Working Prophet

I'm a little disappointed, I feel like I dug too many holes and I can't grasp it in the later stage. The principle of the awakening potion, the follow-up of Birdman Continent, the reasons for Birdman Continent's invasion, the follow-up of his employees and customers, the abilities of the five directors, etc. Were not explained well. If these are not foreshadowing, then I can only say that there are too many irrelevant settings. The story has two lines: the main world and the other world. The two lines are not well integrated. Most of the time, the main world unilaterally exports culture and technology to the other world. I originally thought that Carp would discover the use of faith by more advanced civilizations in another world through the exploration of the Life Church or the Birdman Continent, so as to save the main world and complete the integration of the two lines. Unfortunately, it didn't happen, and the two lines came to their respective ends. Finally, I would like to congratulate Xiaodai on finishing Spreading Flowers. I hope Xiaodai's next work will perform better.

I just finished working overtime and read the second and third chapters on the way back to the dormitory, so I wrote this paragraph. Seeing the carp riding a donkey looking for a horse, I feel like I am losing myself in my work day after day. My attitude towards work and colleagues seems to be my day and night. Before I took out my mobile phone to read a novel, I was suffering from work - I didn't have much money, and I often worked overtime until early in the morning or even all night, with one day off every week and occasionally no days off. The content of the work is endless form screening and paperwork, which does not improve one's own abilities. If Zhang Heng is the college life that everyone expects, and Lu Jing is the newborn calf who is fearless when he first enters the workplace and even thinks he can do anything, will Carp be the one of us who, although the edges have been smoothed by work, can find new meaning in the unchanged daily life? He is transcendent and prophetic, but he is still just working. Working is for a better life, so what should his life be like? Zhang Heng who persevered during the 48 hours, Lu Jing who stalked the scenery and chased the wind in the elixir , and walked in the mountains. Zhang Xiaotian who didn't expect the right idiom but rescued me from the dilemma of lovelorn, I can't imagine what kind of comfort the working prophet will bring to me like a social animal. And this is why I like Xiao Daizhao's works Life is reflected in the joy of reading, and the escape in fantasy is to fight back against reality.

Actually, I was in a daze when I was writing this long review. I thought about it for a long time and couldn't think of a title. I thought about "About Life and Death Fatigue" and then thought about it and decided that it makes no sense to write it like this. You don't need to come here to discuss life and death fatigue, so I wish Xiaodai's new book a hit. I haven't graduated yet, so I have a sense of fear towards the numbness in this society. Many beautiful souls eventually turned into "kind" and "quiet". Just like Xiaodai wrote, they turned into bloody screws, placed in a position where no one cares. During the second chapter, I suddenly felt very emotional, as if I had written about myself. In the afternoon after the college entrance examination, I had the urge to cry but couldn't. I didn't know why I was crying, but I was already past that age when I cried unreasonably. It turns out that this is the price of growing up. I really wish I had a Zhang Heng sword. I hope to become famous at a young age like Zhang Heng. I hope to be as calm and calm as him. I hope to cut off the water with a sword like him, unparalleled in the world. But it seems that life is a bit biased towards Li Yu now, lost in the steel jungle, indifferent and numb. When looking at the phone, he doesn't even know if the person smiling at the screen is him. However, reality is not so hopeless. Since there are no 48 hours in a day, then live for 24 hours. It doesn't matter if it's a little bitter. There's something wonderful about finding joy in suffering. It doesn't matter if it hurts a little. The candy after the injection is the sweetest taste. We are no longer young, and we no longer have the right to cry and ask for comfort from our parents, but fortunately we still have a little original intention. When I couldn't buy pictures of my childhood, I would look for them on a wicker chair in the afternoon. If my childhood friends were not around, I would go find some buddies to have a meal at a restaurant. When I couldn't find the itchy sunshine in the afternoon when I was a child, I went to be the light for others. Hehe, I suddenly felt that my uncle had a very good saying, what you love is your life. I rambled a lot, and it seems I posted some useless things. But as I typed and recalled, it seemed like I had a long dream. In my dream, I went back to elementary school, playing childish games with my friends. The sun was very warm, and the light on my body during class made me feel numb and itchy. It was very comfortable... I wish Xiaodai's new book is very popular, and everyone has good luck in martial arts!

