Universe Infinite Canteen

I have read another book by Xiao Daizhao. In the postscript, he said that his grades have been unable to improve in the past few years and he feels that his writing ability is stuck. But his writing style is really to my liking. The chaotic main line, detailed details, unconstrained imagination, just the right laughs, and the ability to stand in a chaotic universe. Zhouzhong focuses on himself and has some fun, and I just feel that he is getting more and more comfortable with it. In today's Internet environment where individualism is becoming more and more prevalent, I need this kind of text instead of the flow of upgrades and revenge. I am always looking forward to the content of the next chapter, because I don't know what will happen at the next point in time. The world has not changed, the chaos is still the same, the classes are still the same, the order is still the same, but okay, the words are still the same. It won't get better tomorrow, but it won't get worse either. I look forward to your next book.

(The author's evaluation contains some subjective opinions, which are for reference only. Please forgive me) Xiao Daizhao, a signed author from Qidian. From previous works, it is estimated that the age of economics graduate is 24 to 34 years old (actually he is 34 years and 2 months old as a graduate student in the Department of Economics). His representative works: "My Day Has 48 Hours", "Working Prophet", etc. Specializing in infinite flow/two-realm travel novels. The writing is good, and he is good at building multiple types of worlds, and uses real-life plots to control the rhythm of the plot, so that the plots can be interlocked and promote each other, and the cycle is good and attractive (except that the pacing in the later period may be affected, resulting in too fast). And there are also thoughts revealed in his works. He once searched for a balance between the commercialization of his works and the expression of personal thoughts. Now he may have the answer - Of course, he has not forgotten his sense of humor. I would say: Xunxun Shanyou Comprehensive evaluation Writing LV1~2 Plot construction ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ : The characters' IQs are online, in line with the personality, the plot unfolds reasonably, and is good at O. Henry-style reversals, and has made certain achievements in wits. Written structure ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ : It is good at promoting the development of the story with interlocking and dense plots, and the daily-oriented delicate stories are also very exquisite. In the infinite flow/two-realm crossing type novels that it is good at, it also has a unique skill of using realistic plots to control the rhythm of the writing and the direction of the plot. Except for the generally faster pace near the end, there are no obvious shortcomings. Imagination ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ : There are unique plots and interesting world views, such as My Day Has 48 Hours, Working Prophet, and unlimited food articles are all refreshing Writing Style  Peak ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Everyday⭐️⭐️⭐️ : Writing can also be used to pile up rhetoric to reach higher levels, but not using these techniques in daily life is not a shortcoming. Reasonably choosing changes in writing style is actually a very difficult thing. I once had 48 hours in a day, and the changes in writing style in this work fit the background of each copy, which I have to say is amazing. In addition, with his wit and humor, I thought it would be good to write a funny article. Character Structure⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️~⭐️⭐️⭐️ : Have created many impressive characters, such as the heroine in almost every dungeon of 48, Miss Rabbit, who works as a prophet. It can make some characters very three-dimensional, even from the smallest details and language habits, it can be close to the character and express the character's heart and personality. But many characters have little difference. For example, the protagonist of each book is as rich and smooth as possible, but he still looks like the same person. Of course, the protagonist is the author's self-expression, which is unavoidable. The thinking styles of witty characters are also relatively similar. To sum up, when faced with the creation of multiple characters of the same type, many times there is no uniqueness that can distinguish them at a glance. Conclusion: Xiao Dai Zhao is a treasure that I discovered recently. I saw it at that time in my day, but I thought it was a cool article and I didn't read it. I had read The Working Prophet when it was still being serialized, but it had always been on my bookshelf without reading it. It wasn't until Cosmos Infinite Cafeteria was released that I started reading it and it was really interesting. Then I watched The Working Prophet and I was astonished. Generally speaking, the author is good at a variety of styles, has no obvious shortcomings, and his writing style is humorous and interesting, covering a wide range of fantasy and Western fantasy, farming, and food. He also has a rich reserve of knowledge. When writing realistic works, he will use very rigorous data, and when writing fantasy works, he will not hesitate to use his fantastic imagination. While pursuing commercialization to support his family, he still invested his thoughts and self-expression (and sense of humor) in his works - although not much, and often wrote typos and was too lazy to correct them (). Overall, he is an excellent writer who cannot be asked for. I look forward to his future performance. The above - My one-sentence evaluation - I feel that I owe the working prophet an alliance. If I still remember it when I have money in the future. Just add () if you have to {"TopicId":"804728532092780544","TopicName":"Book Famine Terminator"}{"TopicId":"1007358490585268224","TopicName":"Me and the Starting Point"}

