The Great Wilderness in the City

I had a post before saying that the author's writing at the beginning was very poor and it was too boring to read. But after I said it, I came back to look at it today and it seems to have changed. It looks much better. The author's level has improved and he is willing to make corrections. I think it is very good. The data of this book is not good, and he does not make much money, but he insists on writing 300,000 words and has not yet finished it. The content is okay, at least from the perspective of me, an ordinary reader (I read novels on various platforms for a total of 1,500 hours, which should be considered average), I really can't find any major faults at the moment. It's awesome, good luck to the author. 👍👍👍

I originally thought that the beginning of the novel was very confusing, but then it got a little interesting. It's worth reading.

There are not many votes, and these are the only things that make a famous author. They are all given to you. Don't collapse the underlying logic.

The core points of the three golden chapters compiled from the homework help: the first chapter uses conflicts or abnormal events to create strong hooks, quickly explains the protagonist's situation and sets up suspense; the second chapter highlights the protagonist's character, golden fingers and initial conflicts, promotes the rhythm and strengthens expectations; the third chapter realizes the sense of satisfaction through slaps in the face or small climaxes, while laying down new crises, conspiracies and multiple foreshadowings. The whole film should form an emotional roller coaster, adhere to a strong hook, fast pace, and high expectations, and avoid large paragraphs of background explanation and irrelevant dialogue. Case: The suspense sentence at the beginning of the first chapter of "Store Opening Diary" is "If you have any hesitation about starting a business, please give up immediately." This sentence is cut in with an unusual persuasive tone, immediately creating doubts and conflicts, which is in line with the technique of grabbing attention first in the first chapter, and leaving expectations for subsequent character selection and plot advancement.

I came to the comment section of other books and saw the latest chapter in one day. It is very interesting and a breath of fresh air in this genre. There are not many books like this that make people shine. The bond between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is written very naturally, and the psychological transformation of the male protagonist is also very delicate. I don't know if it's a harem or a single female protagonist, but I can do either. The interactions with the various female characters are quite fresh and interesting. One suggestion I have is not to spend too much space on the aspect of failing to review for any exam. I know you may want to create a protagonist whose humanity has not disappeared and has some bond with the school, but repeating it so many times is boring and feels a bit forced to create a plot. Overall it's still very good, keep up the good work

How to deal with that female Yanshi? If the protagonist hadn't died, he would have died long ago.

But Zhao's plot is obviously shaped in the direction of a female protagonist. I can't understand why the author said it's not a female protagonist, but does it count as a female supporting role?

Food is close to jelly but not there yet. Except for the plot of the heroine, which some people with PTSD may find bad, there is nothing toxic about it. Personally, I don't find it difficult to accept as long as it's reasonable.

As a bookworm for more than ten years, the level and quality of this book are definitely not up to par. Especially after reading too much in the early stage, I was amazed. But as the map and world view unfolded, I lost all living beings in the novel. This book has written a million words. The plot, rhythm and group portraits still do not lose the standard. The author is indeed very good. I personally think he has the appearance of a king.

I found it in the daily guide of poisoning. I found it after five or six rounds. It looks good. To be honest, this book really deserves a recommendation. At least it is much better than some of the editor-in-chief's recommendations, best-seller selections, and some of the junk books in Sanjiang. I really don't understand how those rubbish books got published. It simply pollutes my book-finding channels.

So much pen and ink has been spent on her, and she is involved in almost every incident. Except for the beginning, the two of them are almost completely cooperative in the future. Olizi's subsequent performance did not take the first three kills to heart, right? And Xiao Lizi only has bad taste in Xiao Zhao. For example, when recording a video of Xiao Zhao crying, Xiao Zhao only has a different attitude towards Xiao Lizi. Aren't all these characteristics of the female protagonist? Xiao Zhao's involvement in the plot and the protagonist's life is not something that a guide can cover at all, so I don't quite understand why the author still says that this is a novel without a female protagonist, even though there is a label in the introduction that is "love" 😭😭 ps1: To be honest, I have read this book with many friends, and I feel that the performance of this book is not worthy of this book at all. As for the quality of the book, there are few books on the monthly list that are better than this one, but the performance has not taken off. I feel that it is because of the heroine. If the problem of the heroine is solved earlier, the performance of the book will be much better ps2: There are many characters in it that I like very much. How should Oda and Yu Fox intervene in the plot later? It feels a lot slower, and they won't slowly fade out of the plot 😭

"Being a Tribulation Cultivator in the Cultivation Word Game" and this are the only two books I've been reading recently. They are both very good.

