The Shackles of Humanity

The author's writing skills are still good. The three golden chapters at the beginning are very well written, very attractive, and on a fairy grass level. The author should maintain this writing power even if he writes a new book in the future. It's a pity that after chapter 50, the character creation and plot suddenly become a bit confusing, and there are always some Renaissance plots. The mini-boss dropped from Li Kui's level to Su Wenlin's level, which probably drove some people away. After Lu Qing went offline, she suddenly returned to her previous level. The main line is slightly clearer, and world settings are constantly being added. It can be seen that this part is an area that the author is very good at, that is, describing how the protagonist cultivates. Whether it is a torture style or a sentimental style, the author writes very well. In the future, the author can expand more plot research in this area. The protagonist's pretense no longer simply relies on the Renaissance plot, but is reflected through the level of cultivation. In this regard, you can refer to Lanke Qiyuan. This book can be said to be a model of indifferent and pretentious style. Recently, Nebula has been a little confusing since it went online. The main mission is not very clear, and I feel like I want to write something about upgrading, and I also want to write something about science fiction. Considering that the author writes books part-time, updates are not regular. It is recommended that the author take some time to sort out the outline and refill the world settings. To be honest, if the author can maintain the level of the first three golden chapters, the future will be promising.

The writing is beautiful, but the main character's IQ drops when he meets a woman, which seriously lowers the standard of the book! Moreover, the female character's IQ is also low, which makes her seem superfluous. Keep the dark wind as promised, don't be silly and sweet!

I finally caught up with the serialization. It took me three days and my views on this book have been changing. 🌹 The hard sci-fi PUBG in the early 30 chapters is definitely very attractive. 😅 In the 30th chapter before the paid chapter, the crazy abuse of the protagonist. Due to the character flaws of the protagonist (the character is very contradictory), I have to say that it can only be regarded as a weed and even mixed with a little poison. ps. I am already very objective. Only by accepting appropriate criticism from readers can we grow together. 😳 However, the paid text finally stopped abusing the protagonist. The stable life is vaguely larger than the city, and this otherworldly feeling (even if there is a battle, the protagonist will not be disabled or something) makes me think that this book is gradually becoming normal, and it is just food. 👍🙏 The thunder energy released in the official battle with the Sea Clan attracted the attention of the evil god. After being killed by the evil god, up to the latest chapter, this quick content is definitely regarded as fairy grass. The protagonist's various understandings of heaven and the author's control of the rhythm of the entire plot are perfect. Full score 💯I would give it an excellent score of 85. The fifteen points are all due to the protagonist's early character flaws. It's not like he was in his forties or fifties and time traveled to become a teenager, but rather he was a teenager with memories of his forties or fifties' previous life. Of course, the whole book is still very good. The author perfectly combines science fiction and fantasy, and there is no sense of dissonance at all, because there is a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage. The whole book barely scores 85 points for Xiancao. Those who are used to reading cool articles can read this kind of abusive main text. Of course, in the later period, it is actually considered a cool article. This style change is very interesting.

Let me encourage the author again. The more you look at the back, the more useful things you can learn. Maybe I was too ignorant before, and there are many viewpoints and knowledge in it, and the reverie about the future, which is really more and more popular with me. Personally, I often daydream about the end of intelligent life, about Taoist psychology, the unity of nature and man, and the unpredictability and permanence of fate. Qualitativeness, etc., Used to be just specious, and I couldn't always feel the general idea. It was too vague. I learned a lot after reading this book, and it also strengthened some of my thoughts. Of course, everything now is just daydream and speculation, but the meaning of life lies in constant exploration. Come on, the author, and strive to finish the book. Sooner or later, this good book will shine. Don't be fooled by temporary money and fame, I believe in your original intention.

I feel that the protagonist is too stupid (´▽｀)ノ♪. Even if he is not smart, he cannot be fooled four or five times at a loss.

I finally understand why I don't like having a female protagonist. Every heroine means a lot of trouble. Why isn't there a book where the heroine wipes the protagonist's butt, and the protagonist goes crazy and commits suicide to save the heroine?

All four-dimensional creatures are about to reach the top of the world, and they can be plotted and poisoned by others. It doesn't matter that the protagonist's IQ was low in the early stage, but now he has become a rational four-dimensional creature, and he is so stupid. Moreover, the book is discontinued at the first disagreement. It's really hard for you to come up with such a disgusting plot on the same day. If I don't fight back and kill them all later, I won't read it. I have been following this book for a year and a half. The last time I was disgusted was because of the three-eyed man named Su.

I want to portray the image of a lonely hero, but when I see a woman, I get involved with her. I can only say that this is a loser mentality.

The protagonist will be weakened every few chapters. Do you think it's Miyamoto?

This book uses a large number of Western fantasy and modern knowledge systems to explain cultivation and Taoism. It can be said to be the best book that combines the Western fantasy system and the Chinese system. But there are also many shortcomings: 1. The author's pre-travel setting of the protagonist has no connection with the character, experience or wisdom after the time-travel. The character of the post-travel protagonist is more in line with the physical character of the indigenous protagonist who was taken away from his body, and is cowardly and bad. But the author emphasizes again and again the experiences of souls before time-travelling, such as joining the profession as a professor and becoming a senior manager after joining the profession and becoming an experienced veteran who has lived in the world of mortals. Therefore, the misalignment is too serious. If the experience of this person arranged by the author is followed, then the protagonist should be Lao Yinbi or Lao Goubi. 2. The author uses a large section of Western fantasy magic settings to explain the realm of Chinese monasticism, but also focuses on guiding Buddhism and its sects. But instead, I tried my best to avoid Taoist issues. However, in many places, Taoism is naturally used to supplement the final definition, which is somewhat similar to the so-called appearance in Buddhism. After all, the protagonist is influenced by Buddhism and Taoism, and he cultivates himself mainly as a Taoist. 3. The author still does not realize the protagonist's active learning ability enough. For example, most people who come out of the current education system will subconsciously hope to understand our existing world through historical news newspapers and knowledge systems. However, the author only arranged for the protagonist to read a history book, and the active learning ability of books is incredibly weakened. Then hurriedly arrange to participate in all kinds of troubles. This is also inconsistent with the time-travel personality of modern people. That's all for now.