This novel should be labeled as a romance, as there are emotional entanglements everywhere. I originally came to see the food, but I was filled with romance. By the way, this novel seems to be classified as science fiction? Also, the bad relationship between the protagonist and his ex-girlfriend is really... I feel that the author's transformation into romance must be a gold medal

Advantages: 1. The separation is better handled. Ma Lu's main purpose of traveling through the world is to collect ingredients. After exploring, he will switch to other worlds, which is very utilitarian. Friendships between teammates are difficult to deal with. If they are too deep, it will be difficult to break up. If they are too shallow, they will appear to be intellectually deceitful and the plot will be difficult to advance. If it is a male teammate, it is difficult to write about the relationship between gentlemen as gentle as water or as a conflict between gentlemen, so the author uses women as teammates, and I feel that the author handles it quite skillfully. If you don't want to be a boyfriend and girlfriend, you can also just "have a good impression", focus on being flexible, and there won't be too much poison. 2. The world view and the game are well integrated, and the combat effectiveness is fairly balanced. But it's a bit strange that the protagonist has never exploded equipment. As a game master, has he never thought about gambling his life? It's impossible not to lose once, right? Only by losing once can the understanding be sublimated. Of course, this kind of plot can easily become poisonous. For example, Mickey Mouse's lack of preparation was a good failure. Ma Lu can then strengthen the study and preparation of theme meals. Lao Wang cannot only rely on Lao Wang to cook. Disadvantages: 1. The supporting characters in Small World are a bit lacking. The cunning of Guli in the desert world; the ambition of Levi in ​​the plant world, and the madness of Yongyi. A bit deliberately placing the main conflict on "man-made disasters", and having a final big boss is a bit redundant; don't you think there are not many people who can really influence the world, and most people are actually adapting to "natural disasters". 2. There are too many female characters in the main world, which provide little help to the protagonist's character. The club school girl and her rich roommate, the inexplicable younger sister, and the nerdy landlady. Tsundere first girlfriend. ①The club school girl. Her tool-like attributes were too strong, so she was used to promote her in the school in the early stage. Later, the high-priced food directly discouraged most of the students, and she seemed to have turned against others. Malu can continue to provide one- or two-star snacks to give back to the school, or he can also take the opportunity to provide some benefits to the original club. Even the protagonist himself can learn cooking skills, otherwise he would not know which parts can be eaten and which parts cannot be eaten. ②The landlady of the house. As a senior game geek, she can definitely provide more suggestions for Sekiling games, and the linkage with the cake is simply price-dropping. The Sekirei game can be completely treated as a small world. ③Tsundere girlfriend. It doesn't help the male protagonist's view of love at all. Malu can not only experience the golden vip of the desert, but also do nothing against the wild Cerberus. Some people accept whoever comes, and some people let nature take its course, but Malu's repeated edge testing feels very frivolous, and his outlook on love is flexible? And I still miss my ex-girlfriend, so I suggest that I shoot my ex-girlfriend to death. Learn to cook with peace of mind. Suggestions: I always feel that Malu has a [sense of idleness and undisciplinedness], which is consistent with the previous homeless persona, but it will lose the motivation to become stronger/collect ingredients. The protagonist's growth from experience is also an important part of the novel. Many novels begin with the story of breaking off an engagement, being a loser, getting a son-in-law, or even directly issuing tasks from the system. This actually creates the necessity for the protagonist to become stronger. It feels like the protagonist can take two paths later: ① Low participation: Just like Wanshiwu, everything is limited to the canteen, and the canteen is just a hub for communication among diners. Malu is aloof. ②High participation: Malu not only collects ingredients, but also collects stories. He listens to Bochi's story, makes a cake on her birthday, and puts the wishing stone in the cake; he even listens to the club stories of his schoolmates... Ma Lu creates ingredients themes based on the stories. For example, the desert world is about loneliness and strength; the plant world is about madness and rebellion. And set it as a theme package, so if someone chooses a package, you can share it with them. Even if you experience the small world in the future and have similar but deeper insights, you can also update the menu (higher price package)