Why isn't a good book popular? It's absolutely beautiful. This book ranks among the top at the starting point.

It's interesting. I think it should be at a level that can be included in the list. Nowadays, many of the lists are full of messy things.

Prevent the book from being nourished to death and support it Jia Jing Miao Jia Jing Miao Jia Jing Miao

I may have submitted it to the wrong author category. I think it should not have been submitted to the city, but should have been submitted to the light novel category. Maybe the results would be better (not necessarily).

The writing is very good, but how long will it take you to finish the story of Butterfly Lovers? You have watched dozens of scenes, and you still want to continue?

I can't imagine what Lao Zhao will look like after this copy comes out

It's definitely more than food and grass. Come on, just keep updating steadily.

The writing style and rhythm are quite good, but there seems to be no big main line, only the small main line of the ghost mother, which can be completed in 200 chapters at most. Zhao and Wang both look a bit like the heroine, but not quite.

1. The improvement of realm is too slow. It is Liangyi realm in more than 200 chapters, and it is still Liangyi realm in more than 400 chapters. Most of the sense of growth is reflected in the male protagonist's emotions (in fact, I still prefer Li Zhaoyuan's character design in the early stage, "Everyone who kills me will make me stronger" is fierce, but this feeling gradually disappears later). The improvement in realm combat power is really not obvious. According to the current pace, it will take 1000 chapters to catch up with Zhao's realm. 2. The emotional line is too unstable. Zhao is indeed modeled after the heroine, but the author said before that there is no heroine. The Liang Zhu chapter looks like Zhao has a single heroine, but more and more female characters are written, and it seems to have a tendency to have more heroines (but the supporting actresses are not described enough, the characters are too thin, and the number of appearances has increased). This kind of repeated pulling makes people uncomfortable. 3. Rhythm issues, there are too many daily scenes, and the main plot advances slowly. The first big BOSS, the Ghost Mother, has not been dealt with for more than 400 chapters, which is really a bit delayed. The daily writing itself is not bad, and it is understandable that the author wants to use it to promote Li Zhaoyuan to regain his humanity. However, when placed within the framework of supernatural powers + vision invasion, the main storyline of daily life is diluted, and the thrill of combat seems insufficient. Overall, it looks good, and the writing style and atmosphere are not bad. I just hope that the positioning of the emotional line can be clarified as soon as possible, the rhythm of the main line can be accelerated, and the level improvement should be given, and don't be stuck for too long. I will continue to vote monthly, so come on, and strive to update 10,000 words per day.

Recommended by friends from Red Ji. The writing is really good. Except for the slow expansion, I don't think there are any obvious shortcomings. I support it.

I really didn't expect that I didn't save so many red envelopes when I wrote a million words. Users who saw this comment heard me say that this book is really well written. The current lack of results is because of the weird push mechanism. I feel that everyone who is reading the book feels the same as I do, it is well written but a bit confusing. Let me see what you think. There are many people who write well. I will try harder when I reach 2 million words

I feel like I am missing an update before it becomes popular 🙂🙂 When will the author make another update? Squeeze it out.

So what, when will you make a puppet of your own destiny? They all rely on their own abilities to fight, which is a bit unworthy of their name.

It looks good, there are no too old routines, and there are no unpleasant poisonous points The work is like a cup of good tea, it has its own style and characteristics Looking forward to updates

Promise me that you will write books for the rest of your life, okay?

The exposure is so low, no one has read it. If more people read this book, they will definitely like it after reading a few chapters.

Okay, okay, it smells like a secular master, but the princess is actually quite cute, do you really not want to accept it? ()

I came from station B and looked at a few pictures that are really good online. But the name is not good. The four-letter name is holding me back. How many does the author order now?