A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: From the Start at Spirit Beast Mountain
凡人之开局灵兽山
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- Completed
- Length
- 1.9M Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Cultivation Civilization
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- 4mo ago
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651Chapters
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28.2kFans
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Don't worry too much about Han Li, after all, the protagonist of fanfiction isn't Han Li.
Author, please don't write about harems or concubines! That's disgusting. There'll be no reading material if you write about those.
I have a small suggestion: change "Golden Core" to "Core Formation." These two realms are completely different concepts, especially in newer cultivation novels like "The Mysterious Immortal Clan." In these novels, the Golden Core stage is already considered a true immortal capable of plucking the sun and moon from the sky, while in "A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality," the Core Formation stage is merely a minor ant with some supernatural powers.
No, you're making the protagonist so useless and pathetic in this fanfiction? What are you trying to achieve? I was already annoyed before he reached Nascent Soul stage, and then he was chased by the Golden Flood Dragon King afterward—I had no desire to continue reading. Think about it carefully; it's fanfiction, what more do you want?
You only reached the Core Formation stage with 96 stacks, and it took 243 stacks to break through to the mid-stage. Your apprentices had already reached the peak of the early stage before you broke through. What's the point of constantly improving your foundation and suppressing it so much?
😌I wanted to see the protagonist be incredibly awesome, but the protagonist wasn't awesome at all.
No way, how could your protagonist be so unlucky? He's already being targeted by all the forces in the Chaotic Star Sea at the early Core Formation stage, and it's been over 200 chapters already! He's still only at the early Core Formation stage. I've completely lost the desire to continue reading. 😒😒😒
Even if all the resources in the entire human realm were used up, the protagonist's talent wouldn't be enough to reach the Nascent Soul stage.
The person with the three spiritual roots of metal, water, and earth has chosen a fire-attribute cultivation method. 😰😰😰 After reading dozens of chapters, I still don't know if they should focus on metal, water, or earth. It's truly unbelievable that someone without a fire-attribute spiritual root would choose a fire-attribute cultivation method.
Author, please don't include Nangong Wan, Ziling, or Yuan Yao; these belong to Han Li. Find others instead. 😁😁😁