Mortals Cultivate Immortality and Get a Fertile Field at the Beginning

I vomited when I saw the protagonist taking the initiative to give Han Li the Qingyuan Sword Technique. Han Li took the initiative to come to the door, and his meaning was already obvious. The protagonist also took the initiative to kneel down and lick it, and obediently gave him the technique without asking for the refining method of the Qingzhu Bee Cloud Sword. How come your bow and arrow magic weapon is so good? You are so low-spirited that you don't even know it, and you fawn over Han Li. In the whole book of mortals, have you ever seen Han Li have a heart-to-heart relationship with that person, or who can take advantage of Han Li? This is not how you make friends, right? I am so helpless to complain.

This book is a bit of a gimmick. The title of the book is "Farm". It was originally written as a space novel, but it turned out to be a storage + farming (hook-up type). There is almost no description of space development. The whole book is about cutting off the opportunity of the protagonist. It is suggested that the title of the book should be changed to something similar to "Jiaohu"

Why do these authors like to mutter to themselves so much?

If you dare to directly propose a trade with the Millennium Spiritual Grass to Old Devil, you must be underestimating Old Devil's suspicious character! And your plug-in itself can produce Millennium Spirit Grass, so why bother? Wasted!

The author must be a novice, the main character talks to himself a lot, like an idiot! Author: In the real world, would you stay alone in your room and talk to yourself? Just pretend to talk nonsense to the air.

The first time I saw a mortal fan started to build the foundation at the early stage of the tenth level of Qi training, he almost destroyed the protagonist. The protagonist kept crying about being poor. Is such an awesome plug-in meant to be watched? I was extremely speechless.

You, basically no one would care about giving Han Li a chance, and why are you so cowardly after being so big?

There are several reasons why mortal fans are most likely to be criticized: The first is that many old readers are disgusted when they see Bloody Forbidden Land and Tui Nangong Wan; The second is that the protagonist's golden finger is very big, but his cultivation speed does not meet his conditions; the third is that he can only copy the plot of the original work and cannot write without it; the fourth is the way he gets along with Han Li, which is the most difficult thing to deal with. It is difficult to grasp the scale. If you give him too many resources, he will easily be called an old slave. If you give him nothing, true fans will not be happy and will not subscribe. You can refer to those few high-quality books to see how their protagonists get along with Han Li.

The protagonist likes to use the Sky Eye Technique to look at people randomly. Forget it if he is practicing Qi. He doesn't know how to pull the foundation building skill. What's wrong with this spell🐮B

Blindly guess the plot of the forbidden area and use the ink dragon bag to confuse Nangong Wan.

The author's practice, and the accompanying magical powers and magic weapons, are the result of Zhenchun's lack of cultural background. The Chinese language is not good enough. The whimsy is not enough. The well-informed knowledge is not enough. That's why we can create something that looks low at first glance. No matter it's the name, supernatural powers, supporting equipment, or form of expression, no one said a word when they heard and looked at it. It's not the same thing as what's in the original work. I don't dare to call him the God Transformation Technique.

The narrative feels a bit nagging, and the main character I wrote gave me the feeling that the main character is not smart enough and cannot be described. This is especially true when listening to the book rather than reading the book.

Open a hook that's bigger than a small bottle, and you'll end up robbing after entering V. . .

This fan fiction is too clumsy, it's already 200 chapters and I'm still hiding in Tiannan 😅

This book can't be read without thinking

The protagonist is a bit of a money-splitting boy. He will give pills to anyone he knows. Xin Ruyin and Qi Yunxiao gave hundreds of bottles of pills and foundation-building pills. The protagonist still has resources too easily. The old devil is not that kind to Mu Peiling.

When writing fan fiction, you must maximize your profits. Xin Ruyin can ask for it, as long as he solves the Dragon Crying Body, but it is easy to solve. The Hehuan Sect has the Bright Moon Absorbing Yin Technique. There must be some who can absorb Yang. Just suck out the Yang Qi from the Dragon Crying Body. The early formation is too buggy. Song Yu can also ask for it. He also has Tianlinggen.

When the protagonist goes to the Bloody Forbidden Land, the most beneficial thing is to keep a portion of the medicinal materials for refining Foundation Establishment Pills, and then cultivate them indefinitely, refine them into Foundation Establishment Pills, and sell them. By then, the protagonist has already reached the Foundation Establishment stage and is not afraid of those calamity cultivators. After all, there are too few Foundation Establishment Pills in this world of immortality cultivation.

The mortal heroines are Nangong, Yuan Yao and Zi Ling. Yes, unlike Chen Qiaoqian, even if she is lucky enough to form a pill and a baby, she will die and there is no need to accept it.

If you fail, why don't you learn skills by yourself and use resources to train others? Han Li has always been a puppet of the alchemy formation talisman he learned on his own. Do we still need to cultivate a pair and take them to the spirit world?

Dear Taoist friends, this book is now in the new book recommendation period, and it is very necessary to read it! Please use your golden fingers to jump to the latest chapter and scroll to the last page. The author is here, thank you all fellow Taoists in advance! 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

The pace is too slow. The author can speed up the pace, otherwise you probably won't be able to write about the spiritual world with 1,000 photos.

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Thank you all book friends for your support and guidance! I will adopt some of the pointers and suggestions mentioned in the book based on rationality. Also, new books are recommended for reading! Please recommend! All book friends, please use your little hands to make a fortune and read the latest chapter! Thank you to all book friends for supporting this work!

I worship the master and also follow the path of fellow practitioners. 🙏 New guy, new work. Mortals: Starting from the Chen family. I hope you can give me some advice.