Wizard: Starting with Bloodline Editing

Everything else is pretty good, but the female supporting role is too stereotyped, and she always looks like a bitch... It's too curious. Who else talks like this except for sex brains and psychopaths? Strength and progress are not mentioned at all. The younger daughter's character must be reflected. It is not as good as the red dragon male partner. At least she is silly and cute.

A very good White Wizard style. It doesn't overwhelm the protagonist. It's almost a level 1 wizard before it's even released.

Everyone is running away. You haven't activated the plug-in yet. With a book title and introduction like this, you have to get to the point quickly. Do you think people nowadays are very patient?

The protagonist has been frustrated in the first three chapters. This way of writing should make the author very confident in himself.

Overall, it was okay, but the three golden chapters were too overwhelming, and the first few chapters were a bit discouraging.

Single and more than nothing? Personally, I think it is more appropriate to have a female protagonist in this kind of article that pursues knowledge. I have read more of these three categories, Shan and Wu. Personally, I feel that the more the protagonist has many things to do and has many goals, the less suitable it is to have a female protagonist. On the contrary, the one with fewer things to do is more suitable to have a female protagonist.

The level of writing is above average. I insist on giving monthly passes and subscriptions after the updates are put on the shelves.

The writing style is too lively and jumping. Not for me, but the content is okay.

Why not create a world with monster girls and write a review guide

In the first 3 chapters, the world view, the protagonist doesn't know what he is doing.