I've watched most of it, and I don't know what's wrong with it so many people are criticizing it. Let me first talk about my feelings after watching the part. First of all, I am quite disappointed. Like many readers, I had high expectations at the beginning, thinking that it was going to be a big show, but this is the result. . To be honest, if the beginning wasn't like this, I would have thought this was a relatively average work, but with this beginning, there's just so much to complain about! In terms of details, although there is still a plot, it is relatively scattered overall. In fact, there are many points that can be complained about, but these are not the point! Let's try to pick out the key points. What drives the development of the full text is contradiction, and your contradictions are really hard to explain in one sentence. 1. First of all, the contradiction of the protagonist himself as a modern worker is rooted in the attributes of the character. A large number of chapters at the beginning are devoted to describing this, and a lot of effort is spent. Then guess what? Hey! Completely solved once the beginning is over! There will no longer be this contradiction. From now on, "part-time work" will only bring comfort and happiness! 2. Then let's transfer the contradiction to other people and the world. Let's talk about the Middle Ages in another world first. After all, the core should be the contradiction with this world and what it brings to this world. Everything in a story, except for resolving the protagonist's own contradictions (or self-salvation and development) and resolving the contradictions of the world, are actually minor details. ... But the contradictions in your world are very weak, almost the weakest among all the novels of this type that I have read. It makes people doubt whether this world really needs you? Not to mention the need for that advanced weekend break! Did you choose a fairy tale world for your vacation? (Exclusively for leisure workers. Jpg) I won't say how dark the Middle Ages in this type of writing was, how much it needed outsiders to save it, and how many contradictions it had internally and externally! The problem is that this article is much better than normal medieval conditions! How urgent is the world's need for you as a prophet and a Christian? In terms of theocratic power, the original Silver Moon Sect and others actually did well. They prohibited themselves from having armed forces, established medical skills, and relied entirely on their charitable image to build good relationships with people to survive. The only thing that appeared was the appearance of darkness and Xiao Xiaoxiao because of the emergence of paganism. There was no conflict with the local people before! ! ! In terms of royal power, is there such a big demand to send a rabbit girl to the throne? Kind, yes. Stupid, yes. Everything else is gone! There is no shining point, no progress, and a family is just having fun. How can we be the emperor of the mainland or the people's chairman in the future? ! It is completely unnecessary to choose this woman as the beginning and main line of the conflict. I have every reason to believe that if you choose your stepmother or anyone else, the subsequent development can be the same! Not affected at all. Moreover, there is no indication that there are any serious conflicts occurring between the nobility and the people, or other different classes. (I no longer want to mention whether the heroine is progressive in this regard! I feel tired) In terms of human rights, I have already mentioned a lot before, but I still want to say, where is the contradiction! Where does the urgency of solving human rights come from, let alone the need for an advanced double-holiday education. So the protagonist is just trying to improve productivity, but he still doesn't understand how many chapters have passed and he's still a loser! 3. I won't talk about the realistic part. As I originally expected, there was no such part. I insist on saying that there are only two possibilities: 1. Redeeming the souls of workers in the original world only involves extraordinary power, which is feasible; 2. Using resources from other worlds to force the real power to recognize the rights of workers and spread the idea of ​​​​double-education. There is great resistance and is not feasible. This part is not for evaluation, because according to the title and main line outline, the reality is minutiae. This part will be criticized if you write too much.

Overall, it's pretty good food, but it still feels a bit uninteresting. Not as oppressive and infectious as 48. The protagonist seems to have a big hook: infinite resurrection, but in fact this thing is useless. As long as you don't go through time reincarnation, infinite resurrection is just a decoration for the protagonist. In addition, the protagonist is not in the crazy fighting style, and the infinite resurrection is even more inexpressive. Death means that the protagonist's strategy has failed. The protagonist will not die as long as he is always right. This can hardly be regarded as a climax ability. The only use may be to fake death to trick tears. It's a pity that this thing doesn't actually have unlimited resurrection, and it can also be used to fake death in the plot. Because the protagonist can be resurrected infinitely, the overall style of the story does not feel oppressive. In addition, the story is a double penetration. Repeatedly using modern equipment to crush the natives will soon lead to aesthetic fatigue. At first, I thought it was an infinite stream that could change copies to reduce the problem of aesthetic fatigue. Now I feel like this is farming, but farming stories without a sense of oppression always feel a little tasteless. Finally, I have to say that it is a very bad idea to give infinite resurrection to the male strategist. The more invincible the protagonist is, the more enjoyable the story is. Otherwise, the ability of the protagonist, the Supreme God, to have all his wishes come true at the beginning should be standard in Shuangwen. I will still order all of this book, but I feel that the story is still not interesting. I just wonder if the story would be more touching if the protagonist couldn't be resurrected. Isn't the protagonist who helps the rabbit and challenges the dragon even more charming than the protagonist who cannot die now? I hope my words can give Xiao Daizhao some insights.

