Gou Achieved Immortality on His Journey to the West

I just saw Chapter 117 and I'm really upset. I really don't understand. We all know that Sun Wukong was tricked. You traveled through time and were with Sun Wukong for so many years and did so many things, but Sun Wukong still followed the old path. So what is the role of your time travel? Since nothing can be changed, according to the theory you wrote, isn't it true that your heart is dusty? It is possible to not make any progress in your cultivation and to become possessed by evil spirits. Author: What was your purpose in writing this book? Is it to change the tragedy of Sun Wukong, to accompany Sun Wukong on his journey to the west, or to seek his own opportunities and immortality? Regardless of whether it is reasonable or not that you can find the harmony between Fang Cun Shan and Fang Cun Shan, I just feel that your writing is off track, as if you have changed the outline, which makes it look awkward. Seeing now, I feel that you have been doing useless work before, so why do you need to do so much? If you don't intervene in Sun Wukong's cause and effect, can't you just be a bystander? This is fan fiction, not originality. Readers are relatively more tolerant of originality. But fan fiction either pursues fun, or uses your imagination to write new ideas. If you do this, you may feel good about yourself and feel good about yourself, but how many readers are willing to pay for it? Everyone subscribes with real money. As an online article, this way of writing is destined to be lost in the public and unable to stand out.

People who practice Taoism are written like thieves. They steal everything they do and have a petty attitude. Either you take the opportunity generously, or you don't take it. It's just a sneaky way of taking things that others don't like, and it's like being a thief with a guilty conscience.

The fairy spirit is lingering, and the protagonist's behavior is also very comfortable. Apart from being too young and not enough to watch, there are no other problems.

It's just a stream of mortals cultivating immortals under the guise of Journey to the West. It doesn't have the flavor of classical cultivation at all. Those who like the routine of mortals can watch it.

It's quite silly. I started licking it when I arrived at Huaguo Mountain. The plot becomes funnier as it goes on, and the system of cultivating immortals is also a mess. Now and then, has the author figured out what exactly he wants to write about? No matter how the Journey to the West changes, this is a transaction between the three supreme forces, each getting what it needs. The monkey is a chess piece and this will not change. So what if there is an extra time traveler. There is a fool who can be killed by the powerful. What the hell, just keep going to the end. The weak chicken and the supreme power compete with each other, thinking that they can stir up trouble with a little modern sophistry and prophecy. Or there is something beyond these rules.

After it was put on the shelves, it turned out to be a flood. It was really useless and abandoned.

I originally thought it was a traditional journey to the west, but after it was put on the shelves, I found out that it was still a prehistoric game. It was covered in the skin of traditional immortality, but in fact it was still the same as ordinary people cultivating immortals.

The previous story of Zang Tian Gou Dao Liu was well written, but the later part had to be forced into the monkey storyline, which was both self-indulgent and embarrassing...

After seeing the first few pictures, I didn't feel comfortable with it. Fang Cunshan became a sect for mortals to cultivate immortality. They said it was a traditional cultivation of immortality, but in the end, they opened a level of cultivation for themselves.

What is written next has no logic at all. Do you think the reader is mentally retarded?

In the back, the brothers were given equal status (the protagonist is still a senior brother), so why don't you just keep going like this? But after returning from seeking truth, I thought that the protagonist wanted to hide and continue to grow while stirring up the storm secretly, but it turned out that the protagonist directly transformed into a little fanboy and worshiped Sun Wukong's dock and became the king (the protagonist insisted), and gave advice to Sun Wukong. Preventing him from falling out with the Heavenly Court is equivalent to directly standing in the center of the whirlpool. It is really a fraud in the introduction. The main plot of this book is to save Sun Wukong and defeat the conspiracy of the gods and Buddhas, and to live forever. I understand that in the fanfic of Journey to the West, Sun Wukong will definitely have to go west in the end, but it is the fact that he has to go west anyway that makes the protagonist's struggle and efforts look so clownish🤡

The introduction is still the one that guides poison, and the recommendation is still to hide poison

After reading Chapter 88, I can't stand it any longer. Is it because Gou Youdu is getting involved or because the nanny Wen Huali is? Journey to the West is a classical fairy tale, and the style of a person with great supernatural powers is unclear. Journey to the West is Lao Jun opening the sky.

As written here, Sun Wukong is no longer Sun Wukong. You have dug too many holes. You left the Novice Village before you even finished filling it in.

Nonsense, I gave up when I saw the Dragon Girl compete five times on Huaguo Mountain and lose and go to the Dragon Palace for a month. I knew that the Dragon King had a restriction and still agreed to compete. What else could I do?

It became more and more boring later on. Originally, the author wanted to sew a hidden thread into Journey to the West, and it was this hidden thread that the author wanted to write. The discussion in the novel is actually quite interesting, but originally it was enough to teach Sun Wukong, but later on he started teaching Tang Monk instead. What about Wukong? Only giving him military support and not helping him realize the truth, it is clear that Sun Wukong's disaster may only have a beginning and an end. Originally, without the protagonist, this path of learning can be passed, but with the protagonist, it is more difficult. The difficulty increases with the intervention of the protagonist, and becomes smaller with the protagonist's actions. The four masters and apprentices have become the fuel for the protagonist's enlightenment. Where is the calamity energy in Wukong? Didn't you mean to help him resolve it? Didn't you mention it later? What about the calamity imposed by the heavenly beings on the human world? On the contrary, you forgot? If you write bad things about the people in heaven, don't forcefully clean them up later. Forget it, I don't have many subscriptions, and it will be annoying if I say more.

I can't stand the first chapter. Your quest for immortality is too simple. According to the method you wrote, there are four major continents. Any Tengu can be worshiped by Patriarch Bodhi as his teacher. The foreshadowing is too simple.

Instead of writing about the process of seeking immortality, the first chapter has already written about the results of seeking immortality. Furthermore, Patriarch Bodhi can only be found by you, an ordinary mortal. Quite speechless

The writing is so messed up and the plot is getting increasingly ugly.

Let's just say that the protagonist's Tao skills are comparable to those of Sun Wukong. The article says that he is on par with Sun Wukong's Tao skills. That's ridiculous. Sun Wukong is not considered an innate saint, at least he is at the top of the innate gods and demons. The protagonist is not even an innate creature. He is just a heel. The gap is so big. The method he practiced before is not as good as Sun Wukong. Sun Wukong is still the son of calamity luck, and all kinds of opportunities are not bad. The protagonist can rely on the golden finger, but the protagonist must first transform himself into an innate being before he can cultivate the Taoism. Well, let's give some innate spiritual objects, and they must be relatively top-notch ones to breed Tao seeds. Otherwise, just give some good resources, find a person with good qualifications to practice, and you can be on par with Sun Wukong. That's ridiculous. Innate flat peaches are born from ordinary peach trees. Can peaches be the same? What's more, congenital peaches are also divided into three thousand years, six thousand years, and nine thousand years. Ordinary peach trees can bear good fruits if they are planted in a good place and slowly cultivated and mutated. However, it is not possible to produce nine-thousand-year congenital peaches by just cultivating them casually.

I haven't finished the first chapter yet. It smells very strong of AI, that kind of routine sentence structure, it's not something, it's not something, it's just something. The book was opened in January 2026, and now in August, it has 1.95 Million words in seven months. Some readers have also commented, and the logic does not make sense. This is how AI writes long articles.

The online game Gou attains immortality in Journey to the West

There won't be those camps in the Patriarch's Taoist temple. What the Patriarch teaches is the Tao, not how to cultivate immortality.

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