The Whole Neighborhood Transmigrates, and I Can Upgrade Everything

Honestly, the focus of a group survival story should be on survival itself, on how to farm and develop resources. Yours is practically indistinguishable from an infinite flow novel; you're constantly thinking about fighting. Even your farms don't have ordinary crops, only special ones—either for pet advancement or equipment crafting—none of which are used for food. You've clearly gone off-topic; you should be writing an infinite flow novel.

The main character doesn't seem like a main character; he's too much of a background character.

It's safe to say that most of the free items available now are trash.

Chapter 173: Only 9 days have passed?

It's not good. I've read several books of this type, and this one details the interpersonal relationships too much, making the survival aspect feel suffocating. The team's loot-sharing is also described at length; you can skip ahead without affecting the reading experience. The author probably doesn't want to be selectively read even if they pay.

I can leave after reading a few chapters. The fact that he didn't gather resources or intelligence for the first two days and just stayed home like a coward training is quite speechless. Humans have brains; they're not single-player characters.

How old is the author? Anyone over 25! Then they won't keep referring to him as "Grandpa Xu" throughout the whole article! Even your own father might start calling you "old man"! Old Xu, or Master Xu, either is fine! Another question: Is it because the main character has a big face, or are all the people in Building 1 "kind-hearted"? Does the protagonist "rightfully" take all the advantages? Are you playing house?

I once read a book where the entire neighborhood was transported to another world. The opening scene involved fighting crocodiles, and the protagonist couldn't even pierce the crocodiles with a spear. I knew it was trash.

What is the author writing? First, it says many people died when they went out at night, then it says no one dares to go out during the day. If they don't dare to go out during the day, they'll dare to go out at night because it's even more dangerous? So, the people in this neighborhood only play high-level games and think there's no challenge during the day?

Too much AI flavor The writing is too plain. Yes, both. Barely enough to serve as provisions, 50 points.