Mortal: Choose One of the Two Starting Options: Copy and Evolve.

Ku Zhuwen's frustration is nothing more than this. Sister, I didn't want to speak at first, but after reading it, I felt so uncomfortable that I really had to say a few words. Why didn't the protagonist Hao Se arrange to hide the moon? Isn't it good for Nangong Wan and his Yuanying master? Isn't it good for Yanyue Shuangjiao and their Nascent Soul Ancestor? Aren't Zhou Nichang and her apprentice Yan Ruyan good? Yellow Maple Valley is also good, Hongfu Dong Xuan'er, Nie Ying, Zhong Wei, Niang Chen Qiaoqian, these are better than the original ones. If you marry Chen Qiaoqian and support the Chen family in the sect, your protagonist will not be aggrieved at all. This author's writing style is good, but the plot of this book is too frustrating. I don't know if there will be a twist later. I really can't stand it anymore, so I'm retreating now.

I really admire this author. You should write palace fight dramas instead of mortals.

It's still the same old problem, a lot of original plots Brother, what you wrote is a fanfic, and I clicked in because I wanted to see a fanfic, but it turns out that most of what you wrote is original plot 😅

Author, please don't accept Nangong Wan, Zi Ling Yuanyao, these belong to Han Li, just look for others. 😁 I hope to interact more with Han Li and not embarrass Han Li. Han Li is a bit selfish, but he is still a good person. Just don't go to the dungeon with Han Li.

The protagonist suffers so much and has so many misfortunes that even the dogs on the roadside glare with hatred, so why bother? I just want to watch a cultivator, a treasure hunter, and a fight. Is it that difficult?

The plug-in is only there at the beginning, but disappears later Then a bunch of people start plotting against the protagonist, which is disgusting.

Such a big golden finger and foresight. You don't practice on your own. He even went to Jujianmen to be a dog. What a brain. Just be a dog. There are also so many foundation-building monks who want you to die. Could it be a cerebral hemorrhage? You might as well go to various places and take drugs first to reach the 11th level of Qi training. Then I went to change some top-level magic weapons. Looking for copies of the intermediate Fu Lu and Tianleizi to use as trump cards. Just find another opportunity to kill Senior Brother Lu and seize the Foundation Establishment Pill. Then there is no need to go to the Giant Sword Sect to undergo this training. It's so frustrating to write. Let the protagonist's life and death be in the hands of others. If your grades are good, then there is nothing wrong with you. If you don't rush to the street, who will rush to the street?

The hook is huge. In order to force the plot, I rushed to the Bloody Forbidden Land and copied a hundred hard-boiled eggs that I didn't dare to use. I was tricked by the people in the sect and took four five-spirit-root wives. I don't know how you can support these five-spirit-root wives when you are not hooked.

After being put on the shelves, it became watery, and not only watery, the plot also started to slap the readers, and the character's logic collapsed. First, a portable space was written, and then the protagonist built the foundation and did not go to the portable space. He also went to a lot of trouble to rent a cave. No matter how good the cave is, can it be compared to replicating thousands of mid-level spiritual stones in the portable space? Forget it, just treat the protagonist as a pure native who doesn't know how to use golden fingers, but the opening of a cave in the latest chapter is just nonsense You can enter people's personal space, but you don't put your core assets in it, but carry them in a storage bag every day, and pretend to open a cave and build a utility room specifically to store your treasures? Then why are you writing this portable space

. There are so many female characters in the original works, but you have to be original. Original forget it is not as good as characters like Chen Qiaoqian.

After writing so many books, it's still a mess💩

Are you suffering from paranoia of persecution? Such a big golden finger can write like this

This is the most annoying novel I have ever seen and the protagonist is the most useless. The author's writing skills are still poor.

It's so frustrating. The same hard-boiled eggs were exchanged for the same thing. What you wrote is so frustrating.

I have seen this before, but I have never seen anything so disgusting. Han Li and Nangong Wan were made to roll together under the eyes of the protagonist, and they were speechless. Abandoned

Your Foundation Establishment Pill was obtained in exchange for the Immortal Ascension Order. The material spirit stone was exchanged for this Foundation Establishment Pill. How come the origin is unknown? Why is this a problem? You should also carefully review the use of AI...

