Alien Hotel

First of all, let me talk about what I think is the biggest problem. The previous Deep Sea by Big Eyeball is essentially an invincible style, but he wrote the protagonist Zhou Ming's puzzle solving of the entire world very well, especially in the beginning he used an ordinary person's perspective to view the extraordinary world. But in this book, I can't see that it is described directly from the perspective of an extraordinary world from the beginning, and he does not describe much about how the world itself works. This makes the reader's sense of exploration of the world view of the entire work much weaker, so its puzzle solving is not well written. Of course, if you can't write well about solving puzzles, you can also write about upgrading. The key is that the ability of this book is also biased towards the invincible flow, so it is inherently impossible for it to be a big impetus for upgrading. Then let's talk about the daily life of this book. After all, the daily life of this book is much more than that of the previous book. I think it accounts for about 40% of the whole book, but the interaction between the characters and the protagonist is not done well. Let's give an example. Let's say you are in reality. You essentially have unlimited means of production, money, and rights. Would you rather have someone with a sense of boundaries interact with you, or would you rather have someone with no sense of boundaries interact with you? The protagonist and a puppet next to him, this is a typical example of no boundaries. His puppet can actually hurt the protagonist. To be honest, I can't understand this. That puppet is like a blood-sucking leech, with no sense of boundaries. Of course, I am not very familiar with Big Eyeball. I read a small part of his previous book and the early period of Sword of the Dawn, but there was no such problem. What I remember particularly deeply is that in his Big Eyeball in the Deep Sea book, the portrayal of Vanna in the early stage was good enough. Although I didn't like the jokes about the sports students in the later period, Shirley's portrayal was also good, but in this book I completely I didn't see it at all. I originally thought he would give a good description of the role of Director Baili Jing, but now it seems that he didn't spend much pen and ink Let's talk about the fun part. I mentioned in the previous paragraph that there is no sense of boundaries, which itself weakens the fun point. After reading a book, even if the captain also has a doll, the doll respects the captain as a whole. There is a sense of boundary, even if he does not brag about how invincible the captain is or there are very few clips of himself bragging about how powerful the captain is, but this will not make people hate it. Secondly, the protagonist of this book has too much contact with official forces at the beginning. Sometimes it is difficult to understand how the officialdom has changed, and there are very few characters who appear. In the previous book, there were only Serifanna is portrayed as a judge and a bishop, but in fact, these roles show that there are many in a church, so the official in the book has his own majesty. Think about it, if you are in reality, do you want a person who knows nothing to brag about you, or a very majestic and well-established figure in society to brag about you? Would you feel more comfortable? To be honest, in the passages in this book that praise Yu Sheng, I even felt a little bit of a novice, so I didn't write it well. To be honest, I am a little bit disappointed with this book. I thought it could continue the previous book's good performance and summarize the advantages of his writing, and then continue it to his next book. Unfortunately, he didn't seem to summarize it, and I don't know how to write this book. Knowing how many words he has to write, if he had to write the same 4 million words as before, the performance of his book would be even worse. It is already bad enough now. After all, the first order was only 50,000, and I estimate that the current level of 50,000 is still far behind his last book. This can also support my own point of view. If he still wants to write a slightly shorter book, then I can only say that he should make a big change as soon as possible. In addition, he also said in the previous book that he wanted to write a few shorter books that could show more of his inspiration. However, the overall character creation is lagging so far behind. I feel like there is a problem. Of course, do you think there are any advantages? There is some, too. His own writing skills, I think, are almost online. Sometimes the description of the environment is quite delicate, and there is still a warm undertone as always. I feel that the writing is also very good. Does he have to fight and kill every day? I don't think so. Does it have to be so dark every day? I don't think so either, so I really hope that Big Eyeball can write a good book.

