99 Days Before the College Entrance Examination

I have heard of Chen Hansheng for a long time, and I have roughly read the outline of the story in the Qidian comment section. I feel that it is a magical book, and I have always wanted to find an opportunity to read it. The poster is studying Chinese language and has a job holder at home. There is a high probability that he will take the public exam in the future. Four and a half hours ago, I happened to be visiting an urban area by chance. I walked around for half an hour and found this book. I was attracted by the title and clicked on it to take a look. Subscribe to Chapter 103 and read to Chapter 80. I'm sorry that I can't accompany you on this journey. When I first read this book, I didn't recognize the author, nor did I realize that the character card had two female protagonists. After reading two chapters, I was deeply attracted. I was fascinated by Yu Xian, a hearty, beautiful and sincere girl from Sichuan and Chongqing. I thought it would be a great story about rebirth of love and career. Looking at the word count of less than 800,000, I hope to die before going to bed tonight. Around Chapter 40 or 50, as the plot developed and the book review bubble opened, I discovered that the author of this book was actually the author of "I Really Don't Want to Be Reborn." On the one hand, I was secretly happy that the quality of this book was guaranteed, but on the other hand, after seeing the character cards, I was worried about whether I could accept the emotional line. But no matter what, my enthusiasm for reading has not diminished. It wasn't until I entered college that I found that I couldn't stand the protagonist's behavior anymore. The author paved the way for the rationality of the two heroines in this book. Is it just the protagonist's inner thought after high school classmates misunderstood her relationship with Song Dynasty, "Can't let the good things slip away from her." The protagonist was just a small civil servant in her previous life. So after rebirth, on the basis of past life secret love and current relationship with Yu Xian, when he was misunderstood to be in a relationship with another girl, why, why should he make the choice not to deny it directly? Especially when Yu Xian's tragic life experience and emotional investment are so obvious? There are too many opportunities to deny it, and the protagonist's ambiguity makes people uncomfortable. At this time, I opened the book review section with doubts and anger towards the protagonist, and found that many book friends had the same emotions as me. Having two heroines just for the sake of two heroines, IMHO, is tantamount to feeding Song Shi. How many twists and turns of the plot must Wei Xian go through before his emotions can be compared with Yu Xianxian? And if the protagonist rejects Song without going through an extremely dramatic plot, then the protagonist will undoubtedly be the most outrageous, inhumane, and psychotic man I have ever seen in a Glory star or above. If you can accept Song, why don't you accept other beautiful girls? What's the difference between them and Song? Where are you from Yu Xian? Chen Hansheng has shown with practical actions from the beginning that he wants to be completely bad. The number of likes for the character card cosplay is almost twice that of Song, which probably explains some problems. I saw comments that refuted the single heroine argument and said that this book has two heroines from the beginning. If you don't like it, don't read it. That being the case, the fact that so many people were opposed to the dual heroines at the beginning shows the failure of the plot and characterization. Especially after looking through the book friends circle, it seems that there is no eye-catching plot in the later chapters to make up for the imbalance of the protagonist's emotional line. Then I choose to retreat. I'm not afraid of everyone's jokes. I am 19 years old and my mother is single. I consider myself to be better off than Chen Ergou in terms of my family background and the school I attend. If I could win the love of a Sichuan and Chongqing girl like Yu Xian, I think I would be the luckiest man in the world, and I would never betray her until my death. I have neither the ability nor the justification to be reborn, although I often wish that such a thing would happen to me. When I watch Chen Ergou, I seem to feel more immersed in him than when I watch other protagonists in cool novels. I envy him the opportunity to help the beautiful Yu Xian, and I also envy his ability to help the beautiful Yu Xian resolve the crisis. Of course, I also hate that Chen Ergou will inevitably make Yu Xian's heart pierce in the book... I don't want Yu Xian to have the doubts of the female elf Tauriel in "The Lord of the Rings". I don't want her to get hurt because of love. Put aside the author's interests, what is the significance of this book? The author only used 30,000 to 40,000 words to make me unable to let go of a girl, but it also only used 30,000 to 400,000 words to make me lose the courage to accompany Yu Xian. Farewell, everyone. I know there are people who will agree with me, and I know there are people who will judge me harshly. In any case, this first review written by hand on my phone for an hour late at night is enough to show that I have at least tried to briefly analyze a book and whether I can finish reading it. Book friends who are willing to read on may be braver than me, and may have deeper insights than me. I invite you to witness Yu Xian's story. In my memory, I choose to let her always be innocent, always dare to love and hate, and always be eighteen years old. 🌹

