The Only Immortal in the World of Cultivating Immortals

It is currently at chapter 20. The writing style is witty and good at making jokes. The only drawback is that the plot is still relatively weak. The symbiotic relationship between the protagonist and Huang Si, as well as the style of making jokes and making jokes, are indeed a highlight. However, most of the writing was spent on this aspect in the early stage, and the subsequent plot did not keep up. Instead, it turned to an existential crisis with less foreshadowing. As a result, the foreshadowing was not enough, and the sense of expectation was broken. The quality has declined, and there is no sense of novelty at the beginning. Normally, we should bury a crisis in the symbiotic relationship between the protagonist and Huang Si. There should be conflicts in the relationship, and then alternate with the survival crisis of the main line. While solving the survival crisis, we should promote the development of the relationship with Huang Si, and there should be constant conflicts between the two people. Solving the conflicts will be interesting, Chang Kao Minglong. Now Huang Si's presence has almost become a complaint machine, which means that if the scene is deleted, the plot will still stand.

The funny part is remarkable, and the shit and shit part is brilliant. The world view setting can see the shadow of many Internet novels and IPs other than Internet articles, but it blends in well. Looking at it now, I feel that the biggest problem is that the plot starts to get tough as soon as the main line and emotional line are reached Except for Huang Si, the other characters have different views on the protagonist. Trust comes a bit too quickly and too easily, and the protagonist's own growth lacks a complete curve and arc It can be said that the entire plot is like the author, God's will, dragging the protagonist to fly away. As a cool novel, the rationality can be quite weak, but now it seems that the author is still a little unsure of this aspect.

It is hard to imagine how the author created this "historic" poetic masterpiece in this country where cocaine and opioids are illegal. Maybe what I am reading is not a novel created by humans, but the whispers of ancient gods in the dark.

It's so beautiful. I saw it today and finished it in one sitting. Sofree!

After looking at the opening, it feels a bit like Puozhou. Shenluodongmian is roughly equivalent to Puozhou, Jiuqu is equivalent to each village, and Jiuliu feels like Puozhou cultivators. The opening is quite eye-catching, but the setting is a bit imitative. I hope what I write next will be my own.

So Tiandao will be a super cute little loli who runs around barefoot and knows everything but is still stupid. He will be woken up by ordinary people using the suona but because he is so cute, he will become incontinent.

😡If you sell newspapers and publish books in April, you also publish books in April. What does that mean? Stop Platinum, your ambition is not small! 🤐

Have you ever acted like a horse? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

But don't really post it Love your OS (Nero 2077)

Silly Fu os opens a new book and doesn't promote it in old books

I remember Liqun as a fragrant person, just try to watch it, meow

Rules: Name (reasonable) Desired Abilities

Can you unlock some new skills, such as controlling the stones in the opponent's body to run back and forth between the bladder and urinary tract?

A disguised merit system? ? ? What nonsense! ! ! Is this how Chuma is cultivated? ? ? If you don't have merit, you won't be able to level up! ! ! The Holy Virgin is right! ! !

A casual drawing of meow meow

I put a cute weasel here

The newspaper is sold to an all-female readership, He Shou plagiarizes, Little Squid stops updating, Lu Yue Nineteen has a slow pace, and none of the big guys who have opened new books in recent times are good 🙂 (Actually, all this is Zhou Li's conspiracy, just to make this book popular, he can break the body of Hinan in three books)

Question, when will Sister Huang become a cup 🙂

Cute pinch

I recommend distributing light novels. Your novel has a fantasy tone and I might not be able to understand it.

You might as well write about God Fighter and it's still interesting... At least it sounds cool.

Brother, why did you blow up a hole and still become the trump card every time It's novel to watch it for the first time, but it becomes boring after watching too much

Suddenly I felt something was wrong. If os wrote such an interesting article as a harem article, I would send him a razor blade.

You are right, but "Zhou Li" is a multi-world adventure-type agent independently developed by OS. The story takes place in a fantasy world called "The Starting Point", where the person selected by the author will be granted the identity of the "protagonist" and guide the protagonist's power. You will play a mysterious character named "King Lu Guan" and meet companions with different personalities and unique abilities during free reading. Watch them defeat powerful enemies together and find their lost relatives. At the same time, you will gradually discover the truth about "Zhou Li".

Os. When will you add the character cards of Tang and Wan II?

Is this the most playful novel in Qidian?

The so-called... Hanging kill... Is actually... A... Fragment... Missile... But... People in this... World... Don't... Know... Missiles...(1 Stick of incense, please remember to delete it for me in brackets)

I recently flipped through the book list and found various novels. Some of the plots that could completely foreshadow the plot ended in half a chapter. Then the protagonist clenched his palms with his nails and bleeds to express the protagonist's cruel mood. I am so happy to see a pure author again!

The protagonist's hearing is amazing, the police listen to the gangsters, and they avoid traps and monsters along the way. In the end, someone arrived before the protagonist. I won't go into details. The problem is that when you arrive and set up a trap, you must squat not far away. Can you make no movement at all while squatting? Can't the protagonist hear it? Okay, even if he squats far away, they can't come at the moment the trap is opened. Even if they can come, will it take time for the protagonist to hear it? Even if you let your guard down, the noise coming from walking or running is not small. This chapter is purely for the purpose of creating plot, and there is no logic at all.

Even the lowest wild gods can't compare to Chumaxian's writing, which is so powerful.