-level member must be from a Qi Condensation family; what about high-level members? The gang is only at the Qi Condensation level? The power imbalance is huge!

Honestly, it's well-written, very readable, and the story is tightly paced. The emotions are believable, and the dramatic events don't make you predict the ending from the beginning. The character progression system is also well-designed, creating a strong sense of progression. Overall, it's a good book, like reading one of Gun Kai's books. Of course, it only truly shines if the later parts don't turn out bad.

I'm so confused by all the members of the Su family with the surname Su, I can't tell who's who! Damn it!

The writing is alright, but some plot points are a bit tedious. The biggest problem is that sometimes there are five or six sentences where two people are talking in a jumbled mess. The first person says one sentence, the second person says two sentences, and then the first person says another sentence, making it impossible to tell them apart.

This level of writing doesn't seem like that of a novice author.