Big G, Coffee Machine and Goblin

This time I really ran away. The several revisions you made against the wealthy businessman showed me your sincerity, so I continued to read it after keeping it for a while. Then you get me a modern RV (even with some things removed) that is worse for sleeping in than a medieval house. I can't understand that a house with solar panels, a clean bed, and electricity is not as good as a house made of mud and tiles?

First day

Foreign Artificer "He comes from a country that we cannot understand, drives a horseless metal chariot, and his speech is full of weird words such as 'efficiency', 'logic' and 'data'. He is not a traditional spellcaster, but a master of artificers who regards everything as parts that can be disassembled and optimized." --- 1. Main attributes (analogy from a passerby's perspective) · Strength: 16 (+3). Analogy: Senior adventurer. He can easily control his bulky "alchemy device" (steering wheel, gear shift) and carry a heavy bag (supply box). · Agility: 12 (+1). Analogy: ordinary soldier. His movements are not elegant, but he is extremely skilled in operating the various mechanisms (buttons, pedals) on his complex device. ·Constitution: 16 (+3). Analogy: Tough wilderness survivor. He appears to be resistant to many ailments (acclimatization) that are frowned upon by the natives, and is able to pilot his device for long periods of time without showing signs of fatigue. · Intelligence: 18 (+4). Analogy: Learned Mage or Chief Engineer. This is the most awesome thing about him. He is proficient in mathematics, astrology, and materials science, and can turn this knowledge into terrifying practical effects (such as using chemicals to make fires, calculating ballistics, and repairing devices). ·Perception: 10 (+0). Analogy: A scholar who is focused but not astute. He relies too much on his "logic" and "instruments" (compass, telescope), and is too slow to detect hidden revelations from the gods, whispers of nature, or subtle emotions among people. · Charisma: 8 (-1). Analogy: A sociable technocrat. His speech is direct and blunt, lacking aristocratic rhetoric and honorifics, and often offends locals who pay attention to traditional etiquette. But his majesty based on absolute self-confidence can sometimes intimidate others. --- 2. Occupation determination: Artificer The locals will not understand the concept of "science student", they will use the closest template to apply to him: · He is not a mage: because he never recites incantations or prays to mysterious beings for power. · He is not a priest: he openly states that he only believes in "verifiable things" and has little respect for the gods. · He is an "Arcanist": a profession that works miracles through alchemy, engineering and a deep understanding of the laws of physics. His "spells" in the eyes of the locals are: · Lighting: He uses a metal rod called a "flashlight" that can emit a stable light that is countless times brighter than candlelight. · Restoration: He can use a bunch of strange tools to make his paralyzed "steel car" roar again. · Water Making: He has a magical "water purifier" that can make dirty river water clear and delicious. · Fire Technique: The "Molotov cocktail" he throws can instantly create violent and lasting flames. ·Human Immobilization Technique: He uses an alchemical weapon called "wolf spray" to make vicious robbers painfully incapacitated. · Spot lies: He always says "let the data speak" and can use rigorous logical reasoning to expose lies. --- 3. Background: Foreign Noble/Urban Hermit · Foreign Noble: His priceless "alchemy car" and a suit of strangely tailored but well-made clothes all show that he comes from an extremely wealthy and civilized country. Locals might call him the "Iron Duke" or the "Horseless Knight." · Urban Hermit: He knows nothing about many common senses (such as noble genealogy, religious festivals), but is proficient in another kind of "common sense" (such as first aid, physics). This is very much like a great scholar who lives in seclusion in the laboratory all year round and has no contact with the outside world. --- 4. Equipment and characteristics · Steel car: This is his most conspicuous symbol. A huge, solid metal structure that roars like thunder. It does not eat grass, but does drink a precious, pungent "alchemical oil". It can travel thousands of miles and is invulnerable. It is a moving fortress and a symbol of strength. · Multi-purpose tool bag: A backpack filled with wrenches, screwdrivers, pliers and other "magician's tools", which can exert magical powers of repair and creation in his hands. · Logical vision: He can always discover the "objective laws" and "optimal solutions" of things. To the natives, this is like a prophetic ability that can discern the weaknesses and essence of things. · Knowledge from another world: He knows a lot of knowledge that local scholars have never heard of, such as germ theory, basic chemistry and Newtonian mechanics. He can use this knowledge to cure diseases, make tools, or explain natural phenomena, which is almost miraculous in the eyes of others. --- Summary: Local point of view He is a: Strong but socially awkward, knowledgeable but lacking in faith, an artificer from an unknown country who drives a miraculous steel vehicle. He is both awe-inspiring because he wields incomprehensible power and alienating because his way of thinking and worldview are incompatible with the world. Nobles want to win over him, merchants want to trade with him, mages are curious about his "alchemy", and the temple may regard him as a dangerous heretic who needs to be "guided".