The first is Yu Xian's character, who dares to love and hate. The progress of her relationship with Chen Zhu is too fast, and there is not much reason. It seems that the biggest reason is that she likes good grades. Since she likes good grades, how could it be Chen Zhu's turn to show off when he is a senior in high school? He has been deceived by others long ago. It is precisely because Yu Xian's emotional line is too fast that the following line has nothing to write about. It is all industrial saccharine. Moreover, under this kind of character, how to deal with Yu Xian's Shura field? If Chen Zhu is tolerated, the character will be ruined. The second thing is that Chen Zhuo's personality is inconsistent with his work style. Chen Gou's character is that of a hypocritical, rational, and elite person in the officialdom. The question arises, since it is this kind of character, why does he have a different attitude? It's not a matter of character, but the risk is too great. What is the benefit of Chen Gou stepping on two boats? It is nothing more than having one more woman, but what are the risks? Don't look at the article. It says that Chen Gou is so powerful and so powerful. He is valued by the school and people from all walks of life think it is good. But now he has no real backing and will be broken at the touch of a button. To put it bluntly, if Song's parents knew that Chen Gou was in two different situations, they could easily destroy Chen Gou's career, leaving no room for improvement. For example, if the matter of Chen Gou having two boats is exposed, as a new brand, how will the public view it? As long as the public opinion is fermented a little, the school will definitely deal with it and give support to Chen Gou? It's impossible, and as for the TV station, it's even more impossible. To put it bluntly, if Father Song wants to surpass the current Chen Gou, it is too simple and does not require a lot of effort. In this case, Chen Gou tried to use two boats, just to have one more woman? Do you think this is in line with the cautious and cautious character style in official circles? Chen Gou has to tread two boats. At least he has to wait until his wings are full and he is no longer afraid of Song's father before he can do it. Now Chen Gou is in two different situations. Song's father and Song's mother only want to kill him. Only after Chen Gou's career has become successful can he be qualified to take the negotiating table. The outline of this book should not have been well thought out. It is like following the routine of the previous book, but wanting to be slightly innovative, and the result is like this. To be honest, it would be better to follow the pattern of the previous book, it would be more readable.

The male protagonist is not worthy of Yu Xian, he is like a hypocritical bastard. Just talking about gift-giving, Yu Xian thinks about saving up money every day to buy him a good mobile phone and brand-name clothes. As for the male protagonist, he has given countless gifts to various leaders in the tens of thousands. In order to open up relationships, he gave half a million to a man named Qu without blinking an eye, not even during the holidays. I have read more than 350 chapters of giving gifts to Yu Xian. I have never even bought a skirt for Yu Xian, even if it costs tens of dollars. I don't care about the small broken mobile phone I use. I only say some love words to give emotional value. What is the difference between this and Zheng Hao.

Let me first say that I am not a porn star all afternoon. Secondly, I came in to read the two books on the list, "Who Will Fall in Love After Rebirth" and "Forcing Me to Be Reborn?" Because I saw similar ones. I also paid to read them I won't say more, I I thought it was written by the author of "I Didn't Want to Be Reborn". I thought it would give me a different experience than the other two books. But after reading it, I can only say it's disgusting. Maybe you don't think it's a problem with the first two heroines. I won't tell you why the plot of Dahuang is so smelly? How many words did you read in Dahuang's play? I read the novel to make myself feel happy, not for you to do it. You have made money from me but haven't given me any emotional value! What do you call "Vladimir" to suck the blood of the fans of your last book? Some people may say it is to pave the way for the following plot, but brother, I have read more than 20 chapters of this rhubarb plot and there may be more to come. Isn't it disgusting to write it? There is also a problem with the character you created for the protagonist. Pure prostitutes and Hua Dabing are just soft-boiled and use some words to provide emotional value to others, and then continue to use them after giving emotional value to others. Also, who is the heroine Song Shiwei in the story? The protagonist can make a real Bai Fumei spend so much money on you by saying a few words to her? You also gave Bai Fumei a lesson. To be honest, at that time, her father was a stock player and her mother was a professor. Both of them were scheming. Song Shiwei's social experience would not be any worse no matter how bad her social experience was. Furthermore, the image you created for her was that of a cold-blooded academic master and a winner in life from a business family. Why would Bai Fumei spend money on you just because she has known you for a few months? Give you something brand new and unopened worth over 20,000 yuan? What about fantasy? Just because it's fun? Are you kidding me with this? The heroine Yu Xian is portrayed well, but I still want to ask you, do you want to write a plot about "UFC boxer Conor and his wife working for eight years to send Conor to train?" There are also some things in the previous plot that have nothing to do with the protagonist. The abrupt insertion is not continuous enough and looks very stiff. Don't pretend to be so stiff and don't treat the readers as fools. Although you are just writing a book, some readers are more serious and will analyze your point from a realistic perspective. In real life, it is not consistent with common sense, and if you are reborn, you should not act like you are 3 or 40 years old. You must always understand that you are a young man under 20 years old. What you portray is a greasy, mature, and then show yourself to others from time to time. In what age are you now still doing this kind of stiff and embarrassing pretense? To be honest, don't you feel embarrassed watching it? My final comment is that it is normal that your monthly subscription is not as high as the above two books. What you are eating now is the leftover popularity of the previous book. The writing of this book is stiff, the plot is average, and the characters are average. I feel that the other supporting characters have no brains, and only the protagonist has the same

