Raising a Beast-Taming King from Infancy

Goldfinger's skill creation is very good, and the evolution of each skill has sufficient uses. The gameplay of assigning titles to beasts is also very playable, and the description of the characteristics of the beasts is just right. I hope that in the future, we can expand the world view, establish a more complete animal pet illustration, add some distinctive supporting characters, and think of some more fun operation methods. The plot is average. It's still the classic and cool routine: the protagonist fights for the opportunity to be given benefits by the official, and then is secretly made difficult by the official villain. The protagonist pretends to be 13 and slaps him in the face, exposes the conspiracy, and then is smoothed out by the official boss, who recruits heavily and gets more benefits. The details of the plot are very good, and the level of enjoyment is okay. However, the description of the faction struggle is too childish. It is not recommended to continue to describe the official struggle. Especially the part where the protagonist still thinks that the leader of Pingshier is a "good guy", it still seems that the protagonist is a bit naive. In this case, it is still recommended to use the academic style, focusing on skill matching, battles, and secret exploration. Once written, it will be very exciting. There should be fewer twists and turns, because you may not be able to grasp them.

I've crowdfunded it. If I get 10,000 likes, I'll write a book about transforming from a fertilized egg liver into a beast-controlling god. Does anyone want to read it?

This time Sanjiang Sanben's baby was aborted…

Don't let the protagonist be completely single-player! You really can't go to school! The pace is too slow. It feels like there is basically no plot! I actually like this kind of subject matter. I feel good about what you wrote, but the plot is too slow and I have no desire to follow up.

The title of this book doesn't arouse any interest in me 😥

It's actually a new book by the author of Purification Beast Control. . . . I'm afraid I'll be a eunuch again

If the author works hard, the basic baby flow next door is far worse than what you wrote. Those books have all been signed and put on the shelves, yours will definitely be able to

As title

There is too little plot, and it is boring to keep throwing out settings, and there is no comparison at all. It always feels like the protagonist has already kicked the league and punched the rules of the world.

There is a high probability that there will be content about the academy later. In fact, writing about the academy is indeed the choice of many people and it is relatively normal. However, I think there is still the possibility of putting new wine in old bottles, such as Zhuzi's Padya Academy. It is to weaken the feeling of the academy, improve the character's autonomy, and then explore secret places or travel somewhere, and then have assessments during the journey. This may be better. As for the normal college flow, I feel that I can see everything at a glance, most likely the school team, then the competition, then the university and so on. It can be okay or too ordinary.