The author's writing style and imaginative ideas will make me want to buy and read. I wear headphones and listen to stories thousands of light years away, which makes my commute to and from work filled with different colors. But online articles are not like a one-time purchase of physical books. Readers are consumers who will repurchase or give up based on the feedback from reading. Different copies must have their own preferences for radish and green vegetables, and they will absorb some new fans and lose some of them. (Tell me about myself, my favorite part of this book is the plot of the earth and the one where I am the principal. After all, it is a God who always pretends to be cool and slaps in the face, and then there is the stage of beating monsters in the prison. Hahahahahaha. What I dislike the most is the witch dungeon and the martial arts dungeon. They feel smelly and long. Just skip it. The other ones are just ordinary... No memory points. The most impressive thing about 48 hours is the copy of Spaceflight. I started reading the novel in high school and now I have read it for the second time.) To sum up: there is no breakthrough in subscription. It is only a matter of imagination that succeeds and fails. A copy is a different idea, a different style of story, and the different explanations cannot be consistent, and there is no way to keep fans glued from beginning to end. Why is it that even if a popular novel is dismantled into individual copies, it still sticks to it? Because the copies are of the same quality, and homogeneity means consistency, fans who like this genre will always stick with it, because it will continue to stimulate readers' "cool points". For example, aren't most of the novels on the current monthly ticket list made up of individual copies?

This book is the most interesting book I have read recently This relaxed and cheerful style is rare in online articles If you compare the novel setting to an appetizer, the mature writing style to a meal, the unconstrained fantasy to a dessert, and the little humor revealed from time to time It's better than an after-dinner drink to relieve fatigue There is no doubt that I enjoyed this meal very much. I forgot the last time I wanted to convey my respect to the chef (you have to wait until after the meeting with the chef)ww In many ways, it is not long to write such a long article. It is not easy for me to write, but on the other hand, it is very simple to review a book. Readers take a small risk (exchanging trolls) but hold a high position of authority - the author's carefully created works will affect the people who come here because of the readers' comments As a reader, I feel I have to support the books I like (because my last five dollars have been spent on reading this book, so I can only write a book review) Because the world is very harsh on newcomers (are those in the comment section just trolls? If you support the book, you support the book and unsubscribe) New creations New works, new masters (bold) need friends (come and feed more people) What a wonderful meal today, thank you for the treat ps: The author's book has great potential, and I feel that your book can be popular. I can do any games (I have played divers, but I think your setting is better than him) or comics. Of course, this is just a beautiful wish, but what is the difference between a person who has no dreams and a salted fish, right (click, click, click)

Let's update ten chapters first

1. Related to the past world form: Regardless of whether it is calculated based on the dungeon or the world, the equipment for hunting in the desert should contain a lot of things to escape the heat and cool down. Loss of physical strength and water under high temperatures is no joke. Motorcycles are fine as a means of transportation for individual soldiers, but should jeeps or freezer trucks be the main force when traveling as a team? When driving, one driver can rest, and the other people can rest, and the carrying capacity of the car is completely incomparable with that of a motorcycle. For high-intensity outdoor activities lasting more than 4 hours, there is still a clarification on physical strength-related recommendations. At the same time, meat will lose water quickly due to high-intensity sunlight. Would it be more appropriate to have a freezer truck? 2. Ability-related. According to the fact that young lizards can accumulate strength through card bugs, this mechanism should not have a strict bug correction mechanism, and it will also have a certain degree of team adaptability. There should be at least three categories in ability planning: self-strengthening, team strengthening, and special ability buffs. The horse should need to summarize and summarize this aspect. And in the second entry, after the return point can be determined, you can consider bringing a group of creatures to wait before entering the next time. First, quickly save some buffs, then plan the combat power, and then plan the hunting route. If the buffs are particularly good, go to the city to supply supplies after defeating the boss to push the world line. The 12-hour dungeon time full hunt feels a bit too high-intensity combat. 3. In the real world, opening a store is too heavy and setting up a stall is too light. You can consider setting up a store-in-store format. Cooperate with supermarkets or beverage stores. Anyway, what we do now basically does not carry drinks, so it can be considered complementary. Ham, the book is very good, good luck to the author~~

The first few chapters made me think the book was interesting. Now the question is whether the author can use this setting to write a book that is lasting and interesting.