It completely copied the framework of the previous book, including these supporting characters. The shadows in the previous book can also be found. In the latest plot, Zheng Hao, a supporting character, has set up a scumbag character to scumbag the heroine's best friend. The protagonist is watching his girlfriend's best friend being scumbag, and he is reborn, haha! The most ridiculous thing is that when writing a plot about a supporting character fishing, you have to combine various psychological analysis. Are you here to teach readers how to be a scumbag? The plot is procrastinating and there are various watery chapters. If the previous book was a masterpiece, this one is a complete mess!

This book is just a piece of shit. I won't listen to anything the readers say. I'm just opening an opinion thread to cover my ears. It's a pretense of creating a protagonist with a different personality from Chen Hansheng. In fact, it's very easy to write in a template without having to pay attention to the logic of the character's behavior. As for the love of arranging plots for supporting characters to be cuckolded and toyed with, and for the protagonist to get a partner, maybe it's writing about the author himself who once longed to be pulled in? Otherwise, it is hard to imagine why a mature author of cool articles always likes to feed poisonous points.

Hey💩book, disgusting, how can the protagonist be at ease as the boyfriend of the cosplayer, and still can't explain clearly that he is not Song's boyfriend? Where is the explanation unclear? If you don't know, it's fine if you are regarded as a couple by others. But if you know, why don't you just say it in the group or in person? Otherwise, I should tell these two people clearly that you are all my wings, or else I should not explain anything here without explaining it, and then drag Song to do things together, wasting my money for subscribing to more than 150 chapters. It would be better for me to use it to buy a popsicle or a pack of cigarettes than to waste it on the subscription! ! ! ! ! Also, the plot of Dahuang and his best friend, I don't understand the reason why it is written like this. It makes me want to vomit. Does it have to be developed like this? You are writing an online novel. Reality is terrible💩. In your novel, I have to be fed by you. It is really disgusting🤢! ! ! ! !

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. I want to watch it but the plot is too stupid and disgusting. The characterization is so screwed up that both characters are sacrificed for the sake of two heroines. Rather than recognizing the bond created by getting along. In the early stage, the cosplay was so passionate and beautiful that Song was like an unrelated passerby. It was written that now Ergou has no feelings for Song, and he has made it public with his cosplay sister. When the website team was making noise, there was no explanation, which just made me feel baffled. Wouldn't normal people say "I have a girlfriend in Guangmei, let's meet together next time". Now, what about forcibly reducing intelligence? My lord, times have changed. After three years of layover, I still write in the same way as three years ago. I can't get through it!

It has to be written so intellectually, it's really disgusting from a God's perspective

There are more than 150 chapters in this book. Maybe I haven't read enough books, or maybe my life is not long enough. After reading the book reviews for a while, I can't find a few explanations about the supporting characters. I am very interested in the protagonist and supporting characters of this book. Their direct stories attract me, but just like a mouse droppings can ruin a pot of porridge. When Xu Yue appeared, my impression of this book plummeted. I am not an author and have never written much, but I feel that the plot of a book should not use supporting characters to disgust readers. Huang Baihan had a very good impression at the beginning. At least from the perspective of a supporting role, his brother as the protagonist should have a good story that belongs to him. He and Mou Jiawen should have a good story. Until Xu Yue appeared, Huang Baihan became a clown. In film and television terms, he fell from the supporting role. He doesn't deserve it. Forget it, I don't have much education. I can't explain what I'm thinking or what's going on in my heart. I just want to say that I originally wanted to book it all, but now I just feel that spending more than 20 yuan is no different from experiencing shit. Thousands of mountains and rivers, we are destined to meet again.