Xiaodai has opened a new book, accidentally clicked in it, and accidentally stayed up late to read the latest chapter. I suddenly felt empty. Is this all gone? Xiaodai is indeed too short. Turn the page back and click on the character page. It is completely blank. How can this be done? I will write the glorious deeds of the male protagonist! Decisively contribute important events. However, in order to prevent being blocked in the review, I decided to copy a copy to this post. It can also help new readers have a general image of the content of the book. It would be better if I could attract more new readers to the book. After all, a good way to relieve the anxiety of waiting for updates is to get people involved and wait for updates together Opportunities Changes in life often come so suddenly. Li Yu, who was looking for a new job, met a beautiful interviewer. There was a deeper intention hidden behind the questions and answers. A deserted office, a strange atmosphere, and a tight little beauty. The interviewer expressed his interest in Li Yu and invited him to experience the wonderful rabbit hole. Faced with temptation, will Li Yu retreat to the ordinary? Or wanton indulgence? In the end, he lost to the desire in his heart... Three thousand words are omitted here

I feel that the author is very powerful. He could have continued to write about the farming experience in another world in a normal way, with a mediocre word count, bringing in some modern technology from time to time, and casually writing hundreds of chapters. But if that were the case, I would give up the book because it is too bland. Most farming novels are like this now. By the middle of the writing, it will be too repetitive, too bland and watery. Although there is a foreshadowing of the countdown at the beginning, but It's really amazing that the author can suddenly make a turning point in a world-ending crisis. To be honest, I almost couldn't watch it anymore. The sudden world-ending crisis really shocked me and made me continue reading. I also hope that the author's writing skills can withstand it and not write too hard. After all, the painting style of the disaster salvation novel is quite different from the painting style of the time-travel farming novel. It is a test of writing skills. I am looking forward to the follow-up. I have given you the votes. Please add more~

Some advice for those who want to read this book: 1. The content of this book is the same as the introduction, and the author can grasp the rhythm, so you can read it with confidence. 2. Since the author writes books part-time, don't expect him to add more updates. It is recommended to subscribe to the book automatically. Here, it is recommended to read fifty chapters once. 3. Some people may think that Xiaodai's books are a bit bland, so I suggest you see if they suit you.

I have read all of Xiao Dai Zhao's Invincible. This is the first book I have spent money to read in my 10 years of reading.

Although the introduction of this book is a bit discouraging, the descriptions are very detailed and the sense of reality is quite good.

I like Ah-Dai's novels and even more like interacting with the author. Go back to Weibo and read the letter.

What are you writing about? After thinking about it for a long time, I still can't find what I want to express.

A brief comment on the recent plot trend, In the first stage, the board of directors revealed the current situation of the earth to Li Yu, the earth is ushering in the Great Ice Age, human civilization will become extinct, the board of directors decided to abandon the eight One billion, transfer 20 million, And PUA Li Yu "Without us, you would not be in the 20 million" Li Yu was too distraught to make up his mind Second stage, Li Yu started working again and returned to the previous state of working overtime every day. The board of directors sent a special person to monitor Li Yu. Li Yu made up his mind. (Unknown) The board of directors conducted loyalty training for Li Yu. The board of directors accepted it. The results have been achieved, and the years are peaceful (seemingly), Li Yu betrays the enemy in both reality and the other world, Li Yu succeeds in stealing the tower, the people in the other world and Shuangxiujiu get rid of their shackles, Li Yu becomes Prometheus who steals fire. The third stage, Li Yu was brought to justice by the board of directors, The board of directors was still in PUA "You have destroyed human civilization" Li Yu was escorted to the deep sea, Li Yu is about to become Jesus who suffered on behalf of mankind. These plots can be said to be controversial. Some people say that Li Yu is a traitor who destroyed human civilization. There are also people who say that Li Yu has inherited the fire of human civilization. The benevolent sees benevolence and the wise see wisdom. What did Li Yu destroy? Human civilization? But the human body is destined to be terminated by the glacier. What can be passed down is the spirit, history and identity. Are twenty million people more qualified to represent all mankind than two hundred people? Big mistake! Whether there are twenty million or two hundred people, at this moment, they are just one kind of people, those who have abandoned human civilization, fled and deserted. But the difference is that these 20 million people are not simply fleeing. They are deserters who will do whatever it takes to escape, even killing more than a billion innocent people in other worlds. Those who hold high righteousness and shout for morality, let others "die! Die! Die!" For them. Those billions of human beings have never thought of harming anyone, but they will be harmed by 20 million people. For righteousness, kill righteousness This is something Li Yu could not agree with. This is a destined disagreement. It is the break between Prometheus and the gods. So Li Yu was exiled. He will suffer on behalf of the believers of Shuangxiu Sect and the people who were spared from being killed, because God loves the world. Last prediction about the future outcome, You have seen the righteousness of the board of directors in building the ark in order to continue human civilization. But I only saw a group of bereaved wild dogs, fleeing in the face of disasters, abandoning civilization, wishing to have two legs again, While running away with their tails between their legs, they also want to get more from the xylophone. Tear off a few pieces of meat and then run away, You seem to have forgotten that in the face of disaster, in our mythology, there has never been a so-called Noah's Ark, will not bring those so-called God's chosen people, hide in the cabin to pray for the storm to stop, just shiver in a small space, Li Yu, no. Li Yu, he will lead everyone to control the flood, whether it is the eight billion who are ignorant or the twenty million who failed to smuggle in, when the ice and snow dissipate, the sun will eventually rise.

