This NPC Is Ahead of the Version

Previously, people said the protagonist template was overpowered, but now a simple d+🤡 can trap a protagonist destined for destiny. So the question is, who is the real 🤡? 🤔

For those curious about this book, you can read the beginning, which is good. But I'm just giving you a heads-up, and also venting my personal dissatisfaction. There's a glaring flaw in chapters 272-273: the protagonist forcibly suppresses a person who comes to him with a sincere offer of service, wanting her to stay and serve him. Instead of being honest, he chooses to use a show of force.

The home planet's energy level couldn't support anything above C. How come, just to pad the story and slow down the pace, every enemy villain can find all sorts of artifacts? It was already stated that the home planet couldn't withstand the calamity, so why are all these monsters and demons appearing after your rebirth? C-rank beings are everywhere, and B+ characters pop up out of nowhere.

It's alright. It's a super-powered mechanic (with my own imagination), and it's basically an NPC/player hybrid. The setting is that the game merges with reality in the later stages, so the protagonist is essentially reborn with precognition and an advantage in the current version, plus the NPCs have no level cap. Advantages: So far, it's pretty good.

This author is really not suited to writing about superpowers. It's completely different from what I imagine superpowers to be. It's like a brute. Superpowers, mutants, superpowers—these kinds of superpowers are more like talents, but in your writing, they're just like skills. Kinetic energy—such a powerful thing—has been developed like this.

The diagnosis was that Valorant had overdone it.

I feel it's just so-so. It's like a battle between the left and right hemispheres of the brain. Posting simultaneously is useless. The typos pointed out by both the free and published versions are ignored. They're engrossed in their own art. I feel there's going to be a big mess later on that will disgust the readers.

Eunuch protagonist

You know what, it does have a bit of a mechanic vibe. 😀 But there are some downsides 🧐 The female character's description is a bit too classic; I think the "white moonlight NPC" setting should be changed. Also, the protagonist's S-rank ability "Kinetic Energy" seems so-so 🤔. I'm not trying to be obnoxious, but right now, this kinetic energy doesn't seem as strong as energy absorption. Or will it upgrade later?

The first chapter should be enough to introduce the background; there's no need to include that female NPC, which creates a sense of oppression.