The most controversial thing recently is nothing more than two paragraphs of recycled words. The author thinks the writing is very good, but why don't readers pay for it? It's just a question. No matter how deep you bury it, readers will see it. What's more, you bought it just to make people miss you in the future. Many people can see it, and many people know it. As readers, we know very well what these things mean, but why is there such a thing? Damn it, readers can't understand your thoughts. The foreshadowing you laid was just for the sake of being heard in the future, but many of the foreshadowings you laid were illogical. There were also many big guys in the comment area who said that it was unreasonable for such people to do this. In order for the plot you want to happen in the future, you forced these characters to behave unreasonably. Can you watch it? One line collapsed after another, Weiwei's line collapsed, and I relied on my career line to save me. If I couldn't save it, I would use the COS line to block it. If I couldn't stop it, I would use the supporting character to block it. Dahuang and Sister Wuyu are all victims. We don't just want to read the novel you wrote. Our purpose is not that simple. We believe you can write good novels, so we want to read it. Don't use this kind of thing against us. It's disgusting and chilling. There is no need to use those deceptive words to deceive us. No matter how you say it, you will just leave if you feel chilled. There is nothing to say. This is not how we screen readers. Now those who clean you up and speak for you are so feeble and weak. They can only use you to read a book to self-hypnotize us and make us believe that you will get better sooner or later if we continue to wait. If you think it doesn't matter, this book should be cut earlier to leave some fate for these people. At least they are still willing to believe in your strength. This is a retreat anyway, isn't it?

Let me put it officially, the more I watch it lately, the more uncomfortable I feel, and the more I watch it, the more worried I become! This kind of rhythm is not very good. When the protagonist has a stable single line, he is still ambiguous with other girls, and the supporting character is just a bad guy. This rhythm is wrong. What's the problem? Why is it not as good as the last one? ! Reason: Rescue and bullying, the starting point is the gap! The previous book, Xiao Yuer's journey through youth alone, might be acceptable, but having love might be better. It is sad that Youchu died young. Chen Gou was reborn to save You Chu and complete Xiao Yu'er. Although it was not perfect, it was acceptable. What now? ! A perfect Sichuan girl who dares to love and hate, falls into Chen Ergou's love and devotes herself wholeheartedly. Are two dogs compatible? ! A lonely goddess who is independent from the world, lingering around Ergou ambiguously, because it is interesting. Bitch or tea? ! Where is Ergou? Is it really okay for an official to play political tricks on campus, call the shots, bully men and dominate women? ! I admire him for playing political tricks well, and I also learned a lot. I even feel that if the university had one-tenth of the ability, life would be completely different. I really want to learn from Lao Liu's structure and tactics, but I can't bear to see the cosplayer being wronged! More importantly, do you know why in most university settings, student unions are villains? Why? ! Young and passionate, he hates bureaucracy! Disgusted by flies and dogs! I hate the smoky politics from top to bottom! When we grow up, we know that money is hard to make and shit is hard to eat. Now we are very tired of living in such a system. We also have to watch how people who are comfortable in the system can be unscrupulous! The more I look at it, the more I find it difficult to calm down! It would be really disappointing if we can't have a single female protagonist! This is the tragedy of human nature! Tragedy means breaking a beautiful cosplay for you to see? ! {"TopicId":"933770901756641280","TopicName":"What are the truths that reading novels can make you understand"}

I can't stand it anymore. It's such a waste of time.

I laughed when I saw the instructor was about to pass out the girl and continue the military training... What the hell, the one who could come up with this plot is not 211985. I am afraid that I have never even experienced an ordinary good school... Although there are some secret stories in military training, student safety is always the first priority. Whether it is the school or the military training side, I laughed at it, and there is no need to force it. Before you stood up to run for class cadre, everyone was looking at you. If you don't choose without the whole class voting, how could it be possible... The teacher must have directly chosen the one with more votes... What happened in the plot this time, I am not making sense. Anyone who has experienced it intuitively knows what the teacher will do and what the instructor will do. As long as you have experienced it, you will know. I don't know what's going on, this chapter...