Poison Points: 1. Little Green Bottle The protagonist traveled across the country and briefly had a casual cultivator (this master also had the Great Sword Sect Entry Token ≈ Immortality Order). After being a casual cultivator for more than 20 years, he did not find himself in the mortal world (you don't even need to actively inquire, just passively hear the names of the seven sects, you should make a guess. After all, the famous painting style of the Huang Maple Valley is different. From this, it should not be difficult to further confirm). Even in the mortal world, the author suppressed him from knowing. The time to perfectly cut off the beard/grab the little green bottle (Han Li was not born or just two years old when the protagonist traveled through time) was naturally wasted. Special note: In the case of the hopeless Four Spiritual Roots without a golden finger, people are particularly cowardly. For friends who don't dare to risk cutting off beards or snatching little green bottles, do you dare to hug the lap of a future god-incarnation boss who has yet to make a fortune (the protagonist's timeline in this book is particularly perfect and can be planned in advance to form a relationship at the level of Zhang Tie and Li Feiyu, or even further sneak into Han Li's family to bring the relationship closer)? If you don't even want to do this, just join the world of immortality and go home early to become a rich man, which can be regarded as a lifetime of enjoyment. Anyway, if it were me, without a golden finger, I would try to grab a small green bottle even if it was Tianlinggen. After all, even though Tianlinggen is good, it does not include Nascent Soul, let alone the spirit. What's more, there are unlucky people like Yan Ruyan who are unlucky enough to snatch/politically marry Tianlinggen. 2. Selection of the golden finger Han Li, who had finally waited for the author to come to his door after struggling with the four spirit root fools, went to the protagonist's booth and turned on the golden finger. The golden finger can only choose one of two, one is to copy a designated item 100 times every day, and the other is to improve the quality of the item by one level. When I saw these two options, I knew that the basic function of either one is almost unlimited "spiritual stones" and it is definitely enough for an individual. The copying ability is simple and crude, and upgrading is also very simple. Upgrading a low-level spiritual stone to a mid-level spiritual stone is also a hundred-fold difference in value. Even if the ability to increase resources by upgrading is slightly limited, giving each cultivator a hundred times the regular resources (and can also trade in and out) is enough anyway, and there is no need to worry about early development. The main difference between the two cheats lies in unconventional resources. The advantage of duplication is that high-quality or orphan consumables (elixirs or materials) are resistant to manufacturing. The only orphan product is used without fear of failure (for example, the alchemy fails and the material is destroyed) - an expanded and enhanced version of the green liquid of the small green bottle; The advantage of upgrading is that you can get the higher-level resources of the current level and the top-level resources without fear of being stuck. For example, if you get fake spiritual treasures in the later stage, can you upgrade to genuine spiritual treasures? Can you get the Void Sky Cauldron and upgrade it to an immortal weapon? If the human world's Nascent Soul level puppet reaches the top, it can be directly upgraded to the God Transformation level. ... Personally, I feel that upgrading is more advantageous when there is no shortage of regular resources but you are afraid of getting stuck (for example, it is difficult to go from the human world to the spirit world) - if you grab the small green bottle, then upgrade the small green bottle... Ma's wise protagonist does not grab the small green bottle - but the protagonist decisively chooses to copy The reason for this ability is that considering early development, copying the ability to acquire resources has advantages... So what choice should I choose? I don't write the section about choosing one of the two. I directly trigger the golden finger to obtain the ability that is copied 100 times. The second choice chooses the side that some readers think is weak. Isn't it a poisonous point? I have no choice. Just give me the ability to copy. Anyway, it's all about big hooks. No one thinks that hooks are poisonous... If you can't grab the little green bottle/gold finger by crossing the node, just don't choose it. I won't say anything. In short, the author forcibly administered the poison and was defeated by the poison.

What's going on? In Chapter 3, you told me that I have four wives?

What the hell is the setting that makes you feel resentful as soon as you enter the sect? If there was such a big hatred, the protagonist's master wouldn't be able to run away, and he should be abolished directly.

It's a pure SB novel. Even though it's such a big story, it still overwhelms the main character. It's a SB novel for the readers. The author should use AI to write it. AI can write better than you.

To defeat ten guilds with one force is all used for conspiracy and conspiracy, not a battle of wits.

You are the most frustrating mortal fanfic I have ever read. With such a big hook, casual cultivators can safely transform into gods. If you have to enter a broken sect, you can forget about it. All the boiled eggs and exchange materials are taken away, and they even post it to the middle-grade spiritual stone. When they find something is wrong, they immediately pretend to go out to do a mission and sneak away. The protagonist is really a fool.

It's okay. It would be better if we could have less contact with Han Li.

Author, you are too open-minded, and your combat power will be reduced by you. You can change it before you start, but you can't copy it infinitely. Copied things cannot be copied repeatedly. You can copy the sword evil spirit of your practice, so why do you need fine gold? Just do it. Repeatedly copy and fuse. When the spiritual consciousness of cultivation comes out, it will continue to copy and fuse, and then the Nascent Soul will continue to copy and fuse. You can say whether this combat power can be improved or not. Originally, a 100-fold copy is already unbelievable. You don't have energy conservation yet. I sincerely hope that you can continue writing this book, but it must also be written more reliably. My humble opinion is that Jiansha can be written according to the highest level of 365, which is called literature. If you then copy it, you can actually copy it to 9. 9 Is a series and written according to the conservation of energy.

Fortunately, I read the comments and started copying and evolving. When I saw the copy, I felt bored. It was just an enhanced version of Han Li in some aspects, and I couldn't copy what I didn't have. Evolution is the stronger version. A bunch of Shennong seniors tasted the pig's feet and married a bunch of useless five-lingen wives.

Before the fight, he had all kinds of awesome skills and magic weapons. During the fight, he turned into bronze. He also joined the sect and was bullied in various ways just like the original drama. After that, he had to run around the sea of ​​​​stars and follow the original plot again. It was all in vain.

The plug-in is so outrageous, a dog can turn it into a god

"Mortal: Competing with Han Li, winning in learning and cultivating immortality"

Copying a hundred copies is too much, and without any restrictions, it would be impossible to write it yourself.

The author's settings are quite good. The two talents chosen above are very good and almost everyone is discussing them. My parents-in-law are right (I support the early choice of copying). I saw a lot of people participating in the discussion, which is pretty good.