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This is a male channel. If you don't want to watch a harem, go to a female channel. Don't dominate the author.

Complaints, fresh food from another world are used for cooking and sold directly... So, are you not afraid of eating civet cats and causing SARS again? The only guarantee is the Laowang robot with a faulty memory and an unknown origin. The cross-dimensional fresh food processing, just the protagonist's kitchen environment, not to mention the finished cooked food, just the kitchen waste. If you are not careful, the people of the earth may usher in the end of the Resident Evil crisis. For example, how about testing the radiation of the two-headed jackal in the apocalyptic world at the beginning? Wild snakes in other worlds are full of parasites. They need blood and parasites to flow out of the sewer. Parasites from invasive species in otherworldly worlds. Or should the earth welcome the last survivor? Even if there are no viral parasites, don't forget that viruses are just proteins that are not even viruses. How about these proteins from otherworldly genes, like a madhouse that flies across the earth, or direct genetic contamination, like Cronenberg, with the protagonist and Lao Wang playing Grandpa Rick and Morty? This can all be used to call the police for the crime of endangering public safety. Finally, let me complain again. Even if there is no problem with safety, wild game is not delicious if you handle it casually - jackal patties. Mammals that have not been castrated and bred are probably not as sexy as eating pork marinated in children's urine, such as wild boar, such as hare. This kind usually requires heavy ingredients to remove the fishy smell, and what you eat is the flavor of the seasoning. If the barbecue cakes are delicious, it means that the seasoning is fragrant, and it will only taste better if it is made directly from pork.

Come on, this is really inappropriate, torturing yourself and others. It tortures the readers when written. I have been in this situation twice. What about studying abroad with a bachelor's degree in English and French, and a very good-looking figure? But as soon as he returned to China and entered the society, he was pushed to the ground and beaten until he became unconscious. He couldn't change his mentality for several years. Women who think they are independent in the new era are actually quite good at it. I also like to make up my mind and plunge myself into the story of a tragic heroine. If I really want to get back together, I will try again. No, you don't really love me. We can't mess with each other in the future. We have been flirting with each other for several years. When you are in love, you have to show your face and increase your presence. It's been 4 fucking years since we broke up, and we're still thinking about getting back together. I'll get back together with you, you big-headed ghost. Live in your own world. Such girls are generally very interesting and know how to live a happy life. Interesting is interesting, but interesting has no other uses. Listen to my brother's words, don't let your ex's literature go, it's boring to read.

The other world part is a pure infant story with the intention of exporting the three views, but the result is the three views of the defense of wanting to be alone (no problem) but denying the meaning of serving the world (very problematic) In the real life part, writing about food is basically equivalent to purely pretending to make up the numbers without writing, and the rhythm is pulpy and the logic is stiff. The emotional part is a pure licking in the disguise of a scumbag, who still misses the author's ex-girlfriend, and moans like a castrated male cat missing his balls. In total, I have read half of the updated part Summary to rely on the defense

I showed it to the editor and bought some materials so that I could finish reading them and revise the text. I also saved some of the manuscripts for publication. I guess the book will be released in mid-July, so I'll try to do it as quickly as possible.

To be honest, it is better to write less about the plot of selling vegetables in reality. This thing feels useless and the word count is low. Besides, you said that if you eat the meat in a certain store that is unusually delicious and makes you feel very addicted, everyone will find out after communicating that the meat is not beef, chicken, mutton, let alone some rare meat. That will definitely feel scary. Is this mixed with opium? Or what kind of human meat did you use? You went to the laboratory for testing and found that although it was not human flesh, it was not known meat. The relevant departments came to check the source of your meat. How do you explain it? To be honest, there is really no need to wash out the cooking plot in reality. You are not a very good cook, and you can still write a good number of words. Are college students today so idle? In the evening, instead of discussing games, we discuss whether the meatloaf is delicious, how delicious it is, and what to sell tomorrow.

After reading "My Day Has 48 Hours", I found that I particularly liked Xiao Daizhao's writing style. I thought the book was very good, but there were a lot of things that were difficult to understand, such as the female sniper in the snow. Unknowingly, I fell into the trap of "Working Prophet" again, which is really a clear stream of Internet articles. There is no ridiculous storyline, no complicated emotional lines, and no dark protagonist with deep anger. The book review circle is also a peaceful and relaxed discussion, discussing favorite characters and exploring the development of the story. There is no abuse or criticism. It's really warm, I like it very much. Especially like it. Especially the ending of "The Prophet" is really exciting. I'm still not finished, I really want to watch some more extra stories about Lord Rabbit and Merlin, even one chapter. 😭😭😭😭 I really want to take the train from Crab Point to Greenfield and take a look at that wonderful world.