I started watching it when Bai Han refused to listen and went to confess to it. I started watching it these days when I have free time. Originally, I wanted to curse when I saw the middle part, but I felt that I had to at least watch the latest, so I bit the bullet and read it. There are two things that make me most uncomfortable: Ergou's standing upright and Zheng Hao. Readers of the former must have talked about it to death. I believe that if we make statistics, the most negative comments in this chapter must be the four words "both serious and independent". Ergou's character is so unlikable that the mother-in-law, who is usually a villain, must be When he came out to criticize Ergou, the comment was even "But she's right." After Chen Zhu suddenly came up with the idea that even Wei Wei would "have a bowl of water to balance", there were fewer comments that were both pretentious and upright. Let's just spend this part as Lao Liu. But Zheng Hao is really disgusting. When Xu Yue, a girl, came to seduce someone, readers reacted so badly. Could Lao Liu not guess how readers would react when a scumbag came out and scumbag Wu Yu wanted to sleep with her? First, there were those greasy chat words, and then there were the same forced wits. Maybe Lao Liu had already achieved results before and didn't want to just write cool articles. But you should also think about what readers paid to see. You could just write about the emotional entanglement between the male and female protagonists. Why would you write about Yi Tuo, whom no one wants to see? I didn't see that the comments have become hilarious now. I hope Bo Han will directly lock Xu Yue and think he is not worthy of Jiawen. I also hoped that it would be best if Wu Yu was slept away and regretted afterwards. Why do these fun comments appear? It's because if you continue to sympathize with these characters, you will continue to be disgusted by them, so you have to switch to the mentality of having fun. In this way, even if you really serve a dish, at least you can change from the one who eats to the one who watches others eat. Don't talk about the silent majority. I don't know the subscription and follow-up data of this book. I will continue to follow it just because of the success of the previous book. I still have a little hope for Lao Liu. But I think that from the beginning, it was able to squeeze into the top ten of the monthly ticket, and now the ranking is gradually lowering, there is still data that can show that this book has problems.

To be honest, this book is a bit unreadable. It feels much worse than the previous two books. The emotional line is weird. There is not much communication at the beginning but the relationship heats up very quickly. It seems that two female protagonists were created to write about Shura Field, not because the male protagonist wants them all, so there are two female protagonists. Therefore, the appearance of Shura Field is a bit hard to describe. I don't know if I can express what I mean. In short, it is weird. The male protagonists in the first two books are boss-type characters, which means that I am lustful. I'm just a playboy, but I don't see the need for two female protagonists in this book.

I look back on the past in the long river of time, tracing the things I cherish along this faded past. By chance, I saw the publication news of "I Really Don't Want to Be Reborn". "Chen Hansheng's Shura Field: Zhuang Zhou's Dream of Butterflies" became the publication title of this book. I think this is probably a summary of the book. Chen Hansheng went back to the past like Zhuang Zhou Mengdie, and experienced the Shura field as the title of the book says. Looking back again, my memory goes back to the summer of 2019. Amidst the chirping of cicadas, many things have not changed, and the memory of "I Really Don't Want to Be Reborn" seems even more dazzling. Looking back, there are many things I cherish, and this book is my favorite. I vaguely remember that it was very hot that summer, but Chen Hansheng's story added a bit of background to that hot summer. I was accidentally recommended to read this book by a friend, and the story of Chen Hansheng being reborn after being drunk and meeting Xiao Rongyu and Shen Youchu also deeply attracted me. When Chen Hansheng was feeling a little troubled on the roadside because he had restarted his successful life, Xiao Rongyu gave him some caring warnings, and the story began from there. Then, Chen Hansheng met the treasure girl Shen Youchu in college. The book "I Really Don't Want to Be Reborn" also began to be written around the relationship between Chen Hansheng and Xiao Rongyu and Shen Youchu. There are also business and other content interspersed in it, but the emotional changes between Chen Hansheng and the two heroines are still my favorite content. As time goes by, other contents are gradually forgotten, but the story of Chen Hansheng, Xiao Yuer and Youchu blooms in my memory. From the beginning of admiring Chen Hansheng, to later blessing Chen Hansheng, to now I have deep memories of this book. When I recall the story of Chen Hansheng again, it is like picking up flowers in the long river of time. This book was started five years ago and completed three years ago. I just happened to see the publication news of this book, and I want to start revisiting this beautiful book in my memories. Finally, I would like to congratulate the book "Chen Hansheng's Shura Field: Zhuang Zhou Mengdie" published by "I Really Don't Want to Be Reborn" for its great sales! I also wish Lao Liu's new book "Who's going to take the civil service exam after being reborn" get better and better! {"TopicId":"1073633539159490560","TopicName":"I really don't want to be reborn, physical book"}

