Open Your Adventure Guide

Risking your life and making enough money to cover your basic expenses? Which genius started the setting?

The long shot-like description in the first chapter of the book feels like it outweighs a bunch of fantasy books written in a Western fantasy style. Let me have a taste of how salty your book is Read a short paragraph and comment on it To be honest, it has a lot of flaws. Even a sports student with a 16-year-old body cannot hike dozens of kilometers in full armor. Of course, the author simply wanted the protagonist to have a more youthful feel so that readers could easily relate to it, so I didn't say that. What's more, he doesn't have much supplies on him, and his identity before time travel was just a programmer with a hobby of full-armor fighting. Rather than being a wilderness survival master, do you really think hunting without tools is easy? If the previous article mentioned that the protagonist ate goblin meat raw in order to survive, wouldn't it be a better image?

After reading the article, the most prominent problems in my personal experience are: the lack of a third-party perspective (reader's perspective) and the passive promotion of the plot. There is no foreshadowing and explanation of the parties involved in the event. The reader's understanding of the event is limited to the perspective of the protagonist, without a third-party perspective. Although the sense of substitution will be stronger, the lack of a third-party perspective will lead to short-term logical problems. For example, the protagonist has just crossed over and was detected by the authorities in a no-man's land. Even the appearance and items carried are not included. Knowing the general idea, but not explaining why it was discovered, readers can only subconsciously think that the government has strong monitoring capabilities. Such strong monitoring capabilities must bring extremely strong control, and the official power must be very powerful. Then the novel is not suitable for a medieval western fantasy adventure setting, at least it must be like a magic empire. Moreover, the protagonist is set to have strong planning ability and subjective initiative, so it is not suitable to passively advance the events. It is suitable to write about the protagonist solving events due to accidents or proactively during the adventure. Passively advancing the plot seems too deliberate.

The protagonist of this book is going to take the DND warrior route. Do you guys have any recommendations for suitable professional specialties? Any profession is acceptable, and we strive to let the protagonist embark on the path of becoming powerful as soon as possible.

Finally, I have a book about warriors. The warrior is one of the strongest sub-classes in DND, an absolute supermodel, the king of DPS, and the absolute core of the team. On the contrary, the mage is positioned as an auxiliary. The strength of dnd mage comes from his mouth and teammates, DM's tolerance for you. It can only be said that the Qidian mage is a hanging dog in the skin of a mage.

Can you please stop fighting cultists all the time? The adventure guide has almost become a salvation guide. Can we have some adventures?

The author does not recommend using the currency method of 1:100. It is recommended to use the currency structure of 1 gold = 12-15 silver = 240-300 copper. England currently has the most detailed economic data in the middle and late Middle Ages in the world. Just copy it and you're done.

The second volume is meant to be a continuation of the previous volume, and it will be done with just one volume of Lushanda's light camp fighting against the underground Cthulhu evil god. As a result, Rosetta Lossar was directly added to start the battle between gods. Didn't I say that this place is worthy of so many gods descending to rob it? Moreover, there was no foreshadowing in the front, and it was so sudden that there was no experience at all. Forcibly giving away the protagonist's head was even weirder. It almost doesn't look like it was written by the same person.

It's good, but the rules of activating the log are difficult to understand - at the beginning, the protagonist gets rewarded feedback after writing on the log. But there were also several times later when the protagonist did not write, and the diary proactively gave reward feedback.

The rhythm of writing for the past half month felt very wrong. The protagonist's sense of existence was either almost zero, or in order to increase the sense of existence, the protagonist, who was less than level 10 at the time, was forced to enter the legendary battlefield to collect kills. Now it has even jumped to the battle of the incarnations of gods. It is conceivable that the protagonist, who is only at level 10, will either disappear again in the future plot, or ignore the logic of combat power and forcibly add some plot to the protagonist, but either way is uncomfortable to watch. Can't we first match the protagonist with plot upgrades with a suitable combat power level and then adapt to legends or even god plots? The author may think that the big scenes are exciting to write, but the upgrade of the protagonist and the rhythm of the plot feel like they are finished.