Reborn in 1987: My Girlfriend Is from 1907

I prefer rebirth stories, but some parts made me feel uncomfortable, so I couldn't complain. Many novels from Qidian have a problem, that is, they sell things at various discounts while talking about the scarcity of the thing; while they talk about how difficult it is to make money, they deal with it casually, which is even a waste in my eyes. Every time I see this kind of plot, it gives me an out-of-place sense of dissonance. This is also true of many best-selling works by great writers. Is this a requirement for starting editors? This Wang Xingda is obviously a clown, why should the protagonist stick to him? Of course, I only saw the chapter on fixing the TV, and I don't know the subsequent plot development. I feel that the author's writing style is good and there are many details. This is very advantageous in character creation, but it becomes a poisonous point when it comes to another focus, making money.

I think the real problem is that we have been talking about it in a straightforward way, as some great masters have said before. The golden rule of 3 to 5 chapters in the online literature industry is that every 3 to 5 chapters, there should be a small climax or a small turning point, and then a bigger one after a few chapters, otherwise it will become dull, like chanting a sutra. Furthermore, some details are repeated too many times, and there are many details. Of course, the sense of reality is stronger, but repeated descriptions make people feel verbose, and some contents are written in detail to foreshadow the subsequent content and serve the purpose, rather than detailing everything. Otherwise, there would be no word "detailed and brief".

Heroine

I feel like it's well written, but there are too many good guy cards, and traditional martial arts can't be played. If traditional martial arts could be fought, there would be no modern martial arts novels. If you don't understand this sentence, search it yourself.

The subject matter and concept of this book are very good, and the writing style is excellent. It is worth reading, but there are a few suggestions for reference: 1. After all, it is a time-traveling novel, and daily descriptions are allowed but do not need to take up too much space. The main line must be advanced; 2. It is not exciting enough, and it is a bit overwhelming for the protagonist. The author may have considered the social environment at the time (or maybe he was worried about Mr. Crab 😁), but this is an online article after all, and with such a unique cross-travel, it should be explosive. (Like Ah Cheng, Chen Hansheng and others, they are just small monsters at most. They can be beaten to death as soon as possible. It is difficult to fight with them. Hong Kong and Taiwan, Ni Bang, and Ami will not be too happy to continue beating a few big monsters. Moreover, the environment in these places is more relaxed, and the scale is larger to match the force value of British girls; 3. I hope the author will not commit literary youth disease and feel happy and moved. , Internet readers are not uneducated, but time is fragmented, so the pace should be fast and the fun points should be highlighted. Too many family conflicts affect the desire to read (the two paragraphs about the two brothers marrying their wives are good, but the paragraph about the second brother is better). Let me talk about this first. I hope that the author's good writing style and subject matter can be noticed and liked by more friends. Forgot to remind: update more.

The subject matter is very novel, but the writing is a bit bland.

The title of the book is a bit strange, but the author's writing style is very good, and it doesn't look like an online novel. If the two protagonists were not traveling through time and being reborn, it would be a novel set in and outside the Shenzhen port in the 1980s. The characters are rich and the events are real and believable. After reading a few chapters, it becomes very readable.

A person who was reborn in later generations, a young girl from the Jianghu of the Republic of China, the story was actually written in a plain and orderly way. Since we are all in Shenzhen, why not go to Hong Kong and have a try. The situation in Hong Kong is suitable for male and female protagonists.

Boxing of Boxing? Martial arts were just made up in the late Qing Dynasty. Chronicles are nothing interesting if they are divorced from authenticity.

To be honest, the writing is too detailed and there are many logic problems in some plots. Is it a female author?