Lao Liu's book cannot avoid party disputes. The Xiaoyuer Party and Youchu Party in the previous book were torn from the inside of the book to the outside. This book cannot avoid it. However, unlike the previous book, they are evenly matched. There are obviously more cosplayers than sweets in this book. I am not very interested in party struggle. I just want to discuss with the author the relationship between the heroine's image creation and popularity and some personal opinions: As we all know, the two heroines in Lao Liu's books are generally active and passive in character. One family is rich and the other is poor. One is smart and the other is "dumb". Maybe Lao Liu, you want to be different from the previous book. This book has changed the elements - the family is wealthy but has a restrained personality, the smart Song Shiwei, the family is poor but dares to love and hate, and the "dumb" Yu Bao Bao, but Lao Liu, you have overlooked one thing, that is the readers of Qidian. Let's put it this way, the audience for your book, coupled with the current tense relationship between men and women, are mostly boys who have insufficient love experience and are relatively introverted. Do they like introverted girls or girls who dare to love, hate, and actively pursue themselves? Answer, proactively. I can only say that for those who like reading novels, more than 90% of them will not be rich, and at most they will be middle class. For these people, although they say that rich women are hungry for food, 90% of those who read your book have illusions about love. So, which one is more likely to arouse readers' fantasies, the white rich beauty who has a class gap with you, or the heroine who comes from a poor family? Answer: For those from poorer families, most readers know that the class gap is difficult to overcome, and they will have a hidden inferiority complex, causing a subconscious distance. Another important point is that a poor heroine can easily give readers the feeling of "giving everything for love", because as long as the poor family gives love, self, and only a little material, people can realize - "Oh, this heroine has given up all she has for love", but the heroine from a wealthy family can realize , even if everyone is not consciously aware of it, they still subconsciously think, "In addition to giving love and yourself, you also have rich material conditions and family connections, but you have not given everything." To be honest, with material conditions, there is no way to give everything in love, because the heroine's parents will not agree. Note that I am not sarcastic here, nor am I discriminating against the rich. Just like the joke goes, "A primary school student donated 30 US dollars to the Red Cross, and Bill Gates donated 30 million. But the primary school student said that he was more enthusiastic about charity than Bill Gates, because the primary school student's 30 US dollars was all his pocket money, and Bill Gates' 30 million was only a small part of his property." - It can also be said to be an alternative "barefoot people are not afraid of wearing shoes." Based on the portrait of readers in this book, would they prefer smart ones or "clumsy ones"? I can only say that given the current social climate and men's natural desire to dominate, they actually prefer "clumsy" ones. Did you find the problem, Lao Liu, you almost combined the three elements that are more popular with the audience of this book to Sister Cos, so Sister Cos must have more fans than Sister Sweet. In view of this situation, if Lao Liu wants to ensure the balance of the party struggle instead of beating him up, the only way is to give Song Shiwei more characterizations and make the character more three-dimensional compared to Cosine, so as to make up for the popularity gap caused by the innate "insufficiency" of the character.

The author's last book "I Really Didn't Want to Be Reborn" was very well written. Both the portrayal of the heroine and the dramatic conflicts in the plot were very exciting. There were some clichéd plots, but overall it was really vulgar but not bad. I have read more than 400 chapters of this book now, and the thing that I can't understand the most is why the male protagonist insists on having two female protagonists. The male protagonist of the previous work had a deep bond with Xiao Yu'er. After establishing the relationship, he met Shen Youchu, a heroine who was too good to be true and a bit pitiful. In addition, Chen Hansheng and Shen Youchu came first, so a delicate balance was formed. But the male protagonist of this game likes Yu himself, and he and Yu settled most of the relationship before he hooked up with Song. Yu Xian is indeed a girl who is so good that it sounds like science fiction. So what is the purpose and motivation of the male protagonist to seduce Song Shiyu? Is it just because she is beautiful and is recognized as a college beauty? Or is it just for the author's path dependency service? In addition, Yu is the inversion of Shen Youchu. Shen Youchu is soft on the outside and strong on the inside, while Yu Xian is strong on the outside and soft on the inside. However, both settings are irresistible to boys. However, Song is much worse than Xiao Yuer's portrayal. If you look for any novel, you will find heroines like Song everywhere. Such heroines would not be out of character even if they were included in Dou Po Cang Qiong. If we insist on putting it in a book, there is almost no explanation for the motivations of the two female protagonists except that the male protagonist naturally likes to tread two boats. Coupled with the fact that there are a lot of witty plots in the plot, such as opening a theater with 500,000 yuan and jointly controlling Moore Manor, the sense of dissonance is really serious. Also arranged for the immortal to take advantage of the situation and hinted to the younger brother to blackmail the leader. Are you sure this is the thinking of a civil servant after his rebirth? I have also come into contact with many leaders, large and small. Most of them are self-righteous and cherish their feathers. This kind of thinking is almost engraved in their bones. I don't understand why such unpleasant and unreasonable plots appear so frequently.

