Cultivating Immortality Through the Unorthodox Path to Mend Dream of the Red Chamber

The protagonist is now the kept Xiao Lanliang, or a cosplayer of a Taoist priest

The most important thing about the romantic scenes in The Red Mansion is that it opens up a harem, but there is a point in how to contain it. Going to bed as soon as they meet is vulgar.

Author, can you handle it well and stop similar plots from happening again?

If you have the intention to poison Jia Jing, who used to be nice to you, you won't kill the people who bullied you before. Good people deserve to be held at gunpoint. This sentence is still rising.

Hurry up, how can you not be popular if you update ten times a day? You just don't update much now, and my friend likes to watch something with color.

I hope that plots like Yangzhou won't appear too frequently in the future, unless you plan to follow ordinary cultivation novels and all kinds of big battles. Mortal forces, cities and areas are all controlled by various cultivation forces. The protagonist has various talents and adventures, and obtains treasures to increase his strength, but the enemies are also constantly upgrading. Every time, he uses all his strength to finally defeat the enemy. . . I don't know if other readers are enthusiastic about this, I just feel 😴

Don't be like the one I read before. I wrote two chapters about Yuanchun serving the emperor. This is the first time. The author must not write this kind of outrageous plot. If you don't accept Yuanchun, don't write in that direction.

The protagonist's own fate has changed. Just by becoming a Taoist boy, he is as light as a swallow. Jia Jing died early and gained supernatural powers. He is not afraid of killing people. Hasn't the Taoist boy been a bad person in the past few years? Because Tongtian Avenue is all about killing. Isn't it easy to just kill someone in the Red Mansion? You are as light as a swallow and can kill more than a dozen. You can track a group of Taoist priests, assassinate and kill them head-on. You can probably use countless magical powers in one night.

I thought there was something new, but wearing the skin of Red Mansion is still like a fantasy pornographic novel. It's disgusting.

Your protagonist has no clan legislation. There is no moral concept. If you look at it from another angle, you and Jia Zhen are no different. No matter how beautiful you describe the protagonist. In my impression, he is wretched. A good man, even if you are writing a Yuanzi play in Red Mansions, you can't write about the things in your crotch all day long. And you changed my life in just one day. What are your settings?

Why are you so sluggish in cleaning up the Lai family? Your character is completely ruined.

I don't understand why many Red Mansions novels regard Lin Ruhai as the emperor's confidant. This is impossible. It's pure nonsense. The highest rank of the Salt Patrol Censor is only the fifth rank. For ordinary officials, it is a fat position. But don't people who read Red Mansions take a look at Lin Ruhai's background? Is this a fat position considering his background? He was obviously suppressed and kept in this position until he finally died of illness in office. Don't you think that the emperor's confidants would never come to Yangzhou without an imperial edict? Is it true that the emperor's confidants would not have an imperial edict until they died of illness? In the past, when the emperor's confidants took up local officials, especially some dangerous positions, they would receive an imperial edict, reward, and condolences every two or three years. If you are still required to hold this key position, they will give you various false titles. Lin Ruhai does not have any. I don't know why the starting point of the Red Building is now It is written that Lin Ruhai is the emperor's confidant, how did he come up with this 😥 Lin Ruhai is a typical representative of a noble who transferred to a civil service, and was suppressed in various ways after trying his best to successfully transform. Otherwise, with his imperial examination background and his noble family background, how could he still be pressed into the position of Salt Patrol Censor when he was around 50! The same is true for Jia Jing, who also has the title of Jinshi, a representative of the Four Kings and Eight Dukes, the heir to Ningguo Duke's mansion, and finally became a Taoist priest. Isn't it not obvious that the original work of Red Mansions implies? Originally from the group of nobles, four princes and eight public officials, being born means that there is no chance for the civil service group in this life, and they have to force their way in. This also implies that the Jia family's conversion of military affairs to civil affairs was a complete failure. Other nobles inherited the title by their legitimate sons and developed in the army, and their second sons or concubines went to the imperial examination to become civil servants. In the end, the Jia family failed in both civil and military affairs, and was completely liquidated and defeated.

If you read the original work carefully, you will know that this girl Baochai has a strong sense of motherhood and is a petty person. The crab feast is so embarrassing.

After all, Zuo Dao is also a cultivator, not like that.

It's the stuff in the original book, hosting a crab feast for Shi Xiangyun, running a poetry club to write rough poems for people, arranging painting materials for people, eavesdropping for a long time and being found framed, saying that Lin Daiyu was bitten by a snake, Jin Chuan went to Mrs. Wang as soon as possible after his death, Xue Baochai, the most popular person in the Jia family. Go up a pole and go to Jia Baoyu's place to embroider his bellyband. Nowadays, the author writes about a high-ranking official protagonist who has extraordinary abilities and is also suave, handsome and rich in gold. If the author writes about Xue Baochai carrying a shelf, you don't write a plot similar to Xue Baochai climbing up a pole, such as everyone at noon Don't blame the readers for criticizing you for the plot where she went to embroider her bellyband during the afternoon nap It's not that I dislike Xue Baochai, but I don't want to write about being dignified, virtuous, and well-managed in the household. It's completely inconsistent with Xue Baochai's setting. It's pretty good for Haofeng to send me to Qingyun with his strength.

The rest of the story is too bland. The protagonist seems to be lying down, waiting for the plot to develop. The Jinchai people come to the protagonist for help when they encounter problems. There is nothing that the protagonist wants to promote, and there is nothing exciting at all.

My evaluation is the abridged version of Liu Huangshu

Halfway through, I saw that Aunt Xue called Sister Youshi and died of poison.

It's interesting to write a novel, but you have to deal with it to the death

I wrote a lot of things, but when I looked at it, I realized that it had been less than a year since I left the mountain. Subtracting the three months that I went to Jiangnan, all the remaining things happened in less than half a year? I saw these chapters recently. Baoyu got married on August 15th. After the marriage, there was a few days of turmoil. Then he wrote about the Tanchun Reform and did a lot of things. The sprouts came out. But you said that August was over and it was September... Do you sometimes stop? Why are you so reluctant to move the timeline? It's such a drama. Even if it takes a year or two to add up to all these things, do you really want to work so hard that you can't finish more than ten chapters to become an immortal?

Come on, I've read so many Red Mansions, some pure garden dramas, some combining chaotang and garden dramas. This one doesn't write much about chaotang, but it's the most comfortable one to read.

Xiang Ling

Edition 89

Edition 89

Qian Xue fell asleep several times, but she didn't sleep again in Chapter 65. I remember it was hinted that she slept twice for the first time. Can I still read Chapter 65 after Forgetting Three Times?

It feels like there aren't many people there, and it's quite nice I was also recommended here, and the author should do more promotion.

You should take the Supreme Emperor to cultivate immortality later, right? He is pretty good to the protagonist.

Is there a family bucket or something like that? Hey, it doesn't matter if there isn't one.

Shadow version

I finished reading Chapter 300 in two days. Are there any other masterpieces?😠