My Years Pioneering the Immortal Realm

If you, the author, make your readers unhappy, your subscription will also make you unhappy. Just tell me, have you really enjoyed it since it was put on the shelves? The latest two, one is a whole chapter about spell settings, and then a whole chapter about various inquiring information. I really want to support you, but you can't treat readers as fools. You talk about settings, but who told you not to talk about settings? But is the protagonist really happy? In the early stage, you and the Wei family revealed the details of your secret skills to others. What if they wanted to kill you? He ceded land to save his life and recognized his uncle. Later, he even took his young son in and taught him everything. There is also the innate Zhou Wu who wants to invite the protagonist to be a fan. If the protagonist does not agree, he will be killed by him. However, later on, the protagonist has no grudges and actually becomes a fan. . . . Readers are unhappy, it will really be obvious to subscribe

To put it bluntly, it's your fault to use magic skills when you don't have the strength. In a world like this, you still want to reform the cultivation system if you don't have the strength. The environment in this world is not in line with your line. Either you can change it after you have mastered the magic skills, or you can just live with it for now.

A good one is the golden elixir, which has a deeper magic power than the foundation building. The one who is also taught by the Supreme Heavenly Court is at least a first-grade golden elixir, holding a top-quality defensive magic weapon produced by the heavenly court. Being beaten by four great masters whose combat prowess was comparable to that of the Golden Pill, he vomited blood and almost destroyed his magic weapon. He is really the ancestor of the golden egg!

I have read the author's book and got a taste of it, the taste of petty bourgeoisie. It's like standing on the shore and directing others to rush forward. Wanting to change the world and subvert social rules, but at the same time being aloof, commanding from a remote control, and compromising with the original profit-seeking class, does it sound like a right-wing trend?

Author, the protagonist should be confused about the history of this world and why Emperor Zhenwu appears. Why is it written like a different world with different gods and gods? The appearance of familiar things in a strange world should be confusing. Even if you write later and the protagonist knows the truth, you should write it in the front instead of taking it as a default, so that the plot has the feeling of tracing the secrets of history.

I haven't ordered any of the recent chapters. The subject matter was quite good at first, but it changed after the collapse of Wen Xiang Guan. What you write about in this article is that the sect cultivates farming, so it should close its gates and seek immortality. Isn't it good to write down and deduce the exercises honestly and find out if the apprentice has to participate in worldly affairs? Why are ancient Taoist temples different from Buddhist temples? They were always built in deep mountains and old forests or high mountains, so they could practice Taoism without any interruption from people or things. Being too involved in worldly affairs not only lowered the qualifications of his only sect that cultivates immortality, but also brought him down to the level of a martial arts sect. And if you have too many miscellaneous things to do, how can you improve your strength? Is it really written as a martial arts novel about a battle breakthrough or something? Taoism always emphasizes enlightenment. If you don't have time to understand how to improve yourself, you have no strength, and your reputation and territory are empty.

The first three chapters In my previous life, I was an ordinary worker. I worked tirelessly and only liked playing games. After traveling through time, he has no martial arts skills, his master is dead, he has no background, he is devoured, and the protagonist is still confident even though the golden finger has not yet appeared: This is a very stressful start, I like it. What do you like? Like to be under great pressure and get off to a bad start, and like to be beaten to death? You like to overcome difficulties so much. What did you do in your previous life? As for being a tired worker who only likes to play games? Where is the logic? At the end of the fourth chapter, you rest and sleep to communicate with cheats, but it is estimated that many people were persuaded to quit by the protagonist Pu Xin who did not even have cheats in the first three chapters. After reading the book review, it seems there are some poisonous points. . .

After reading Chapter 26, I would like to summarize the poisonous points The protagonist Goldfinger is too complicated There is too much nonsense, and the enemies are annoying. The pretentious writing is too deliberate. It is the same as the plot of the novel ten years ago. People don't like this kind of plot these days. It may be that the author is a novice and does not have the experience of those old authors. I don't know what the poisonous points are at the end. Judging from the author's level, he can't write more than 500 chapters.

Why is the part where the Overlord comes to visit so ridiculous? Just because he could have killed you but didn't do it, you owe him a favor? He didn't actually kill the protagonist, but he did add fuel to the flames by borrowing a knife to kill someone. What a few pounds of stuff. It's good enough if you don't kill him. What kind of thinking? The biggest drawback of this book is that the author's thinking is different from ordinary people's.

You don't call this a sect cultivation stream, but a nanny dedication stream, right? Accepting a disciple is done in exchange for benefits, regardless of character or talent. He also personally helped him kill his enemies and even brought his whole family into his family. Will his seven aunts and eight aunts be accepted as disciples when the time comes?