I feel that after Xiaodai dated his girlfriend, the quality of the novel plummeted, and it never felt the same again. At that time, I thought that 48 hours was the beginning of New God, but I didn't expect that it was already the peak.

It's a waste of subject matter, and the author may not know what's so exciting about it. There are obviously a lot of gold coins waiting for the author to get them, but he has to play some new tricks...

Mercedes-Benz G 300 Professional - the ultimate off-road tool This car is not built for ordinary consumers, it is a professional, tool-based vehicle created to meet the most demanding environments (such as military, rescue, adventure). It strips away all luxurious decorations and returns to the most original and pure functionality of the G-Class. Core advantages and features: 1. Unparalleled off-road performance and reliability ·Pure mechanical structure: Unlike the civilian G-class, which uses a large number of electronic systems, the G 300 Professional emphasizes mechanical reliability. It is usually equipped with purely mechanical full-time four-wheel drive with 100% differential lock (front, center and rear locks), which is the ultimate off-road configuration. · Portal axle: This is the soul design of the G-class. The drive shaft is higher than the center of the wheel, resulting in unparalleled ground clearance and can easily roll over huge obstacles. ·Solid chassis: The trapezoidal girder chassis has extremely high torsional rigidity and is strong enough to withstand extreme road conditions and heavy loads. · Super passability: With amazing approach angle, departure angle and longitudinal pass-through angle, it can conquer almost any terrain. 2. Extremely powerful power system · OM 642 diesel engine: G 300 Professional is usually equipped with a 3.0-Liter V6 turbocharged diesel engine. Known for its huge torque output, extreme reliability and excellent fuel economy, this engine is ideal for low-speed climbs and long-distance traverses. · Optimized for professional use: Power tuning focuses on high torque at low speeds rather than high-speed performance on the road, making it more calm in power response in wild environments. 3. Ultimate Durability and Tool Properties · ** Spartan Interior: ** The interior is completely function-oriented. Vinyl wrap, rubber flooring, manual windows, a minimal sound system (or even none), everything is built to be easy to clean, resistant to wear and tear, and protected from corrosion. · Non-redundant design: All unnecessary comfort configurations are removed, reducing failure points and ensuring absolute working reliability under harsh conditions. · Powerful load-carrying and towing capacity: With excellent payload and towing capacity, it can easily handle heavy-duty tasks such as transporting supplies and towing equipment. 4. Professional-grade modification potential · Standardized design: The vehicle provides a wealth of interfaces and a solid body structure, allowing users to carry out professional modifications according to specific tasks, such as installing communication equipment, weapon stations (military), rescue equipment, adventure camping kits, etc. ·Multiple body styles: Usually available in short-axis (2-door) and long-axis (4-door) versions to adapt to different mission requirements. Differences from the civilian version of the Mercedes-Benz G-Class: Features G 300 Professional (professional version) Civilian G-Class (such as G 500) Positioning Tool truck, military, special operations Luxury off-road SUV, status symbol Interior Simple, practical, vinyl/rubber Luxurious, leather, solid wood, high-tech Technological configuration The most basic, emphasizing mechanical reliability Comprehensive, large joint screen, advanced driving assistance, etc. Power Diesel engine focusing on torque and durability. Gasoline engine (or high-performance diesel engine) focusing on power and smoothness Price Relatively "cheap" (as a tool vehicle) Extremely expensive Cha's ai

At first I thought it was a road novel about another world. The protagonist is a modern heritage, driving a big G, drinking coffee, and walking around in another world. It would be relaxing and fun. In the end, more than 100,000 words were lost. I opened a big card and wanted to make a lot of money in another world. I also had to fight monsters and do magic in this other world. The key point is that the author was not good at writing this kind of otherworld adventure. I went to see the previous delicacies in the past two days, and the cosmic crisis that appeared out of nowhere at the end was already a mess, but the ending can be said to be cut off, so it still has a reason. Now this book of more than 100,000 words is almost at the end. But it can be seen that the author is a bit of a literary young man, and he doesn't necessarily care what the readers say.

When I saw the title of the book, my brain started to tremble. A car, even an off-road vehicle, cannot withstand long-term driving on dirt roads without special maintenance and replacement of parts, and a car will be paralyzed. In fact, it is very simple. If it rains in two pits, the car will never move. With magic technology, I can't think of how much it would take to turn a four-wheeled vehicle that relies on asphalt roads into a weapon and a vehicle for traveling around (gasoline refining requires a high environment, and the engine will express its displeasure at you if the gasoline required by the car is insufficient).

