Open up the World Without Evil

As I close the book, I can't help but feel deeply regretful for the author's creative style. The text is like a quick product copied from a template, and the plot mechanically circulates on a clichéd track, lacking the tension and layering that the narrative should have. The character creation is purely symbolic, and the character traits are as vague as fog, as if they have not experienced the tempering of the soul. What is even more worrying is that the language expression seems to have been shackled. It has neither the charm of traditional narrative nor the spirit of pioneering exploration, and ultimately becomes a pale work that has lost its literary breath.

My evaluation is that it is a bit too formulaic and makes it lose several major characteristics of an online novel 1. The single paragraph of the text about the beginning of school is too long, which will dissuade some readers who like fast pace 2. There are many old books about this type of novel setting, and your setting is not novel, so it does not attract the audience.