Xiao Daizhao, where the hell have you been~ You weren't even at the starting point~ I've read the updated content twice, give me a hoe! Please update me! ! !

Brother, do you really plan to spend the whole weekend in the Middle Ages? Nothing else, I was simply shocked and a little curious. My grandfather doesn't have a double holiday when farming now. I'm just curious, how are you going to convince your crops to allow farmers to let them grow on Sunday? Brother, you must tell me after you have researched it. I will also let my grandpa and the others have a weekend off.

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I saw Chapter 25 of Volume 3, what should I say? Generally speaking, I like them very much, but the heroine is the only one who made me feel uncomfortable from the first chapter when she appeared. I thought maybe if I endured it longer, it would be better, but the more I watched, the more uncomfortable I became. I'm sorry, I really can't watch it anymore. I really can't stand this rabbit, it's so uncomfortable.

Does this mean that people in other worlds are all very smart? Are you fooled by a daily necessities? If the people in the ruling class of another world have IQs that can only count to ten, then just pretend I didn't ask the question! This book is a farming novel. The difference between the real world and the other world is about 5%. Dragons have appeared in the other world. The author just doesn't mention magic. Is it difficult to write or unable to grasp it? Also, you can't bring weapons during time travel. I don't know if this is to forcefully lengthen the plot, but I always feel like I'm being petty! It's like a child playing house, like a joke. The author restricts the protagonist everywhere. He can't bring weapons. The time-travel company doesn't provide any help. He doesn't even tell the protagonist the precautions for time-travel. He has to explore it by himself. It's dispensable and useless. He never mentions it and doesn't write about magic! It seems like everything in this other world can be explained by modern science!

The moment you become the Lord of the Green Field The whole Green Field is shouting your name Ilea Arreas One day, People who believe in Saturday will be spread across the entire continent, And you, my Party A You will be crowned--

After seeing Chapter 74, I don't plan to read anymore. The author's descriptions of certain aspects are really insightful. For example, the first few chapters have a lot of real-life information, and many people applauded it, but they were tepid after entering the other world, and the comments were also very confusing Because the contrast with the beginning was too strong, I thought it was accidental at first, but after reading it, I found out that it was caused by the author's unstable level. Except for the beginning, the rest of the real world is really indescribable. I didn't jump all the way, but I still can't remember the characteristics of the protagonist's friends. I don't know why I wrote it. Even the two gangsters who had the most serious conflict were written incomprehensibly. Is it just to express the change of the protagonist's thoughts, but in fact, I don't think I can see much change in the protagonist from the book The description of the emotional drama between men and women is really speechless. It's better to learn more and see what other people write In fact, the most uncomfortable thing for me is the narrative method of a hammer and a stick. The incident of Clara's arrest is particularly prominent. From the beginning of the villain's arrest to what I have seen so far, there are at least three chapters describing Clara and being captured by Jin Tong. They are scattered among other chapters and interjected three times. Each time, curiosity is aroused and I take a look. The writing is all about trivial matters. The only thing that can be seen is the desire to express Jin Tong's love. In the world of contemporary novels, he is well-deserved as the master of Cun Zhi As for the water thing that others mentioned, I can only say that the settings are boring, such as the dragon's body structure and biological conjectures, and the foreshadowing is very far-fetched. For example, in the drama performance, the second son's appearance is very unreasonable As I write this, I realize that it is not that I think your intrigue is not well written, but it is okay, but the main writing is being involved in the conspiracy, and the whole novel is gloomy Also, you are a farming novel, what's the positive feedback on the farming novel? I have been working in another world, and if I take real life as an advantage, your description makes people feel very bland. It is not indifferent, or the blandness of life makes people yearn for it, but it is dull and tastes like chewing wax.