Hope Ling is in the second phase of the middle school. The emperor returns to his loyal Terra. Of course, the time travel is a comprehensive comic, as well as the harem, and some big scenes; Exception is entering society, and he must be a good civil servant, start traveling at public expense, and then chase his wife for thousands of years, improve the family position; Dawn, just entered middle age, of course it is hard work, look Hey child, when you were born, the whole empire echoed your name; Deep Sea, Daddy, I am the strongest; In the hotel, I am old and tired, so I just want to have a secret base, where I can do some work to ensure the harvest during droughts and floods, and go out for leisure when I have nothing to do, and bring back some cute little ones to raise (I am sure I am not a fisherman). It seems that the next step is to live in old age🤭🤭.

The fairy tale is too boring, awkward and childish, the character interactions are messy and messy, and the same plot and jokes have been repeated countless times. Based on the setting of this book, I thought it would be of an unusual level, but now it seems that the level has really declined.

It's like a fanfic from the previous one, not like 2 or Succession. 1. Like light novels, the characters' reactions are very cartoonish Like reading light novels, the characters' reactions are very stereotyped and exaggerated, rather than natural. The two heroines they meet are like several personality tags combined together, rather than being reasonably born from the background of a character. 2. Messy I feel like I want to cram in a lot of things, but it is just very messy, moving here and there, without any normal and gradual foreshadowing. 3. Lack of sense of substitution and lack of tension The protagonist's immortality is abruptly revealed at the beginning, which makes it difficult to get nervous in subsequent plots no matter how tense they are. Now it's like reading a running story, since you know that the protagonist is not dead anyway. There is no resonance with the protagonist, and I have no feelings for the overly stereotyped supporting characters Summary After reading the previous one, I wonder if this one was written by me? It's either slow to warm up or a bit weird. Many parts are completely taken for granted and lack the authenticity of the characters' reactions. What's going on...

If being able to write is a 0-1 breakthrough, being able to write daily is a 1-100 improvement. Yuan Tong's daily writing is really great.

To be honest, I am not very optimistic about the performance of this book. From what I can see so far, it is about using strength to overcome cleverness and using invincible abilities to break through those weird rules. There are so many books of this type that the motivation for me to read them is really due to the eye-catching writing style.

The last book was so good and so short. Now that I have listened to dozens of chapters of this book, I feel it is much worse. Hey! The author is a frog in March, whether to crow or not

"Hotel Alien" finally transcends the shackles of genre literature. When the protagonist returns to reality with quantum self-knowledge, the memory fragments folded in the hypercube have become Deleuzian "rhizomes" that pierce the cognitive cocoon. This work is not only a topological revolution in suspense narrative, but also a philosophical reflection on the dilemma of postmodern existence - in the superposition of countless parallel realities, we will eventually complete the quantum measurement of the essence of existence in the process of observing ourselves.

Maybe it's because the style of this book doesn't quite suit my taste. I often don't have the interest to read it, and then I put it down for a month or two and then come back to catch up. I've been reading it intermittently until now, and finally I can't muster the interest to continue. This book is an incomparable daily novel, with a bit of water, more funny and nonsensical elements, and a little bit of curiosity. The world view is more complex and has various elements. It inherits the world view of the previous book Deep Sea Embers. Personally, I feel that the look and feel is worse than the earlier works Xiling Empire, not as good as Deep Sea Embers and Anomaly, and even worse than Sword of the Dawn. Looking forward to the next work, bye.

