Am I the Only Living Person in This Chat Group?

Your biggest problem is that you have used up all the cool points and foreshadowings, causing your combat power to be stretched. (If the combat power is too high, it will be difficult to write a cool point. After all, this is a horror supernatural novel, and you will need supernatural powers or immortality.) The atmosphere is good in the early stage, because the cool points come one after another, just like props. You come one after another, or even a prop appears in a few chapters. If you have a prop appear in one volume, it is reasonable. It stands to reason that in the early stage, the protagonist's life is in danger at any time, in the middle stage, he can only protect himself, in the later stage, he barely trades for one, and in the later stage, he fights the boss and finally ascends. Also, there are too many cool spots, especially the same cool spots, which will make you tired. Readers eat big meals every day and occasionally have some cold dishes. If you can write a good story, readers will also buy it, killing two birds with one stone. Get a few more dungeons and get props in the dungeons.

The shortcomings of this author's book are simply that it starts high and goes low. The early stage is better than the later stage, and the plot cannot be slowed down. The speed is fast, and the combat power is also high. As long as the writing is slower, 10,000 monthly votes will be no problem. The same goes for his previous books. The first one was good, but the second one was unreadable. He kept pushing the plot without buffering, and there was no sense of mysterious recovery. His two Tomato books, if written more slowly and well, both started at 9.0

I hate you. Why did you run? Why? Why? Why? I really want to know the ending. If you're unfinished, just let it be unfinished. If you're unfinished, I'll accept your ending. Just cut off the ending for me 😭

The ghosts in this book should be similar to those in "The Trickster House". At the same time, it also combines some settings of "Mysterious Resurrection" and "Hell Apartment" to form its own style, which creates a great sense of anticipation and excitement in the early stage. The highlights now are: What is the ghost in the chat group, What happened in the apartment, Why did Xu Yuan become like this. Personally, I feel that the protagonist is too open-minded now and his combat power is expanding too fast. It is easy to become a fairy tale and a nesting doll of rules. It depends on how the author writes in the future.

I have read about 20 chapters and it gave me some surprises. I can only say that this book is strong. The author is really good at writing about supernatural beings. I don't recommend digging into the timeline as much as before. I can just write on the surface. The author really can't understand it.

Come on, I'm ready to go to the fourth floor. Nurture it. It has the same smell as the hell apartment at the beginning. But the fly in the ointment is that the fear of the confrontation with the ghosts in the dungeon is not enough. That is to say, the copy pk description is not enough. There is no spine-chilling feeling like the first apartment and recovery. It should be the apartment I visited in high school in 2010. I still remember the Scarlet Letter mission, and some of the missions are still vivid in my memory.

In my previous life, I missed "The God of Shepherd" by Zhai Zhu, "The Strange Immortal" by Foxtail, and "Mysterious Resurrection" where I laid flowers in front of the Buddha. In the end, I ended up delaying my graduation from college, my girlfriend cheated on me, and all kinds of bad things happened one after another. In this life, I will never miss this book again.

Why are ghosts immortal? Because of the author. If you kill the author, the ghosts will die.

Author, you'd better listen to us selectively, because you have an outline, and we have many different opinions. If you change the outline at will, you may have a breakdown later.

The author came to the starting point to preach. Since he is here to preach, write well. If you are a eunuch, just take your time. If the eunuch writes well, then it is okay. If the writing is bad and the eunuch becomes a eunuch, and his reputation for preaching is ruined, then just wait to change your vest and take care of yourself!

It's coming to an end soon. The quality of the latest chapters is very poor. I can't hold back just the human-ghost hybrid and salvation. Before the author finishes it, I allow your old Feng to be in a state of superposition of life and death. If it really ends, then your old Feng can only be saved by me.

At present, the protagonist is definitely a human, not a ghost. Ghosts are immortal, and the protagonist has already died once. He uses playing cards to resurrect. However, the foreshadowing laid before will make people think that the protagonist is a ghost, and the protagonist also obtained a ghost gun to become a ghost. Therefore, the protagonist may become a ghost in the future, and it has a destined result, so he covers up his past and lets living people live in the apartment. This ghost can only see his ghost appearance in the future, so he thinks he is a ghost.

How come he looks so similar to a living person on the Tomato forum?

Rule 1: The chapter suddenly breaks at the climax of the story and will be posted again tomorrow Rule 2: The chapter breaker will open a chapter of explanations and supplements to create the illusion of an extra update

Buddha and air conditioners have exhausted their talents. I declare that this book is the new leader in the horror world.

The writing is quite good, but my eyes are very tired because of all the words. I have to pay for the wonderful places. I hope the author can reflect on it.