I read more than 200 chapters in one night, and I feel that the male protagonist is too fragmented. If you declare that you are going to be a scumbag from the beginning, then there is nothing to say. The starting point is to open a harem. The character at the beginning before and after rebirth is not a scumbag, so I don't see why he turns into a hypocrite later on. Where did the change come from? You gave the cos sister a good reputation so early, and gave you more than 100 chapters of sweets, but at the same time, you still said that you had no money for stock trading and started a business, and borrowed money to tie up vv and have an affair, and then the cos sister suddenly disappeared. In a normal relationship, if you are in the same city, you always have to see her once a week, right? It was completely under the pretext of pursuing a career to suppress the explosive Shura scene after the two women met (given the characters and emotions of the two women, I am afraid that the whole drama will not end directly), and then the two families were inexplicably eating. Suddenly, the male protagonist who loved cosplay and vv (meal tickets) just a second ago was directly possessed by Chen Gou. I started to think about time management. Although it can make people stay up all night to read it, it is a bit disappointing. I feel that the plot of the male protagonist of this book is broken, and I don't know how to reconcile it later.

Han is a true villain and a hypocrite. After watching Rebirth, I continued watching Civil Servant, the routine was similar, the cosplay was Xiao Rongyu with Shen Youchu background, and Sweet looked more like Shen Youchu with Xiao Rongyu background. I personally think that Rebirth is particularly good at writing the emotional line. In contrast, Civil Servant pays more attention to the career line, scenes, and more practical considerations. Civil servants fill the gap in the rebirth's description of the career line, making the business world full of life, flesh and blood, and vividly expressed. Therefore, starting from the new perspective of civil servants, it becomes more and more addictive! !

Can you not write too many supporting roles? It's okay to write one character who is disgusted, but you also have to write one on each side. It's really uncomfortable to watch.

After reading more than two hundred chapters, I still can't stand it. I really like the character of Yu Baobao so that I can stick with it until now. The career line is also very interesting, but the emotional line, from the protagonist to Dahuang and Factory Flower, is very deliberate. From my point of view, it is disgusting, especially because after reading the previous book, I can basically guess what will be written next. The plot of Huang Hui in the previous book made me disgusted, and this is another big yellow. The vv line is also too deliberate and poorly handled. There are a lot of inexplicable plots, such as the tutoring part. I don't know what the meaning is, so I just make up for the favorability? Looking at the later part, it seems that the eunuch took a month to update a chapter (although it is a big chapter). Alas, after reading the previous chapters, I thought it would be another excellent work, but it's a pity. Goodbye, fish swing

I really like Liu Ting's writing style, but I feel that this book is not as good as the previous one. Liu Ting may think that what readers like is the emotional drama between the male protagonist and the two heroines. In fact, the most attractive thing is to write about the growth history of the male protagonist starting from scratch. In the previous work, Chen Hansheng started his business from the Youth League Committee - school express delivery station - nationwide local promotion - cashing out at a high position - part-time job in an electronics factory - OEM MP3/4 - smartphones. Everything goes naturally and logically. The history of the fortune of a domestic express delivery company and a domestic mobile phone manufacturer (Meizu) is vividly revealed on the page. It is a nostalgic economic upturn and a prosperous era. However, the new work has too many emotional scenes that are too slow, both the male and female protagonists succeed too easily, the career lines are too ordinary, and the portrayal of Guangzhou in that era is unrealistic, especially the Song Shiwei family, not to mention the state-owned enterprise families at that time. Even the current state-owned enterprise families do not have such exaggerated consumption (they often have a full set of Chanel, and a Maybach at home). It is not that they can't afford it, but the low-key and calm character of the Cantonese people, and they are also a cadre family, which absolutely does not allow such ostentation. There is also Chen Zhu's start-up, let's talk about Zhongjiajiao. Com first. At that time, the Internet was not fully covered in ordinary middle-aged and elderly families, and tutoring fees for college students were not high (20-50 an hour for Guangzhou college students in 2008). It was impossible to support him to buy luxury cars and develop other industries so quickly. Finally, I became a real estate agency. The explosion of real estate agencies was the product of the popularization of smartphones and the explosion of housing prices around 14 years ago. Appearing too early is not necessarily a good business. It was absolutely impossible to achieve good performance and promote listing before 15 years. The career line is really sad to see, and I hope to adjust the situation well.

