Cultivating Immortality Through the Unorthodox Path to Mend Dream of the Red Chamber

The main character is currently a kept woman named Xiao Lanliang, and is also cosplaying as a Taoist priest.

The most important aspect of the romance in *Dream of the Red Chamber* is the establishment of a harem, but how these harems are formed is crucial. Sleeping together upon first meeting is vulgar.

Author, can you please handle this better? Please stop having such outrageous plot twists.

The saying "You're willing to poison Jia Jing, who used to be good to you, but not kill the people who used to bully you" is still gaining traction.

Hurry up, if you update ten times a day, how can you not be popular? The problem is you're updating too infrequently; my buddy just likes to read something with a bit of color.

I hope that plots like Yangzhou won't appear too frequently in the future, unless you plan to follow ordinary cultivation novels and all kinds of big battles. Mortal forces, cities and areas are all controlled by various cultivation forces. The protagonist has various talents and adventures, and obtains treasures to increase his strength, but the enemies are also constantly upgrading.

The rest of the story is too bland. The protagonist seems to be lying down, waiting for the plot to develop. The Jinchai people come to the protagonist for help when they encounter problems. There is nothing that the protagonist wants to promote, and there is nothing exciting at all.

I don't understand why many novels about *Dream of the Red Chamber* portray Lin Ruhai as a confidant of the emperor. That's impossible, pure nonsense. The highest rank for a salt inspector was only fifth grade, a lucrative position for an ordinary minor official. But do readers of *Dream of the Red Chamber* not consider Lin Ruhai's background? Was it a lucrative position for someone of his birth?

The platform has a strict rule against writing about mothers and daughters; if you even touch on that, the backend will flag it, and the review process will be excruciating. This is a lesson learned by several stubborn authors of *Dream of the Red Chamber*. They even encounter readers who don't like it, or envious colleagues who report them, and they're sure to get a positive result. You wouldn't want your hard work to be blocked and taken down halfway through, would you?

My assessment is that it's an abridged version of Liu Bei.