Is it too much for your comfort zone? This book is not an independent book at all, it can only exist as a supplement to "Embers of the Deep". It's one million words. Even if the whole book is eight million words, it can't be said that I've only written the beginning and nothing can be seen, right? I will first talk about my views on the three elements of the novel, characters, plot and environment, and then make a summary. Characters Dry, very dry and panel-like. This should be Yuan Tong's old problem. The Alice in the last book was very panelized. However, her panel is particularly cute, so she is very popular. She can be regarded as a "Dou E"-type character. The character is not three-dimensional, but it is still a good character. But what about this book? Among the protagonists, Little Red Riding Hood, Luna, Irene, and Hu Li, if I were asked to summarize their characteristics, except for Little Red Riding Hood, the other three can be described in one word: Crazy Silly Girl. There is no need to say more about "female", let's talk about "epilepsy" first: if a person is passionately saving the world one day, and is playing crazy and crazy the next day, or even such a change occurs from one second to the next, if this happens every day, then this person is not a neurotic, but a psychopath. "Having been dealt with frequently", "being strongly stimulated" and "being born this way" can only be used as causes in cases and cannot be used as evidence to argue that there is nothing wrong with them. And "silly", "silly" is very characteristic: So what if Lily graduates from Peking University? She is stupid every day, she is a husky, and she looks not as smart as "me"; so what if Rebecca is a genius in science, her emotional intelligence is simply negative, and she looks not as smart as "me"; so what if Alice is Pilot Three? Silly, they look not as smart as "me"; Hu Li, Irene, and Luna, each one has a bigger background than the other, and each one has stronger abilities, but so what? At least I can speak clearly, "I" will not be easily fooled by Yu Sheng, all "I" are smarter. Do you see it? Yuantong actually portrays the characters as a fool, a fool who can't even take care of himself in daily life. He just adds some labels with a strong sense of separation to give them an attribute of "actually very smart", which he mentions from time to time. However, their actual performance is exactly the same as that of Chisi. Readers can't help but make such a comparison: "She is dementia, I am not dementia, I am better than her, and she is a top student, so I am better than top student." This gives readers a sense of superiority that "I" am very smart. "The female top student is a fool in daily life" seems to arouse readers' sense of superiority, but in fact there are people like Alice in reality: the poor women locked up in the countryside. If you have been in contact with them, you will know that the characters above are simply portrayed after them. But is this definitely not possible? Of course, many people like Alice and Lily, and I also like them, and I have indeed found a sense of superiority. However, Yuantong really went too far this time. He actually set all the protagonists to have dementia. He pointed at the three dementias and said: "They are actually very smart, and their stupidity is just a false appearance." He tried to make me feel a sense of superiority, but I only felt insulted. So I said, Yuantong depicts three "idiot girls". And these characters cannot exist independently at all. Maurice is still a very three-dimensional character without the captain, and Amber is still the queen of the tavern without Gawain, but what about these ones now? Can we stand apart from life? Some people may be interested in being the director of a female mental hospital, but I'm sorry, I can't do it. Let's talk about the plot again I ask myself that my knowledge is limited and I can't sort out a clear main line from these million words. Can someone tell me? Of course, I don't accept the answer "Save the world in life". Or write it down, and we will wait until the book is finished to see if the main line you summarized through these million words is correct. In other words, this is the so-called "everyday writing", which does not have a main line in the narrow sense. Then I ask you to tell your conscience, are there any daily writings that repeatedly make bad jokes? In other words, whose daily writing is this? Can a person who has never read "Embers of the Deep" read this book as daily reading? I'm afraid it's not that I don't know what I'm talking about. Among new book friends, when they see characters such as "Captain" mentioned in the comment area, some will look it up on their own, and some will ask questions directly. The latter accounts for a certain proportion. So, is this kind of question common in comments about this book? Doesn't this mean that there are actually very few new readers of this book? So this book can only exist as an addendum to "Embers of the Deep" and cannot be used as an independent and complete story at all. And too many bad jokes are played. The so-called daily life is just playing bad jokes over and over again? "Irene scolded me so badly" appeared at least eight times! The story always revolves around these people, called "everyday life", but are we familiar with these characters? Old readers think of Alice when they see "doll". Of course we are familiar with it, but what about new readers? Did the character of Eileen give him any deep three-dimensional impression? The plot relies heavily on characters, but these characters have not been established at all, so how can we talk about daily life? Lastly, the environment The big-eyed worldview has always been his biggest selling point, isn't that true? But what is the worldview of this book? Is the world view complete? Of course it is complete, but it is built on the basis of previous books. This is different from building a grand worldview through a series of books. This book requires a lot of worldviews from previous books at the beginning to be read normally. As for the pen and ink spent on worldview construction in this book... Is the worldview unique? If you are a book lover who has only recently read science fiction, you may think it is unique, but if you read more books, you will find that the settings of Eyeball are not only clichéd in his own novels, but also very clichéd in all science fiction works. There is nothing to say about opening the door as a golden finger, but other elements are really not outstanding at all. "Dark Angel", "Cultist", "Secret Service", "Ancient Heroic Spirits" and "Junction Land", which one do you think is very novel? As a side note, settings are generally not sprayable, but! "The president likes to do a striptease during meetings. You say, 'This is a setting.' The book friend says, 'The setting cannot be sprayed, it is not a way to lower one's intelligence.'" Isn't that too much? Off topic, let me complain. Several of my favorite authors are no longer in their comfort zones. Morningstar directly stated that the new books are only for relaxation. The tons of new books are still the same old routines. Golden Jasmine is still the same old routines, and they have not changed at all. Another one is Far Eyes. Of course, it is not good to step out of the comfort zone. The new book with lazy words is too dry, almost like a template article for new writers, which is not suitable for readers. Grenades are afraid of water, which makes it even worse. Finally, let's summarize the evolutionary trend of big-eyed books: The story of the invincible male director of a mental hospital for young girls who saves the world

