A Mortal Heart Seeks the Dao

. ? Two lifetimes and six hundred years of experience? To translate, doesn't it mean that losers don't go ashore and boast that they have 600 years of experience in not going ashore. ?

This book is very well written so far. There are not many books that I can read at the beginning. I gave up if I didn't see the paid chapters. I have been reading books for many years and it is very demanding. So far, the articles about cultivating immortals have not surpassed the ones about mortals cultivating immortals and passing on to the human world, while the ones about the immortal world are just average!

After rescuing people, you still have to do chores, but you still don't give food and medicine? Has this ungrateful martial arts school been destroyed by the protagonist?

I just have a question. With 600 years of experience in cultivating immortals in your previous life, you can't even create an innate skill? So what's the point of this immortal cultivation?

I just like to see the flow of ordinary people, developing upward step by step. If you are not afraid of being slow, you are afraid of collapse. Too many novels develop too fast and then collapse later. Eating sugar cane in the front, eating poop in the back is extremely uncomfortable. The author grasped the plot well

It's not like the mortal stream, but more like the martial arts stream, with a lot of bullshit and ruinous things.

Where did the vast secrets of the Immortal Way come from in six hundred years?

The author's writing skills and ability to write stories are a waste of writing about ordinary people on the streets. Without innovation, no matter how strong your basic skills are, it will be difficult to achieve results.

The two monthly passes at the beginning of this month are all given to you! Support the author! I'm also following Lao Yue's "Lamp on Mountains and Seas", but many people voted for Lao Yue, and this book is new, but the author writes it very well! Not white text, not verbose! I hope the author can keep writing well! 😁😁😁

The writing style of this book about cultivating immortals is good, the language is concise, the level setting of cultivating immortals is quite satisfactory, the sound and color of the fighting scenes are not bad, and the description of the psychological activities of the protagonist is okay. The shortcomings are: the description of the power of the cultivation techniques of each level of immortality is not adequate, the words and deeds are inconsistent with the status, the description of the psychological activities of the supporting characters is not rich enough, and the most annoying thing is that the names of the characters are too random, lack of deep meaning and are rubbish.