The Magic Network Collapsed Again: From Militiaman to Evil God

You've already written about Mystra, why do you still write about Japanese-style goblins? How could Magnubier, with his medium divine power, allow goblins to ignore their mother's reproductive capabilities? Little Japan's private settings are in my head, this is not a dnd fan at all

The writing is not good at the beginning. You just kill a goblin on page 1 and then take office directly. I saw the end of Chapter 2 and the golden finger came into play. And the protagonist behaves like this when facing goblins, what else is there to look at? Even if your protagonist is a new time traveler, I won't say anything else. It's been a year since you time travel, and you still haven't gotten used to this little monster? Have you ever fought goblins before?

Is it really fake DND? . Only those who practice swordsmanship can become warriors? What a polearm. . Do people in the sewers serve people? Otherwise, just go west and be done with it. No need to bring the dnd mark, 5 wisdom makes people want to laugh when they look at it. I couldn't hold back when I thought that the protagonist could only speak "Abba".

A militiaman who had been trained for a year had to fight a one-meter-tall Goblin for 300 rounds. He was so frightened that he shivered. His sword could produce sparks even if he cut a wooden stick. In the end, even the sword broke. I thought you were fighting a Warhammer Orc!

Throw yourself into the street. Since you don't listen to advice, just drown yourself in your fantasy.

I suggest the author change it. A man who is about to become a warrior fights a dwarf-like goblin in a thrilling chapter. The baron mage dies in front of his eyes without being searched. Has the author really thought about the plot?

The start can be fixed. Few people like to see the protagonist make mistakes. Where can the goblin weapons be smoother? There is also the setting of the goblin. Why does this setting have to be killed by a trick? It's not lovable in itself, but will drive some people away.

The time traveler lives like a native, like a native with a plug-in

The first chapter is poisonous. How do goblin masters with medium divine power achieve indiscriminate reproduction among females 😅 Is there no Suni Earth Mother in this world?🤔

Goblin killing version, please pay attention if you want to see it