Something's wrong, I looked back at Sword of the Dawn. Isn't this book about the pioneering civilization in the ruins?

The last book didn't have so many tmdtmd swear words, and the word count was too serious. I know that long stories are more profitable, but you can't mess up the rhythm of the article just to make it long. My favorites are Embers of the Deep and Sword of the Dawn. Big Eyeball's description of modern life is too weak. Fantasy and grand narratives are his strongest areas.

So far, there is quite a lot of nonsense in daily life.

{"TopicId":"587582127428665344","TopicName":"Book Review"} As an old book friend who came from the Xiling period, I have also witnessed Yuantong's growth along the way, from the two-dimensional fantasy world of the little otaku to the magnificent space opera, from the civilized corpse collector to the true god's agent, from the old rice dumpling who started out as a corpse to the emperor The Emperor's Holy Words, from "It's One" to "It's Ten Thousands", and now the whole world is not from the soil, and the bloody shore is from the ministers, everyone can see the progress of each part of Yuantong. Even the description of Yuantong's most difficult fight in the alien hotel has become much smoother. This shows that Yuantong is not complacent like some authors, and even retreats from the rapids. I can't say too much, otherwise some people will think that I am cheating on him. Finally, send a word as a blessing. "Right and wrong are like smoke and clouds. It's hard to explain and explain, so why bother to inquire about my merits and fame."

From the anomaly to the dawn, from the dawn to the deep sea, you have experienced a lot. I just want to express my opinion. I have always liked the big eyes. I have kept this book for a long time. I want to find faults on the basis of anchoring the masterpiece in my heart I feel that this wave is a bit too relaxed and unknown to the world. The fog of war is the thinnest one, which makes the plot a bit divergent and easy to guess, but not so gripping A brief analysis: The good guy with the abnormal protagonist has high resistance to magic and objects, but weak attack power, so the pace of exploring the world is not fast. The reader's cognition grows step by step with the good guy, which is not fast. Slow, steady, and just the right amount of humor and warmth to follow the main storyline of the dream plane. For the protagonist group, the world is full of dangers and warmth. If it is compared to the game, it is a good balance between the enemy and ourselves. Only with a long soul can you play a high-end game, and the crisis is much bigger than the abnormal for the protagonist team, so you have to rely on the power of the people to make a comeback. It is the most difficult game in several books, and the nature of the crisis is an open mind. At that time, I only looked at best friends and Dawn, and the balance between friend and foe was 82 to the captain , I think this book surpasses Best Friends, it is a group of powerful enemies and friends in the world view, and it is also the beginning of the invincible protagonist. Although the captain's numerical mechanism is super model, but the opposite is a super nightmarish doomsday man-machine, and the setting of this book is too mysterious. I didn't expect it to come true until the end. It's just too short. I feel like exploring the unknown. It is a major driving force of the big-eyed book. This book is too unknown. Both the enemy and ourselves belong to 73. As for our protagonist today, I feel that the setting of the protagonist group is too strong. The fox and others are all numerical monsters. Yusheng's numerical value plus mechanism. What do the opponents say? It feels like most of them are children in front of Yusheng. Garden ~ In addition to Hyla Let's talk about the unknown exploration of the driving force. The world of this book is a world where the captain saves and fixes bugs. The bosses in the copy will basically not exceed the reader's knowledge. There is no feeling of sudden enlightenment, and the jokes are more dense than abnormal, which is a bit excessive. Mainly It can be said that the line is not particularly clear. There is laughter and prosperity everywhere in the universe. The setting of the protagonist dying everywhere also leads to no sense of crisis at all. Although the captain was invincible at the time, he could not be so leisurely Overall, this is the case. If you criticize me ~ be gentle 😵

