My Years Pioneering the Immortal Realm

If you, the author, make the readers unhappy, then subscribing will also make you unhappy. Tell me, have you really had a good time since the game was released? The last two chapters are either a whole chapter about the magic system or a whole chapter about gathering information. I really want to support you, but you can't treat your readers like fools.

To put it bluntly, displaying supernatural powers without real strength is your crime. In a world like this, wanting to reform the cultivation system without power is idiotic. This world doesn't suit your path. Either master your supernatural powers before making changes, or just lie low for now.

What a shrewd guy! He's a Golden Core cultivator with even greater magical power than a Foundation Establishment cultivator, and he's even trained by the Supreme Heavenly Court! He's at least a first-grade Golden Core cultivator, wielding a top-tier defensive magic treasure from the Heavenly Court.

Having read the author's book, I can taste its flavor—the flavor of the petit-bourgeoisie. It's the kind of person who stands on the shore, directing others to charge forward. They want to change the world, overturn social rules, yet remain aloof, remotely controlling, while also compromising with the original rentier class. Doesn't that have a right-wing flavor?

The author and protagonist should be puzzled by the history of this world and the reason for the appearance of the True Martial Emperor. Why is it written like an alternate world with different gods and immortals? The appearance of familiar things in a strange world should naturally cause confusion. Even if the protagonist learns the truth later, it should be stated earlier, not presented as an implicit assumption. This would give the plot a sense of meticulously tracing back to history.

I haven't subscribed to any recent chapters. The initial theme was quite good, but it changed after the destruction of the Fragrance Temple. Your story is about cultivating and farming within a sect; you should be closing the gates to seek immortality and enlightenment. Why not just focus on developing cultivation techniques and nurturing disciples? Why get involved in worldly affairs?

The first three chapters In my previous life, I was an ordinary working person who worked myself to the bone and only liked playing video games. After transmigrating, the protagonist has no martial arts skills, his master is dead, he has no background, his family has been wiped out, and his cheat ability hasn't appeared yet.

After reading 26 chapters, here's a summary of the problematic aspects. The protagonist's cheat ability is too complicated Too much nonsense, dragging things out when facing the enemy. The pretentiousness is written too deliberately, just like the plot of a novel from ten years ago. People don't like this kind of plot these days.

The part where the overlord comes knocking is so ridiculous. Just because he could have killed you but didn't, you owe him a favor? He didn't kill the protagonist, but he certainly fanned the flames and used others to kill him. What a load of rubbish. It's good enough that he wasn't killed. What kind of thinking is that? The biggest flaw in this book is that the author's thought process is different from ordinary people.

This isn't a sect-building story, it's more like a devoted nanny story! You take in a disciple based on a transaction, ignoring their character and talent entirely. You even personally kill their enemies and bring their whole family into your sect. Does that mean you'll have to take in all their distant relatives as disciples too?