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"The Sinking City" has a lot of negative gameplay feedback, and the gameplay is not rated highly. You may appreciate it, but if you are not familiar with the comments that criticize it, you will not be able to make improvements, and you are just a fan of the authorities. In addition, the first fifteen chapters are like, the protagonist died once inexplicably, it was not scary, and then he was accepted by a small local police station that excludes outsiders (how difficult is it?), And he went around to investigate the case, and the locations changed crazily. I think generally speaking, crazy people who commit suicide are senior detectives who provide clues, right? If you let the protagonist die once, it feels like the traffic attracted by the tag will run away after seeing this. Furthermore, the protagonist has no difficulty in being accepted by the police station, and there is no visible operation. These fifteen chapters feel like there is too much redundant information and a lack of sensory stimulation. "City of Silence" has a sense of imagery that can divert attention, but novels cannot, unless the fundamentals are changed.

To mediocre people, we are mysterious and unpredictable. Fallen. Decay. It's chilling. You cannot understand where we came from or why we are what we are... Until you realize that we have not fallen, but have ascended. "

The writing is not very good. If it doesn't read very smoothly, and there are some unnecessary things, don't write them down.

Apart from Qidian official and the author, I am the first reader to post. I have become a veteran and follow the author. I am not related to each other. 2026/7/29 This book potential number 207

I borrowed it from downstairs and asked for support for my new book "Fist and Dharma". Model worker, I will update it diligently.

It's interesting, be sure to keep writing! It's interesting that the three initial identities all appeared in the same event. Will they come back with the other two identities later? The cursed vision reminds me of a stand-alone game called Adam Wolfe that I played a long time ago. That was my inspiration for the BE story. The ending was really shocking at that time hhh However, some parts of the content are a bit heavy on the online game feel, and the psychological description is not enough. The reading is a bit far-fetched, just like clicking options in a gal game hhh

The beginning of this novel is exactly the same as the game The Sinking City

Wait for a while, buddy... I took a look at it after I was busy on Friday, and found out that there was one less update the next day after the reward was given? 🤔🤔🤔 It's okay if there are no more updates. Even if the writer mentioned it, it's fine. Why are there less updates? You don't bully social animals who are so tired that they can't move every day, right?