Good water, really good water. At the end of the previous book Deep Sea, it was said that for the sake of the readers, the story would not be dragged out by the text and the story would be ended directly, so I co-authored this book with Shuidu. Moreover, the character's personality is quite repetitive, and each battle is quite boring. It's just a fight to the death anyway. The boss didn't feel anything at all, it seemed like he had a lot of foreshadowing and then died suddenly with a snap.

I have never been able to match the brainwaves of big-eyed books. The most obvious ones are some complaints and some dialogues. They obviously feel normal, but the main characters are very excited and want to bicker 😐. Another thing is that in this book, I feel that everything is done by the protagonist group, which shows that the official organization is particularly incompetent. Uncle Zheng died unexpectedly, and Yu Sheng told the Secret Service that something was wrong, but the special item was still discovered by his nephew, and then he came to find the pig's feet group. If the Secret Service can't even find something hidden in a dark room that can be discovered by ordinary people, then what's the point of playing chicken feathers 😡

The beginning of this book is a bit similar to Anomaly, which is slowly fascinating. I quite like this kind of fusion of world views. Big-eyed books have always had technology and magic sides coexisting, but this time the magic side has become the fairy side. I'm quite looking forward to how the fairy side will be written, and I hope it won't be a reskin of the magic side.

After reading almost 300 chapters, I felt that this book was poorly written and comparable to the early Anomalies. The content was too watery and the plot was too bland and boring. The unlimited distribution of the protagonist's resurrection coins is like opening the Wind Spirit Moon Shadow, which makes the story feel no sense of crisis at all. I didn't see the urgency of solving fairy tale problems, but just like outing, I would die when I encountered problems that couldn't be solved. Compared with the protagonists of Uncle Shu's previous books (Xiling couldn't read it), 🐟 seemed to have too many hooks... Moreover, the characters of this book are extremely flat, and it seems to be like a set format. The general content of many chapters is that the protagonist group said something outrageous, and the supporting characters were confused or yelled, it was set up too often. The only thing worthy of praise is that Uncle Shu's writing skills are still there. Whether it's the opening of 🦊 or the plot of the antique old man who gives the fairy tale a task, it's great. Uncle Shu never skimps on his pen and ink in the tragic places (just like the game, in Baidu) The plot of Boiling Water is mixed with some well-made game CG) I was watching Foxtail's "Old World Weirdness" some time ago, and I felt that in a similar story background, Foxtail's protagonist was more vividly portrayed (personal opinion, light spray)

At the current 100 chapters, there is too much nonsense after finishing Angel of Hui'an, and I have no motivation to continue reading. Does the protagonist have to be so stupid and sweet? Tell others about everything? This character is unacceptable

Many authors actually like to connect the settings of several consecutive books together, but this can easily confuse newcomers. The first few books of Big Eyeball actually have no special connection except for the general background. Most of them are added in the easter eggs, such as Siren and Coke. This book is so closely connected with the deep sea that new book friends may be a little confused.

The dialogue between the characters is too childish. I didn't think it was so childish in the previous works. Now that I have read Chapter 284, I have no problem with the work. However, the dialogue between the characters feels like the work has an anime feel. Especially the dialogue between the dolls is awkward and tiring.