It's funny, buddy, do you listen to Bateman? He has three books in a row, one of which is a bad eunuch, so how about another one?

I feel like a lot of things are not carefully conceived. The subject matter is really good but some of the plots are really bad. It refers to selling alcohol, which is embarrassing, and the currency has also collapsed, and the most important thing is that the upper limit is dead. You have a car and you are very powerful in the early stage. What will you do in the later stage? So I need to study this book carefully.

Frankly speaking, I think this book is very well written and a very flavorful novel, but its commercial performance is not ideal. Maybe it just doesn't meet the market. It's true that bad money drives out good money.

The 123 monthly tickets for the new book are mine 🤓🤓

You don't even need the fantasy setting in the novel, just talk about reality. You go and watch those documentaries about small South American countries and Africa. They drive old trucks that may have followed the Soviet army into Berlin, and travel hundreds or thousands of kilometers to deliver goods on bad roads in the tropical rainforest that you can't imagine. There are also various African giants and super-modified cars. Watch them bring a pile of rusted scrap metal back to life and show the miracle of human engineering. It's really unworldly to think that the car is fragile.

In fact, I think the most interesting thing is the author's book "Working Prophet"

The plot of the Chamber of Commerce is a bit difficult to comment on. Because you stole other people's gold coins due to your own problems and caused trouble to others, it is natural for you to be regarded as a liar. Why are you still so arrogant and using your identity as an alchemist to bully others? It's a bit of a bully. When I say compensation, I also say I will compensate you but you have to wait a few months. Is this an apology attitude? I am that businessman and I won't agree to it. Even if you say something nice, or promise to make more compensation, we can discuss it?

The plot of the businessman is not good to watch. It feels like it is not the same thing as what was written before.

The biggest bug I see so far is that there are roads everywhere in the world that can be driven by off-road vehicles.

When I saw it on the shelves, I must have never read the author's book before. First of all, I feel that the plot is very light. The idea of ​​traveling with equipment has been around for a long time, but the author still focused all the excitement on this, using modern people's cognition and modern tools to impact the indigenous people of the other world. All the excitement revolves around this and nothing else. The plot itself has no exciting points, and the progress is still very slow. I originally thought that the follow-up should be based on an archaeological expedition to find people who disappeared after time travel to develop a world view and promote the development of the story. After all, there was already a foreshadowing of the protagonist, a motivational novel, and room for excellence. However, before it was released, it took a sudden turn.

Shouldn't Big G be paired with zombies ()

As the title states, this brother's comments drew me in, but the author's articles drove me away.

56~58 Let's continue rewriting. Why can a businessman rely on the protagonist? If he said it was gone, it would be gone? The author doesn't even know why he wrote this? It's better to just make the rose quota a competition and cut off the businessman's frame-up. The writing is very poor, and the book list I originally recommended for you is gone.

An author who worked hard to develop a eunuch was immediately wasted at least 1 and a half

You have to rely on Qidian's recommendation to know when a new book is released, so no notice is given, right?

I just finished the Qidian annual report, and I thought of you. What tracking order was issued, and then I came over to see that you had published a new book? ? Then it was discontinued for a month? What the hell

Day Six (Tomorrow is the competition day, I encourage readers who are crawling in the dark of the hotel 😚😚😚)

I haven't read any new books yet, but I've been keeping them in view of the speed of updates. Today I saw why I stopped updating for a month? The latest chapter made me laugh at the midpoint of the journey

I don't know how to look at the data, but 79 chapters of the new book have 10,000 book friends, and 100 posts in the book club 82 chapters of this book have 40,000 book friends, and I did the math myself and there are still 270 posts after excluding broken updates It's pretty, emm. . . I am considered an old fan, and I don't want to post it to shake the military morale. However, I really can't stand the new book. Even if you succeed in life if you have a good father, it is true. Don't you think it is very hard to write it and make people lose the desire to read it. And it's really bad for the character to put it on the shelf, I don't dare to subscribe. But this book is indeed, it's not easy to write, and I don't feel like it should be done in business. I could have written an event-driven science fiction apocalyptic novel like Yu Jin in the Deep Sea Anyway, come on, I always feel that as long as an author has it on the shelf, he can finish it, even if he only writes an outline of tens of thousands of words at the end. If you don't put it on the shelf, I will be sad and won't say anything, but you will be irresponsible if you cut it after it is put on the shelf.

Why don't you cum for me 😳

The author has opened a trumpet...

Xiaodai, when will the new book be released? Just wait and see!