The ghost characteristics of this world are the same as the mysterious resurrection, immortality plus regular Amomum villosum. But unlike the ability of some high-level ghosts to mysteriously revive, many ghosts in this world have basic wisdom, and are more dangerous and deadly in comparison. However, the protagonist does not have to worry about resuscitation when using the ghost ability. It seems that the ability can be used unlimitedly. I don't know if the same is true for other people. In general, strengthening ghosts also strengthens humans, but ghosts should be strengthened more powerfully. After all, wisdom is the only hope when the power gap is too large, and the wisdom of ghosts with a slightly stronger strength is no different from ordinary people. The human side is too weak, and it will be difficult to win if it continues to recover.

After raising it for a while, I found that it was almost ready to become a eunuch. In fact, it was also expected. When Old Man Sun appeared, his writing was already not very good. When he fought with the Ghost King, it was even more sloppy. It was hard to tell how powerful he was. I was quite speechless while reading it at night. I was huddled under the quilt because I was afraid of horror novels, but later I poked my head out and wrote a long paragraph to complain about it, but I deleted it in the end because I rarely give long negative reviews to the author, and I also consider the author's psychological state. More than 600,000 words is actually the beginning of a long novel. If there are signs of collapse before more than 600,000 words, you can sort it out early. The longer it is delayed, the more round it will be and it will not come back.

🍅'S new book has also been cut. I guess the author felt that the results of 🍅's new book were not very good, so he cut it again. But you add a chapter to your new book every day, how good do you want it to be?

Lao Suntou sacrificed his entire business, thinking that he could win as long as Xu Yuan was lured into a trap. What was the result? Without the protagonist, you will die in the first wave, but with the protagonist, you will still lose. In the end, you have to rely on the protagonist to change into a smiling man to solve the problem. And Xu Yuan is even more of a heavyweight. He sacrificed countless things throughout his life to prevent mankind from being destroyed by the Smiling Man. In the end, he found out that it was all his arrangements that led to the birth of the Smiling Man. It is written in the article that the protagonist does not necessarily turn into a ghost when he dies, but once he becomes a ghost in this timeline, he will definitely turn into a smiling man no matter what he dies in the future. The gun that the protagonist has to turn into a ghost is 100% given by Xu Yuan, and it is also Xu Yuan who forces him to use the gun. A whole city of innocent civilians and countless heroic warriors and heroes were involuntarily 'sacrificed' to these two clowns, sacrificing themselves to create an apocalyptic future. Or should we leave the merits and demerits to future generations for comment? If the truth can be told, these two people will be nailed to the pillar of shame 😰

In the early stage, I felt that the dungeon in the apartment was slowly being written very well. After the dungeon in the temple, I felt that the plot started to get a bit messy. There were too many things mixed together. Old Sun's appearance and exit were a bit too early, and Xu Yuan was a little behind the version. The ghost queen with the time system felt like it was already a super power battle. 😵, I was immediately confused in the Blood Gate Village. Both the way of escaping and the battle on the floor were a bit chaotic. Is it too exaggerated to create another city-destruction incident like this? Shanghai was also a big scene after all. After the village escaped and had a fight, another big city was destroyed. It felt like I pulled out the Eighth Young Master so early, and because the time was short, I could speed-pass the Blood Gate Village directly. I hope the primary school can write better in the future 🤓 There is also the problem of props, there are a bit too many, and some props really feel like supermodels, and they have to be shaved off later. This feels a bit awkward. I don't know if anyone feels the same as me.

I've been fooled again. I've been fooled twice in 🍅. From now on, I will report every book written by this author.

Eunuch twice, included in the untrustworthy list

His name is Broken Chapter Ghost, and his ability is to stop at will in the plot 🙂

I was just bored and scrolling through Douyin and found that someone has already started making sand sculpture animations of this book!

The king of 🤡 is actually a male mother

The author learned this from Jiang Nan. I should really kill you and Jiang Nan together.

I have been reading this book years ago and have always wanted to get the recording copyright. The copyright of this book was very popular at that time. If you hadn't stopped it, I probably wouldn't have been able to get it. Fortunately, it's all fate. I got it, and you stopped it too! To be honest, I have already found someone to continue writing, just to satisfy the fans who like it. The day after the audio version was released, that is, just now, I found out that you faked the corpse 🤭🤭. I think it is good luck. I hope that I can do my best in the audio field to make more people like this book and listen to it! I also hope that you will live up to your expectations and keep going 🤝🤝🤝 ~~~Xima Anchor: The Second Master said

I am chovy, you have finished writing the book for me! Why isn't it updated again?

I originally wanted to save a few more chapters before reading it, but I just can't hold it in anymore. I really want to know the follow-up development. Even if the author writes Xu Yuan and Gao Tian together, I will accept it. Let me see the ending 😒