As an old bookworm, I have a few comments. Overall, the beginning of this book is really good. I guess it is an autobiography of a social animal? Some imprecision and flaws in characterization are all covered up by this interesting beginning, and this is true until the beginning of the time-travel, until the protagonist helps the rabbit to win the position of lord. The subsequent plot shows that the author is not capable of writing a fantasy world: Homework (Middle Ages, human relations, culture, history, etc.) Is not done well, the story rhythm is too slow and not refreshing, the language is too flat and straightforward, the characters are flat and facial makeup, not to mention that it is written in a fantasy category that is generally difficult to write and popular... In short, it is a pity novel. Maybe I am too demanding? I hope the author will improve. When I read the next book, I felt like I had been away for three days...

The company's settings are a bit lame, with no logistical support at all. Banning weapons is too far-fetched. There is no team, no information exchange, and no rich professional equipment. One faith point is only worth 10 yuan. Can I top up with one million first? Your company can travel across the country and supply basic weapons, equipment, resources, etc. What are the taboos? ? ? The problem of setting becomes more far-fetched the more you explain it later!

Some people say that the latest chapter is fine, but those of us who have a complaining glass heart should take it down. The biggest contradiction is that the cripple was persuaded to quit after making small moves, and then this new character went too far and was rejected. Moreover, the new character's design itself is not likable. Even if there is some foreshadowing, the plot arrangement is very problematic. I will see how the next few chapters will work out. Unless there is a particularly exciting twist, I will abandon it.

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Shennong suggested that the first 1/4 can be eaten, but the latter is not recommended for those without great supernatural powers, as it can easily lead to poisoning on the spot.

If the author doesn't have that knowledge reserve, then don't rely on technology. Why not write about "I'm Thinking About Magic". I don't know if it's uncomfortable for others to see your I-Xun Si Technology, but it's quite uncomfortable for me.

What I saw here in Wangfujing

I think it's great. After reading novels for so many years, my biggest feeling is that if you don't agree with the three views, don't force yourself to cater to them. Many times it will only make everyone uncomfortable. Those who like slow farming will naturally continue reading. If you can't continue reading, don't force it. Some things form the basis of a book. If you question these basic settings, there is a high probability that you are not the audience of this book. Everyone who reads novels has their own set of logic in their mind. If the author's story cannot attract you, or even conflicts with the logic in your mind, it may be a better choice to just abandon the book and leave.

All orders have been tied, let me give my brief opinion. The author's writing style is very good, but his control over the plot is obviously insufficient. Taking the spread of Shuangxiujiao's beliefs as an example, one can clearly feel the author's attempt to suppress the protagonist and prevent him from upgrading too quickly. The protagonist Li Yu preaches in a world similar to the Middle Ages and shows various incredible abilities. However, before the lizard people, no one was willing to convert. Moreover, after Li Yu showed these abilities, those civilians, servants, soldiers, and knights dared to treat Li Yu with normality. They only respected Li Yu because of Ilea. Not to mention showing superpowers in the Middle Ages, even if someone in modern times held a knife next to you, wouldn't you murmur in your heart and stay away from him? The attitude of those people is either respect or fear, and it should not be so plain anyway. Next, let's talk about Li Yu's missionary method. In the previous plot, Li Yu used a flashlight. In my opinion, this is a very good missionary method. Every night a beam of light rises into the sky, and the prophet Merlin spreads and explains the doctrine under the beam of light. I'm afraid that believers won't come in a hurry. This is a genuine miracle that can be repeated! Or, author, do you really intend to let the illiterate serfs in the Middle Ages understand religious philosophy? Don't be ridiculous. Even in modern times, if you ask those who burn incense and worship Buddha what the teachings of the religion they believe in are, the most they will tell you is to persuade people to do good. And this involves the Third Age Company where Li Yu joined. In my opinion, this company is the biggest failure and has almost no effect. The simplest one, what about induction training? Even if you join an ordinary company, you need to go through onboarding training. Such a high-end company didn't even have any training, and Li Yu was directly thrown into a different world. Especially since the main purpose of the company is to mine faith, aren't you afraid of going bankrupt if you are so slow? The reason given by the company is even more ridiculous. It wants to train Li Yu. Haha, the boss of the Chinese Academy of Sciences wants to train a junior high school dropout and then do nothing, expecting him to be self-taught. Is there such a culture? Training without even teaching the basics?

I felt something was wrong when I saw the board of directors dealing with the detective. I read a little bit of the last volume and didn't plan to read it any further After reading the ending, all I can say is thank you for not being disgusted😅