Reborn in 1987: My Girlfriend Is from 1907

I have a preference for rebirth novels, but there are certain parts that made me very uncomfortable, so I have to vent. Many novels on Qidian have a problem: they simultaneously emphasize the scarcity of a subject while selling it cheaply; they portray the difficulty of making money while haphazardly handling details, even what I consider wasteful.

I think the real problem is that the narrative is too flat and monotonous. As a renowned author once said, there's a 3-5 chapter golden rule in online novels: every 3-5 chapters, there should be a small climax or twist, followed by a bigger one in a few more chapters. Otherwise, it becomes bland and monotonous, like chanting a sutra. Another issue is the excessive repetition of certain details.

Female lead

It's well-written, but there are too many "good guy" cards. Also, traditional martial arts aren't effective in combat. If traditional martial arts were effective, there wouldn't be modern martial arts novels. If you don't understand this sentence, search it up yourself.

This book has excellent subject matter and theme, and the writing is superb; it's well worth reading. However, here are a few suggestions for your consideration: 1. Since this is a time-travel fantasy novel, daily life descriptions are acceptable, but they don't need to take up too much space; the main plot needs to be advanced.

The title is a bit odd, but the author's writing is excellent; it doesn't feel like a web novel. If the two protagonists weren't time-traveling and reincarnated, it would be a novel set in Shenzhen's port area during the 1980s. The characters are well-developed, and the events are realistic and believable. After reading a few chapters, it becomes highly readable.

The subject matter is novel, but the writing is somewhat bland and uninteresting.

This author's writing is really good... But they're not very good at storytelling; there are too many repetitive story structures. For example, that cat and dog—I'm so annoyed by them. Ever since the protagonist adopted a cat and a dog, they've appeared in every single chapter... And the word count is just... I'm so fed up with those two pets.

It's a pity this gem is hidden; many people can't appreciate this slow-paced writing style. The writing is very strong, with some environmental descriptions, detailed portrayals, and appropriate use of white space adding a lot of charm. You can tell the author has put a lot of effort into polishing it.

The story of a reincarnated person from the future and a young woman from the martial arts world in the Republic of China is surprisingly simple and conventional. Since you're already in Shenzhen, why not try your luck in Hong Kong? Hong Kong's situation is perfect for the male and female leads.