Help! I’m Being Controlled by an Evil God’s Player!

Seeing sensitive content would kick players offline, leading to some wild speculations 🙂 After discovering that being naked could prevent being controlled by the evil god, Vivian stopped wearing clothes altogether. People thought she had gone mad, but she told everyone she met, "There are demons from beyond the heavens spying on the world, manipulating people's hearts and causing chaos.

I think the author's most urgent task is to find a way to add some compelling elements and enrich Vivian's character; otherwise, the readership of this book will likely continue to decline. I believe the root cause is a problem with the plot design surrounding Vivian, and several interconnected issues at that. I'll discuss them in detail below:

The dwarf player looks so much like the dwarf player himself is controlling this body.

I've read up to chapter 145 so far, and it's getting less and less interesting than the beginning. The female lead's character development is too slow. For example, in the scene where she fights the earth dragon, the author probably wanted to show her resilience, but it just felt like she's inflated like a pufferfish, getting beaten up and triggering a plot point. It feels like the female lead has become just a tool now.

First, let's build a layer of nails. My opinion is heavily influenced by personal subjectivity. The following is my opinion: I feel the author needs to seriously consider Vivian's growth path. Right now, Vivian is practically useless, which is really frustrating. Leaving aside any improvement in her skills, at least her personality needs some work; she needs to be more resilient.

I often rewrite what I've already said in Chinese into Chinese, just to pad my word count.

The later episodes were too watered down, at least 90% of them were watered down.

If it's not enough, can't you update more?

This is currently the funniest book in the series.

You really can't use your brain at all when reading a book!