Mortal: I Have a Spirit Gathering Cauldron

At the beginning, I worked as a miner in the mine for three years, using a mining pick to break stones. This is a common person, not a shitty cultivator. The status of a cultivator is very high.

It's a timid way of writing, but I would still admire you if you didn't cheat! You are also in trouble, don't write about the fear of Han Laomo like a tiger, just say that you have gone to the forbidden area. How many elixirs do you need to collect to exchange for enough foundation building? At least sixty or seventy plants, then the original intention of keeping them alive is gone, they will be robbed later, they can give you two or three crowns, and they will still be followed (this is realistic)! If you still let me run away knowing you have the chance, then you will really have nothing to say.

Some places are too taken for granted. The Bloody Forbidden Land blocking the door is really speechless. It basically offends all the disciples of the seven sects who enter the Forbidden Land. Do you think they have a backstage, or join forces to ask people to deal with you after they come out together? When you are weak, you have to be obscene and developed.

Han Li was attacked in a sneak attack before he was killed, but he finally gave up and made peace. I don't know how the author wrote this paragraph.

Seeing that after coming out of the Bloody Forbidden Land, the front was good, but there was a problem with worshiping Li Huayuan. The protagonist always talks about being steady and holding on tight. But when rejecting a pill-forming monk in public, it can only be said that the protagonist had better pray that the pill-forming monk is not small-minded, otherwise the protagonist will die one day even if he builds the foundation. Don't talk about the invasion of demons. There are still several years before the invasion of demons. During this time, the other party can kill you. Still struggling with the number of Foundation Establishment Pills, is your Spirit Gathering Cauldron just a decoration? Directly enhance evolution. I can only say that this is a bit poisonous to me.

A mortal who writes about the Four Spiritual Roots might as well write about the Five Spiritual Roots. Otherwise, you will have supernatural spiritual roots. Using the Heaven-Building Pill for the Five Spiritual Roots can also supplement the cultivation speed of the Three Spiritual Roots. When I arrived at the Chaotic Star Sea, I tried my best to cultivate Yuanci Divine Light.

I don't even understand how writing a fanfic can ruin the prices of things. The author is really talented and didn't write with much care at all.

Senior Sister Nie after suffering from ecstasy

How can I put it? It's just so so. There are too many fanfics that follow the plot of the original work. It's easy to lose the desire to read because it's too much and there's nothing new about the original work. I know the plot and I don't have the desire to read it. However, I still enjoyed reading the fighting chapters in Jiyin. I jumped to order the rest and I didn't have any desire to read it.

After reading part of this book, I feel that the author is still a bit out of touch with reality in the golden finger settings. The male protagonist's 4 spiritual roots and matching golden fingers simply cannot meet the upgrade needs. The most suitable one is that the male protagonist has alien spiritual roots or heavenly spiritual roots and then has the current golden finger. It is relatively reasonable.

Good guy, 60 spiritual stones and one pill, you can really write it down

Snow Spirit Water, Heavenly Fire Liquid, and Dust Falling Pill are the specialties of Luan Xinghai, right? Why are they mentioned in Tiannan?

You really know how to destroy a door by writing a dozen or so pictures. Something that can be done in two chapters. Is it possible that you have a foreshadowing? What resources does the Liu family have that can be given to the protagonist? Just a boring water word count. Han Li was called to do the task, and how much benefit did Han Li get? Yes, he will have many developments in the future, and it will even be useful for him to form pills. This is not called a useless plot. What can you get from this plot of a family being wiped out? The protagonist can get useful things from the pill. Create enemies for the protagonist for no reason.

In fact, just write it as a cool or semi-happy story, so that you can accept it even if it has some flaws. If you want to write the kind of protagonist who relies on talent and talent to achieve immortality, you have to be very rigorous, otherwise readers will definitely find faults. It is still the kind of cool story that can be written easily, and flaws can be accepted.

How did the pseudo-spiritual roots enter the Yellow Maple Valley? Just at the beginning of Qi training, one pill costs sixty spiritual stones?

It takes 4 and a half days to upgrade a Yellow Dragon Pill. How long will it take to upgrade a Nascent Soul Stage Pill after that?

Stop writing fake spiritual roots. It makes me sick.

What are you writing? Take a look at your profile. Many of those women didn't show up, so you hand-picked them as the heroines? You write so slowly, can you hold on when the second one comes? Stop being yellow. I was supposed to leave right away, but suddenly this happened. So many people insist on finding you. Can't you write that the protagonist randomly found a cave to hide, practiced for a long time, and then ran away? Are those big guys still leaving their mark on you?

Alas, what can I say? I am always threatened by Han Li, taken advantage of by him, and compromises every time.

Yuan Yao's beautiful photos

After reading so many fanfics, there is no one that follows Huang Maple Valley to Beiliang Kingdom. They all go to Chaos Star Sea. It is true that Chaos Star Sea has more monster resources, but I can't stand it in all the books. There is no book where he was forced to go to the Northern Liang Kingdom because of the general trend and was used as cannon fodder to fight the Mulan mages. In the constant battles, he competed for resources and tempered himself. In the original book, there was a gap of more than 100 years between Han Li going to the Sea of ​​Chaotic Stars and returning to the Tiannantian City to fight with Mulan. There are too many plots to explore.

It's rare to find a novel about Zi Ling that is not embarrassing. As long as the author keeps updating, I will continue to subscribe.

Model workers can ripen Golden Thunder Bamboo to cultivate Qingyuan Sword Technique. In fact, the protagonist can practice the skills of Tianjing Sanren. A monk who can kill the Lord of the Star Palace alone. Its inheritance is definitely a top-notch technique. Moreover, the protagonist can also use the Soul Gathering Cauldron to enhance the magic weapon materials. You can even use the materials to create a Binghuoyang thunder or a Gengjin divine thunder. The enhanced version of the eight-door golden light mirror refined in this way. Its power will definitely be no worse than the Model Worker's Green Bamboo Bee Cloud Sword. Even stronger. This is in line with the character of the protagonist. The protagonist can persevere in the human world 🔨🔨

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The writing was good in the beginning, but it started to fall apart after chapter 262. It collapsed several chapters at a time, so let's start reading. If it doesn't work, I'll delete it and stop reading.