I started to catch up on it last year, and I have been reading it intermittently. I will also go back and read Liu Ting's previous book. Why is the previous book a masterpiece? There is still a big difference in the physical experience. In the previous book, Chen Gou generally made up for his regrets: in his previous life, he no longer had contact with Xiao Yuer; he "missed" the treasure of the university; he broke up with his junior sister on bad terms; and even the relationship in the dormitory was reshaped. And "Civil Servant" is more like taking a different path. After all, Chen Ergou had no deep entanglement with vv and cos in his previous life, and even the school he went to changed. ————Maybe I prefer to see regrets made up for. In terms of character, Chen Gou really doesn't have anything bad to say about him except for being a "scumbag" and a "child changer", and he also allowed Shen Hanhan and Xiao Yuer to grow up very well. Chen Ergou, this kind of gentle and silent character is not so lovable. In addition to feeling that his emotional intelligence is very high, he still has a sense of distance, and his dedication to the two female protagonists is far less than Chen Gou. Shen Hanhan is so "perfect" that there is no Shen Youchu in the world. Aside from her perfect looks and 36D figure, she also has a very charming personality. Although he always keeps his head down, he always maintains optimism about life; although life is hard, his heart is very tough; and his naivety and introversion form a good fusion. In terms of life trajectory, Chen Gou can be regarded as "saving her". After all, in the first version of the plot, Shen Hanhan died suddenly during his graduate career. The cosplay is also very good. The book also mentions the plot of Chen Ergou saving her in the "earthquake", but I always feel that she can live a very good life without Chen Ergou. Xiao Yuer is the most classic depiction of Bai Yueguang. She has a good family background, perfect appearance, and almost no flaws in her character except for being arrogant. She is always the princess that everyone holds in their hands. She and Chen Gou had a deep relationship for three years in high school, and she still missed Chen Gou in her previous life until she was reborn. vv, the family background and appearance buffs are also stacked up, but the personality is not as lovable as Xiao Yuer, and the influence of Professor Lu in the early stage always makes me feel a bit "emotionless", which is quite unreal. I didn't have any deep entanglements with Chen Ergou in my previous life. In addition, there is the female San Luoxuan, "The moon is very bright, it is useless to be bright, and it is bright even if it is useless; if I like you, it is useless to like you, and I will like you even if it is useless", which is even more impressive. The last thing is the conflict in the plot. Chen Gou repeatedly jumps in the Shura field twice, and his career is also very successful. It is full of conflicts, full of excitement and heartbeat (blame Hong Shiyong for everything! Blame Sanxing for everything!). Chen Ergou can always "play it safe" and always find the "optimal solution", which lacks excitement. Of course, I am also looking forward to how Chen Ergou will solve the Shura field. After all, Chen Gou's "Child Changing" in the previous book was really a magic touch. It focused everyone's firepower on Chen Gou, and the ending was perfect. A little reflection, please don't complain, and I hope Liu Ting will work hard!

After updating these two chapters, is there any risk of updating in August? 🙂

I rarely read multi-heroine and urban novels. I was short of books, so I tried a book in this category. The front part attracted me to take a look, but I felt happy but felt something was wrong. The male protagonist is a little confused in the plot of wanting and wanting at the same time. Maybe it's because I'm not suitable for this kind of novel 🥱. When something didn't feel right, I read the book reviews, and everyone had their own opinions. I haven't read the follow-up, it should be quite interesting. I won't read it now because I have no more books to read, and then I will try to accept the viewpoints in the novel before reading further.

Maybe I started reading this book the year before last and it was too long. Reading so far, this book gives me a dull feeling, as if the content updated every day is just a running account. There is no urge to read this chapter and can't wait to read the next chapter. Thinking about it carefully, I have written 2.49 Million words so far, and the Shura field has not exploded once. Apart from the sweet daily life between the male and female protagonists, there are basically no other explosive points. The male protagonist's entrepreneurial start-up gave me the feeling that everything came naturally and everything turned into good luck. Referring to Chen Hansheng before, at 2.5 Million words, all Rocket 101 should have been sold, the first Shura Field has ended long ago, and the first Guoke mobile phone has been released.

I can't stand it. I'll wait until this episode is over before watching it. It's disgusting to spend money to watch it.

Lao Liu, even if it hasn't been updated for so long, I still vote for you with dozens of monthly votes. For this reason, please don't be a eunuch.