The Years I Spent Creating the Ancient Heavenly Court

Problem with this book. In fact, the writing level is still good, but the reason why the results did not meet expectations is mainly because the book was written like an instruction manual and lacked a sense of immersion. Although the word sense of substitution has been overused...

Ten points can be given for the research plot, but 1 point for other plots, which seriously lowers the overall level. In particular, the author likes to make the protagonist pretend to be embarrassed, and likes to make the protagonist appear holy in front of others. The social plot is also very awkward. I heard that the following year the Golden Elixir Qian Immortal and the Foundation-Building Qian Yuanying were incredible. . .

The writing is too complicated, too messy, and too boring. You can research it, but it won't work if you write down almost one-half of the whole story. Once you solve the forty-year limit, it starts to turn into a story about the protagonist pretending to be cool. It's very embarrassing. The protagonist is always portrayed as very smart, and as a result, there are a lot of stragglers in the plot later.

Abandoned, forced emotional drama. Too embarrassing

The summary is that the Holy Mother Bitch told the sect all her trump cards in more than two hundred chapters, and she couldn't see any of the cruelty in the world of immortality. Han Li joined a sect and honestly told the sect about the magic weapons he carried, the exercises he learned, and all the opportunities he had, and then he breathed a sigh of relief and finally said it out, comfortably.

As soon as I saw the phrase "scientific world view", I vomited! Everything can be said to be science, just let the cultivators go! 🙄

Those who read it hope not to be affected by the comment area. The first few chapters of this book are indeed not very good, but it becomes more and more exciting later on. But the author is not famous, and we readers are also poor, so the book is not famous either, but it is really a good book.

It's too poisonous. There is no sign of becoming the Jade Emperor in the future. No matter what achievements the male protagonist has made or how much he has contributed to the sect, he still looks like that. When the two women frown a little, the male protagonist wants to take out his heart to prove himself. There is no hesitation at all. He has been compromising and never stopped. I'm not a macho man, but you can't expect a male protagonist with no masculinity to make me pay. As of the last chapter before it is released, I have withdrawn it. I hope there will be more in the future.

It's not good to watch, there's no plot, it's all just fantasy. The author's idea of ​​cultivating immortality in this book seems to be an upgraded version of the internal strength system in martial arts novels, and then the protagonist uses some modern scientific theories to analyze it, which is completely nonsense. It's as ridiculous as using component theory to analyze Chinese medicine. The guiding ideology of Chinese medicine is the theory of rising and floating of yin and yang, which has nothing to do with Western medicine. For example, based on the ingredient theory, Western medicine says that ginseng can replenish vitality mainly due to ginsenosides, but ginseng leaves contain more ginsenosides. However, ginseng leaves not only cannot replenish qi, but are also poisonous. Rhinoceros horns have the same ingredients as nails, but grinding rhino horns into powder can immediately reduce fever and lowering the temperature. Grinding nails into powder and eating them is of no use. Furthermore, Zhengdao is the original Taoism and the Fulu sect. It is not completely true. It talks about inner alchemy. The Fulu sect cultivates merits and virtues. The Dharma is destiny and does not need to be practiced. The author uses scientific methodology to analyze it.

Come back and curse again, garbage, a waste of time. What is written in the introduction is fake. The protagonist has not yet practiced the fake thing to become the real thing. Halfway through practicing it, he told others about his golden finger. He has such a big heart, and everyone else is a kind person. The protagonist and supporting characters forcefully suppress their intelligence.