The descriptions and dialogues between the characters are quite detailed... The details are very well crafted... The general framework is a bit confusing... Just like Grimm's fairy tales, one story after another... The funny part seems pretty good from the front, but it accounts for too much. Just like people, there are joys, sorrows, and joys... But the ordinary is the vast majority of life... He just changed his face... I have read more than 300 chapters of this book. It feels a bit boring. This game is the only one among science fiction novels. It is so real that I still feel interested in reading it again after reading it. Others are like instant noodles. Once you are full, you don't want to eat anymore.

When I encountered "Sword of the Dawn", the simple summary is the most clichéd beginning: a friend told me that this book was good, so I read it. But there are also some things that are not so cliché. For example, when I recommended it for the first time, I was stunned by the seven million words during finals week; for example, when I recommended it for the second time, I forgot that she recommended this book the first time. Until I Wenhuang looked through her chat history and found that this book had been recommended twice by her. I thought: Let's have a look. …and then I couldn't stop. Four days and three nights, a net reading time of 72 hours, including eating, reading and washing. I couldn't bear to put it down for a second. As a science student + science fiction enthusiast, the world view setting of "Sword of Dawn" is very consistent. In short: I enjoyed watching it. That's when I realized how shallow I was at the beginning: What a long novel with 7 million words, 7 million words is simply not enough to read! So I went to various platforms to search for second fan creations, and found that the number was unexpectedly small: Didn't it mean Platinum Master? How come I only have such a small amount of food—— But I also took this opportunity to meet my relatives and friends who were reading and cooking together. I joined the Sword of the Dawn fan group and ate the food cooked by the group friends (burping happily. Jpg) (I lied to you, I couldn't eat enough, but we didn't have a choice, right?) I encountered "Sword of the Dawn" too late. It missed my youth, which was the period when my creative desire was the highest and my inspiration was the most abundant; but I encountered "The Sword of the Dawn" just in time, because earlier I would have missed the humanities and social sciences part of it, and this is its essence. I still remember the time when I was talking about Gawain's handsome moments in the unofficial fan group of Sword of the Dawn. If it weren't for me now, I would not choose "May the uprising warships have strong guns and guns." Because this sentence represents Gawain's indifference to power, his calm face of the laws of historical development, and his emphasis on the power of the people. The people's view of history reflected in the article made me finally realize why I was excited about all the content describing "concentrating efforts to accomplish great things" since I was a child, because this is something engraved in the blood of our people. So I quickly finished the fan output related to Sword of the Dawn, and completed other works with big eyes. They are all good books, very interesting books, but my favorite is Dawn. Then I don't know what to say, so I'll give you an update: My pupils are big and far away——Please write faster about Alien Hotel——I'm so greedy——

The protagonist is too invincible and has no growth potential. As a result, the handling of events is not as rich as in the previous books, and even just leads to the dark side in one way. It can be regarded as an invincible and enjoyable novel.

Can the author turn off the anti-theft function? Want to see

Being the one who interrupts all the time is indeed a bit round and round.

"Xiling Empire" overlooks the void from the perspective of the gods. The top-level design, the ceiling, cannot be surpassed. Sitting on the rarest resource in the void - sitting in the home of the son of the void, the whole clan ascends to become a true god. "Abnormal Creatures", the basic universe under the Xiling Empire, can travel through various universes, and there are countless universes where you can be free. There is no master here, there is a place to stay, and you can sleep in another universe. "Sword of Dawn", in a barbaric land, the light of the true god has not yet arrived, the black trap of the demonic tide is struggling, how fragile is the firefly? Wei Zai sets sail with technological power, and Emperor Gawain travels in the void. "Embers of the Deep Sea", there are countless wild universes, a pot of soup collides with each other, a meeting scares people to death, a new house is built with ruined walls, and a lonely lamp shines in the wind and rain. Breaking through the void with a final kick, cutting the reverse singularity of time, the building will collapse, the stars will appear at the end of reincarnation, and a new sound will be made in the sea of ​​information. A game for book lovers to enjoy😁

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