Let Me Go, Witch!

The picture shows her studying the runes on the altar after she transformed from a spider woman back to a human (later she was attacked and tied up by George).

"Alfa Cavalry. Dressed in Ceremonial Magic Pattern Armor" Comment: "Ah, every wizard has a set of wizard robes that fit well, and I am the same"---George ............................. "The Sword of Augusta's Heritage" Comment: "I, a fake, actually picked up the Grand Duke's sword of heritage..."---George

"Although I already have a wizard's mask (helmet), wizard's robe (armor) and wand (big sword), but this mask, ancient wizard's robe, and wand... Who said I can't wear it because I have low intelligence! You are discriminating!" - George

Magic power +1, magic energy 10/10. Produced by Back Street. Evaluation: "When I saw this appearance, I knew that this wand was not only strong, but also easier to use" - George

The story is very well written, but I don't know why but it makes me tired. I feel like the words are very dense and the information is too much or too unclear. I can't explain it.

I don't know why, but the more serious fantasy movies I've been reading lately all like the word "apprentice" so much, including low-level apprentice, high-level apprentice, master apprentice, and apprentice assistant. It's really frustrating. It's understandable that I'm afraid that the combat power will increase too quickly and the progress will be slowed down, but we still have to pay attention to the applicable scenarios of the word "apprentice", right?

Ghosts (other banshees)

Why does the author's writing feel so confusing? Instead of a narrated story, like a random charging carriage, could it be that the author has blurred the boundaries of psychological description and plot advancement, allowing the scenes to constantly change, resulting in the inability to shape the characters and only telling the plot?

The monetary system is so bullshit. People who are desperate for three hundred dollars can just spend hundreds of thousands.

The three golden chapters are full of intensity in the beginning, but the follow-up is weak... There are many problems in the previous book. For example, the failure to reconcile the weird and wizard levels leads to the collapse of the power system. For example, too much moderator content makes the heroine unlikable. For example, the level of various subplots is uneven. Some are very witty and interesting, and some are chaotic and weird. It makes people feel irritable and want to skip chapters. For example, opening a large map makes the plot very fragmented. But the background of the story itself is good, and it gives people a strange feeling that it can become a masterpiece as long as the author reinvents it... The author is good at writing witty jokes, magical story settings and unique character actions, which are very suitable for comedy. I hope the author can seize his own strengths and give up those plots that not only fail to enrich the content, but instead hinder it. (The Straw Town in the above article is quite good. It is both abstract and fun. It is much more interesting than the Academy of Gods and Vampire Wizards. The atmosphere that is obviously very happy but is particularly eerie after careful consideration is much better than the forced and indescribable development. It can be connected with the plot at the beginning without being separated. It can be developed as a long-term branch plot. It can be adjusted from time to time. Why is Roland's little romance happening again? "The me of yesterday, the me of tomorrow, does it count as me?" "How can a person be a saint, a devil, a profiteer and a fanatic at the same time? What, you said you saw me in the "flower" shop?")

The world controlled by money is indeed very attractive, but the powerful wizard who possesses the most powerful violence actually does not plunder the old nobles but cooperates with the devil to lend money? So nonsensical

In fact, it's all about sorting 😰

Feeling so messy? What kind of fanfic is this? The first time I watched it, I felt that the plot was very confusing and a lot of it was incomprehensible. I didn't know if it was set by a fan.

The male protagonist obtains the qualification of a great sage at the beginning, and claims to be able to learn magic abilities at a glance. I would like to remind you that this ability is Schrödinger's type. You can't learn the acid splashing and activation techniques used by others. Those who can withstand this little poison can continue to watch 😒

To be honest, I can't understand it, I really can't understand it, it's so fucking tiring to watch. The language really needs to be refined. The story can be seen to be very exciting.

It looks good, but how does the author make these economic systems circulate in the wizard? You know, if you have too much debt, ordinary people can still become old people. Will these wizards kill the creditors?

The reading threshold is too high. I have never played The Witcher, so all the background information has to be searched specifically, and the Riddler part is mixed in and I don't understand the setting, which makes the reading experience a bit fragmented.

It's a bit confusing to watch, and I can't keep up with the author's perspective switching speed. I often realize that I don't know who I'm looking at, such as this clip: when the male protagonist meets his aunt, he suddenly becomes a mercenary and the boss's wife. I didn't react at first and thought someone else was coming.

"I knew it! This seemingly harmless Fox is actually a tanar'ri that eats people without spitting out their bones! I will never do an ABC operation!" - George

(Picture 1: The scenery when returning to the academy from the Pilgrim Land) (Picture 2: Crow Hill underground ruins)

(Picture 1: Old building area, landmark building: Shouzhi Square Tower. It was the Stargazing Festival. Residents went to Shouzhi Square Tower to watch stars to celebrate the festival. At the same time, refugees crowded like waves under the holy white walls of the shelter (school city)) (Picture 2: When George went to the college mission area, he looked back. This is a corner of the college. The castle is a conjoined building complex, which is one of them) (Picture 3: In the corner of Bronzing Street, among the small buildings like an ant nest in the upper left corner, there is a chaotic backstreet. The Burning Blood Rose Tavern, the home of the mercenaries, is located in the backstreet) (Picture 4: In an era when people cannot afford to eat, there are still people who live well. Aged red wine has become a top luxury product. As long as it can be transported back, they will be willing to buy bags of magic stones.)

There is an obvious bug. Almost everyone is in debt, so where does this debt end up? Who is the ultimate creditor?

Author, it's time to sort out the typos and illogical sentences 😅

So why didn't the queen recognize the protagonist at that time? Or maybe she really believed it, and the protagonist said he was from Rhode Island? Why do you believe it? Just because the protagonist said a name? We have obviously seen the protagonist by the window, why does he have to use a deus ex machina to prevent her from recognizing him? I worked on it for several hours a few days ago, but after a few days, I can't even recognize it in front of me? Isn't it said that the queen's magic power is very strong? You don't mean to say that high magic value doesn't mean eyesight, right?

Can I ask if this book has a single female protagonist?

You should post this to the light novel section. I've only seen that kind of battle of wits and courage with the air in anime and game plots, and I didn't feel it was inconsistent. After ordering a few chapters, the more I read, the more uncomfortable I became. In the early stage, there were elements like killing lines, wasteland, etc. I thought it was a real fantasy style, similar to the mystery and mysticism of the fire. But the more I read, the more I felt that the plot was flat, low-key and direct, and it didn't have the youthful feeling of the Apocalypse Forecast. It can only be said to be useless.

There are so few people. I mean, relatively speaking, the settings and system account for too much. You can use other things to dilute it. Now I watch everything at a glance. I feel like I missed something, I feel like I watched something, and I feel like I didn't watch anything at all.

It is so well written and the author has a talent for telling stories.

Isn't transforming into a dragon an ability brought by the bug armor? When I obtained the secret authority before, I also said that what I needed to worry about was covering up the bloodline of the old emperor. To say that dragon blood is a bubble in the surface world or something like that, we need to avoid exposing the blood of the old emperor underneath. Logically speaking, he is a pure blood, but in the Duolun chapter, he becomes a mixed blood.

You can learn the dark curse in Chapter 2, but haven't learned the acid splash in Chapter 20? What's the point?