One thing to say, I personally feel that Daidai has been going downhill after 48 hours. In 48 hours, there is the Black Sails chapter with a complete story line and a lot of highlight characters, the Lego chapter with the essence of comedy, the bionic man chapter that surprised me the most, etc. I always feel that the story of the prophet and the cafeteria is not that interesting. Maybe it is really stuck in a bottleneck. I can only hope that the next one can bring me some surprises.

48 Die-hard fan, don't really like elixirs and late-stage prophets. It looks like this book is going to return to unlimited streaming? The introduction looks a bit like Cosmic Dave, so I'm looking forward to it.

Xiaodai's books always have a unique beauty. They are exciting in the early stage, vivid in the middle stage, and lack of brain stem in the later stage.

I don't understand why there are so many scenes with the real-life ex-girlfriend. There are so many fates that the protagonist can influence. Is it necessary to describe the causes and consequences of the ex-girlfriend separately and repeatedly in detail? ? OK, the transformation of a person who is more self-interested because of his native family's career is very good, but is it necessary to add it to this novel? If you want to read this bloody story, there are a lot of love stories for me to read, do you understand? There are obviously so many things to do and so many copies to write, so it's a waste of space on this inexplicable character. The protagonist doesn't have as much psychological description as her.

Is the happy enemy in the author's mind different from what the readers think? One thing to say is that this kind of behavior of kicking someone because of what the mother said is actually a sign of immaturity. Anyway, this kind of behavior has really hurt the male protagonist. No matter how to repair it, I feel awkward. I don't think her eyes are cute if she has red eyes, right? If you leave it to Sun, then Chun Chun will give her two slaps first and then see if she loses her temper.

Isn't this a mama's girl? Moreover, she has unilaterally kicked the hero's ex. Will she not be an enemy for the rest of her life? If this leads to a reconciliation (no doubt, it will be inevitable depending on the plot direction), it is expected to attract a lot of negative comments. Of course, I am not here to give pointers in order to deviate from the author's writing ideas. I am simply posting to express my personal thoughts.

Written by an old virgin who has never been in love. . .

The biggest problem with writing online novels now is that they write about women and beauties, instead of focusing on character and character characteristics. With that shitty ability, can you write a female character well? There are also descriptions of appearance and clothing... In the era of short videos, what beautiful women haven't seen them? Isn't the beauty who watched the video more beautiful and more intuitive than what you wrote? Of course, I was not targeting this book. I just clicked in to take a look. Then I saw a label (surrounded by beautiful women), and I knew what the content of this book was. Everyone, instead of yying here, why not go and watch the short video clips. Those who are more capable can also find the opposite sex in real society. I come to read novels to gain a higher level of spiritual enjoyment.

After finishing Spreading Flowers, do you have any ideas about what you plan to write in the next film? I want to read an original unlimited stream like "Forty-Eight", but I can't find any books of this type recently.

First, no one likes to read it Second, now all book friends know that you have never forgotten it.

I started watching 48 Hours. The author's advantage is that the story is very well told and fascinating. But the authors of several recent books are desperately trying to instill in us their own philosophical thinking. The key point is that the author's level in this aspect is very low, and sometimes thinking is really difficult. For example, this repeatedly published article on moldy mooncakes directly denies the progress of human society and believes that it has been the same for thousands of years. No one should imagine that society can be improved. But at least we are no longer the slaves we were thousands of years ago, and it has only been a few years since people have enough to eat. As for the ex-girlfriend who is mentioned the most, it's actually okay, it's just the author's attitude towards life, as long as you don't get stuck in your own philosophical thinking🙏

I just want to say. . . The existence of an ex-girlfriend. . . Since you can't write it well, just write it in a form. . . Where does Turtle Recruitment Dianping. Com come from with its sense of superiority? . . I remember when my friend's sister joined Dianping. Com. . . When we meet, we will give everyone their discount cards. . . I think this is the advantage of joining similar websites. . .

It was so well written that I finished reading it in one night and didn't have to read it anymore! Kulusi